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Siren Sound Estates

06:13:57 S҉ Sem

In his Breed, I have to add.

Siren Sound Estates

06:11:20 S҉ Sem

Thanks, Lily. Pretty and #1 Bravery for life.

Calela Eventing

06:02:30 Cali

No problem!

06:01:52

Thank you so much. It has been driving me mad

Calela Eventing

06:01:26 Cali

Community-games

06:00:30

Where do I find the mini games?

Sport Pony Island

05:59:10

Ya'll, look at this !!

-HEE Click-

05:57:51 Lily/Alpine

Aww that sucks Sem :(
such a pretty boy

Siren Sound Estates

05:55:18 S҉ Sem

-HEE Click-
Great. Now I'm sad.

05:54:49 Lily/Alpine

Also, you can use store credits that you earn from quests in the Store.
Services>Store>Items

05:53:52 Lily/Alpine

Sport Pony Island
In the vet's office under services :)

Sport Pony Island

05:52:24

Rose, how do you do a lens of time??

Mirage

05:49:55

-HEE Click-
Would this be a good match?

05:48:29 Rose/Goldy

Thank you <3

Sport Pony Island

05:48:21

How do you do that?

05:47:36

very pretty

05:46:23 Rose/Goldy

Her lens of time *-*

-HEE Click-

Kanenoki Estate

05:43:40 Noki

so called art?

05:42:47 River

Ah, art. I don't go near the so called art on here.

Sport Pony Island

05:41:47

Rose, that is truly amazing

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Siren Sound Estates

06:13:57 S҉ Sem

In his Breed, I have to add.

Siren Sound Estates

06:11:20 S҉ Sem

Thanks, Lily. Pretty and #1 Bravery for life.

Calela Eventing

06:02:30 Cali

No problem!

06:01:52

Thank you so much. It has been driving me mad

Calela Eventing

06:01:26 Cali

Community-games

06:00:30

Where do I find the mini games?

Sport Pony Island

05:59:10

Ya'll, look at this !!

-HEE Click-

05:57:51 Lily/Alpine

Aww that sucks Sem :(
such a pretty boy

Siren Sound Estates

05:55:18 S҉ Sem

-HEE Click-
Great. Now I'm sad.

05:54:49 Lily/Alpine

Also, you can use store credits that you earn from quests in the Store.
Services>Store>Items

05:53:52 Lily/Alpine

Sport Pony Island
In the vet's office under services :)

Sport Pony Island

05:52:24

Rose, how do you do a lens of time??

Mirage

05:49:55

-HEE Click-
Would this be a good match?

05:48:29 Rose/Goldy

Thank you <3

Sport Pony Island

05:48:21

How do you do that?

05:47:36

very pretty

05:46:23 Rose/Goldy

Her lens of time *-*

-HEE Click-

Kanenoki Estate

05:43:40 Noki

so called art?

05:42:47 River

Ah, art. I don't go near the so called art on here.

Sport Pony Island

05:41:47

Rose, that is truly amazing

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March 11, 2018 09:35 PM

Posts: 1347
#136184
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https://image.ibb.co/ejyrTS/Untitled.png

So this is my most recent image. I played with it for an hour or two, and besides the eyes, I am rather happy with it.

However, this is only my 5th or 6th piece, so I know there must be room for improvement. I am looking for suggestions to improve my style of art, as well as comments on the piece as a whole.

Please, constructive, reasonable suggestions only. I am still very new to the art world :P

March 11, 2018 10:57 PM

Hallucination Manor

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I would make the feet look more grounded in the grass if you want examples of what I mean you can PM me :D

March 11, 2018 11:10 PM

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I can see what you mean there. Adding some grass to the hooves would've helped.

March 11, 2018 11:14 PM

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Looove it. :D My advice would be using the eraser tool to clean up the lines on the legs! Also smudging the tail in the direction the hair would be going or creating individual strands (tedious though)

It looks amazing, what a great start. <3

March 11, 2018 11:36 PM

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I agree, the legs were looking a bit messy the more I looked at it. I attempted to draw individual strands, I just think the smudging went weird. Maybe I should go on more than one layer? I just find then it's tedious to smudge :P

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