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Ellsworths Eden
07:27:53 
Hello Myth
Mythological
07:15:26 Crowley
Sunni
Tim needs some common sense 😓
Mythological
07:12:46 Crowley
Hey Ells
Bluegrass Racing
07:12:08 Blue
Always love when RF gives me a nice and pretty surprise when I just want to be done with breeding.

-HEE Click-
Sunni
07:07:29 Sunni bunny
Why is my dog the only one in the family with some common sense xc.
His the only one who didn't dig up the kitten and try and eat it.
Yes I know that's normal for dogs but god ....
He sat by the gate close to me knowing the other 3 was gonna get in big trouble.
Eagle Creek
07:04:28 Eagle
Or I'll have to breed a week late witch isn't too bad
Eagle Creek
07:02:51 Eagle
I bought the straws I need for RO, but I'm not sure I'll be able to afford a Sven. So I might just save the embryos for september.
Aura Show Horses
06:58:16 Peacock/ Pea
really dont wana free range so im trying to sell.
Aura Show Horses
06:57:45 Peacock/ Pea
ha, its hard!
Ellsworths Eden
06:57:17 
I can't imagine downsizing now lol. XD
Aura Show Horses
06:56:13 Peacock/ Pea
Trying to downsize when all your horses are your favorite is tough!0:);
Barbury Estates
06:53:12 Amelia
Whoops meant to do !
Barbury Estates
06:52:59 Amelia
Thank you,
Fantasy Horses
06:52:37 Fantasy | Fanta
Congrats Amelia!!
Barbury Estates
06:51:35 Amelia
It’s my anniversary!!!!!
Fantasy Horses
06:32:32 Fantasy | Fanta
I have everything for RO but a filly J med 😭 These quests aren't giving me enough store credits, and I'm broke anyway :'(
I guess I can live without the filly one, but I don't want another EWE combo colt. :/
Mythological
06:27:27 Crowley
Lol
Prismatic
06:26:20 Prism/Chrome/Rainy
I was trying to catch a Sabino. Wellp, I'll accept this xD

-HEE Click-
Mythological
06:26:07 Crowley
Frey is my SA by the way.
Mythological
06:24:43 Crowley
Sorry I poofed dog skinned his ear.

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Ellsworths Eden
07:27:53 
Hello Myth
Mythological
07:15:26 Crowley
Sunni
Tim needs some common sense 😓
Mythological
07:12:46 Crowley
Hey Ells
Bluegrass Racing
07:12:08 Blue
Always love when RF gives me a nice and pretty surprise when I just want to be done with breeding.

-HEE Click-
Sunni
07:07:29 Sunni bunny
Why is my dog the only one in the family with some common sense xc.
His the only one who didn't dig up the kitten and try and eat it.
Yes I know that's normal for dogs but god ....
He sat by the gate close to me knowing the other 3 was gonna get in big trouble.
Eagle Creek
07:04:28 Eagle
Or I'll have to breed a week late witch isn't too bad
Eagle Creek
07:02:51 Eagle
I bought the straws I need for RO, but I'm not sure I'll be able to afford a Sven. So I might just save the embryos for september.
Aura Show Horses
06:58:16 Peacock/ Pea
really dont wana free range so im trying to sell.
Aura Show Horses
06:57:45 Peacock/ Pea
ha, its hard!
Ellsworths Eden
06:57:17 
I can't imagine downsizing now lol. XD
Aura Show Horses
06:56:13 Peacock/ Pea
Trying to downsize when all your horses are your favorite is tough!0:);
Barbury Estates
06:53:12 Amelia
Whoops meant to do !
Barbury Estates
06:52:59 Amelia
Thank you,
Fantasy Horses
06:52:37 Fantasy | Fanta
Congrats Amelia!!
Barbury Estates
06:51:35 Amelia
It’s my anniversary!!!!!
Fantasy Horses
06:32:32 Fantasy | Fanta
I have everything for RO but a filly J med 😭 These quests aren't giving me enough store credits, and I'm broke anyway :'(
I guess I can live without the filly one, but I don't want another EWE combo colt. :/
Mythological
06:27:27 Crowley
Lol
Prismatic
06:26:20 Prism/Chrome/Rainy
I was trying to catch a Sabino. Wellp, I'll accept this xD

-HEE Click-
Mythological
06:26:07 Crowley
Frey is my SA by the way.
Mythological
06:24:43 Crowley
Sorry I poofed dog skinned his ear.

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Art Critique c: August 7, 2024 04:45 AM


Twin Flames
 
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Hey everyone!

I am wanting to improve on my art so thoguht I would reach out to the community for some advice. I am looking for some in depth critique on anything and everything.

Some things I am currently trying to improve:
Lighting & hair ~ I also use Ibis Paint x

Feel free to pick the art apart :3 and thank you in advance <3

Here are some recent examples:


Edited at August 7, 2024 04:48 AM by Twin Flames
Art Critique c: August 13, 2024 02:53 AM


Twin Flames
 
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Another recent example :)

Art Critique c: August 17, 2024 09:32 AM


Cherry Creek Ranch
 
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I have no criticism, just came here to say these are AMAZING
Art Critique c: September 1, 2024 10:09 PM


Marigold Ridge
 
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First of all, I gotta say these are absolutely incredible!!! Your composition is on point and I love the horse in a bar!
As for advice, something that stood out to me were the horse's shadows. That sharp kind of shadow is what might happen if the horse were standing on a hard, reflective surface, not in a more nature-y landscape.
To determine where the shadows should lie, look at the surrounding bg and light sources for clues. For example, a horse standing in clear, still water would likely have a more defined shadow, possibly with part of its reflection, but the water would give it a kind of ripple affect. At other times, the shadow might not be more than a smudge, especially if there's very little light. If there is a very strong light source in the piece, the shadows would be longer and more defined, but would still have softer edges. I'd say for most of your examples, the shadow would mainly be a darkened smudge underneath the horse.
Something that might help is to see what your own shadow looks like at various times of the day and in various settings, and then apply it to your art.
Whoo! That was long, but I hope it's helpful!! Your lighting is overall very strong (especially in pieces 3 & 4 which I ADORE!!)
Do tell me if you've got other questions! You're doing awesome <333
Art Critique c: September 5, 2024 09:17 PM


KPH Equestrian
 
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First, I wanna say that I LOVE your body prep and the way you do hair! I think the most important thing is the darker shadows under the belly.
With some of these pieces, the lighting is more(for want of a better word) distilled, so the shadows should be softer. In the first piece(blue one), there's light in the water, which would be illuminating the belly slightly. Try lowering the opacity of your deeper shadow layer a bit and let the horse's detail show through ;)
The next piece(forest one) same thing- there isn't super strong lighting coming from anywhere in prticular, so the shadows will be much softer. Again, play with the opacity of your layers.
I really like the lighting in the blue/green piece(4th one), it matches the background very well<3
The next one, in water, same thing- light reflects off of water and back onto the horse, so not only would the shadows be lighter, there would be some subtle lighting over top of them.
Next one, the bartender, the lighting is spot on! Only thing I could think of is adding a shadow under the cup on his hindquarters, and possibly a reflection on the shiny countertop.

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