Horse Eden : Art feedback

09:15:22 Willow ~ KNN Breeder

Angels
I would find a different boy

Angels angels

09:14:25 [1k+ brindles] Angel

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Does she have enough hrt to cover him or should I find a different stud/use a glass?

09:13:17 Willow ~ KNN Breeder

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Pretty quest foal

09:11:37 Willow ~ KNN Breeder

I've always done KNNs on this account, but I'm so tired of dealing with them. The only thing holding me back is I'm not sure what breed I would do

Sweet Valley

09:11:11 Anna/Jewel

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I'm thinking I may have a chance next RO if I use the stud that is up for breeding. (Caldron Spl isnt mine hes up for breeding tho)

Willow Grove

09:09:19 Stalker of Chat

Willow
Ouch >.> I get it though, you just gotta keep trying, eventually theyll like you back! My AAs are being like that with me right now

Willow Grove

09:08:15 Stalker of Chat

DD
Could I run a match by you? I put it in chat once or twice recently but id love another opinion, im both excited and nervous to try it lol

Sweet Valley

09:06:59 Anna/Jewel

I am about to give up on trying for a horse with a W
😭😭😭😭😭😭

Willow Grove

09:06:27 Stalker of Chat

DD
Oh dear XD
Same! Its crazy how it changed so much

Yess, thatd be epic *^*

09:05:35 Willow ~ KNN Breeder

I'm about to give up on KNNs, >-<

Angels angels

09:04:10 [1k+ brindles] Angel

Willow
That isn't prl it is homo creme :)

Rising Stars Stable

09:02:47 Willow ~ AA Breeder

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I can't tell if I like Prl or not

Dash and Duchess

09:01:26 DD | ~Squizard~

Willow, thank you!! I'm crossing my fingers she'll have a good 7 and I'll get a fancy eprl Ch Tobi 🤩

Dash and Duchess

09:00:49 DD | ~Squizard~

Willow, it was! (Minus getting lost on the buses and passing the same basilica about 6 times xD) Truly >.> I do not feel those 5 years lol! It's crazy how much it changed the world though, even now I still see a lot of things that started in Covid remaining lol

Willow Grove

08:59:39 Stalker of Chat

DD
Ohh I like that, its shiny 👀 I wonder what her week 7 will look like

Willow Grove

08:58:08 Stalker of Chat

DD
Absolutely lol

Thats great! Sounds like it was a lot of fun :D And yea, covid sucked XP does NOT feel like it was 5 years ago already lol

Angels angels

08:57:23 [1k+ brindles] Angel

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Can't decide if I want to use a hrt glass with this or yolo and filly straw?

Wisteria Run Farm

08:56:19 Solar/Ria

I'd just skip it, Anna

And ooo, looking like some promising matches!

Dash and Duchess

08:55:58 DD | ~Squizard~

Ooo we showing off 2yo matches 👀
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Dash and Duchess

08:55:00 DD | ~Squizard~

Willow, We love the weekend xD our savior xD
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It was amazing! I went with a group of friends and we had a blast xD It's also a jubilee year so we saw and met so many people! Aw that sucks you couldn't go, covid really did screw stuff up, it feels like yesterday >.>

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09:15:22 Willow ~ KNN Breeder

Angels
I would find a different boy

Angels angels

09:14:25 [1k+ brindles] Angel

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Does she have enough hrt to cover him or should I find a different stud/use a glass?

09:13:17 Willow ~ KNN Breeder

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Pretty quest foal

09:11:37 Willow ~ KNN Breeder

I've always done KNNs on this account, but I'm so tired of dealing with them. The only thing holding me back is I'm not sure what breed I would do

Sweet Valley

09:11:11 Anna/Jewel

-HEE Click-

I'm thinking I may have a chance next RO if I use the stud that is up for breeding. (Caldron Spl isnt mine hes up for breeding tho)

Willow Grove

09:09:19 Stalker of Chat

Willow
Ouch >.> I get it though, you just gotta keep trying, eventually theyll like you back! My AAs are being like that with me right now

Willow Grove

09:08:15 Stalker of Chat

DD
Could I run a match by you? I put it in chat once or twice recently but id love another opinion, im both excited and nervous to try it lol

Sweet Valley

09:06:59 Anna/Jewel

I am about to give up on trying for a horse with a W
😭😭😭😭😭😭

Willow Grove

09:06:27 Stalker of Chat

DD
Oh dear XD
Same! Its crazy how it changed so much

Yess, thatd be epic *^*

09:05:35 Willow ~ KNN Breeder

I'm about to give up on KNNs, >-<

Angels angels

09:04:10 [1k+ brindles] Angel

Willow
That isn't prl it is homo creme :)

Rising Stars Stable

09:02:47 Willow ~ AA Breeder

-HEE Click-
I can't tell if I like Prl or not

Dash and Duchess

09:01:26 DD | ~Squizard~

Willow, thank you!! I'm crossing my fingers she'll have a good 7 and I'll get a fancy eprl Ch Tobi 🤩

Dash and Duchess

09:00:49 DD | ~Squizard~

Willow Grove

08:59:39 Stalker of Chat

DD
Ohh I like that, its shiny 👀 I wonder what her week 7 will look like

Willow Grove

08:58:08 Stalker of Chat

DD
Absolutely lol

Thats great! Sounds like it was a lot of fun :D And yea, covid sucked XP does NOT feel like it was 5 years ago already lol

Angels angels

08:57:23 [1k+ brindles] Angel

-HEE Click-
Can't decide if I want to use a hrt glass with this or yolo and filly straw?

Wisteria Run Farm

08:56:19 Solar/Ria

I'd just skip it, Anna

And ooo, looking like some promising matches!

Dash and Duchess

08:55:58 DD | ~Squizard~

Ooo we showing off 2yo matches 👀
-HEE Click-

Dash and Duchess

08:55:00 DD | ~Squizard~

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June 13, 2018 05:50 AM

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Here’s an example of my art

http://i63.tinypic.com/oax2c3.jpg
I was wondering if anyone could give me feedback and ways to improve

Edited at June 13, 2018 05:50 AM by Kirralee stud farm

June 13, 2018 06:52 PM

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Wonderful job cutting out your horse! Maybe smudge the horse a little bit less to reserve some of the quality and muscle tone.

Use Brightness/Contrast, Colour Balance to help blend your horses into the background more and make them look as if they belong. (If you use PS then you can play around with Auto Tone/Colour/Contrast)

Horses need shadows ;) Shadows, though you may not realize it at first, make a huge difference in how real you picture looks.

Maybe try adding some highlights/lowlights to help your horse pop.

Most artists also like to redraw eyes to give them a little more life.

Hope this helps! Also, there are tons of tutorials on DA that can help you improve! You are doing very good!

June 14, 2018 12:48 AM

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Thanks

June 14, 2018 01:29 AM

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It's a great precut. It is, however, overly smudged in my opinion. Much like Trinity said, not smudging as much preserves detail.

Adjust the hue/brightness so it blends better with the background

Adding shadows and drawing on hair and highlights will give it a ton more detail also.

Great job

June 14, 2018 03:48 AM

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June 14, 2018 04:16 AM

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http://i63.tinypic.com/30kvfb7.jpg

Is that better

Edited at June 14, 2018 06:53 AM by Kirralee stud farm

June 14, 2018 07:17 AM

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What art program do you use?

If the shadow stays the sharp the you need to have it outline the horse more. I think in this case the shadow can be softer. Try adding darker spots and softer sides a bit more.

Also don't blur the background as much. Keep the foreground sharp and the background slightly blurred if you are going to do it.

I think the horse could still use a little less smudging.

June 15, 2018 03:13 AM