Horse Eden Eventing Game
Horse Eden Eventing Game


Year: 192   Season: Summer   
$: 0
Forecast: Showers Off and On
Forecast:
Sat 02:02am  
Stables Online:  46 
Chatbox
Port Royal Equines
01:38:10 ISH Bravery 4 Sale!
-HEE Click-
4 days left to bid!

-HEE Click-
Freezer cleanout. Hugely discounted straws from my boys. Retired ABLB and Bravery straws included.

-HEE Click-
EEE+ broods starting at 4k. Some are W producers. Will you take a chance?
pandemoniu_m
01:14:39 pheezy
-HEE Click-
Taking offers on this 9yo WILD Chestnut TB Mare. Wanting her gone! Has produced multiple AD W combos.
Highly considering any offers over 100k, but others welcome!

DM me!
Will also consider offers on embryos/breedings from her, but I'd prefer to sell her to someone who's utilize her to her fullest potential better than I can with my budget 😅
Alpine Acres
12:37:10 Lily
PEW TB colt up for sale, only 1k!
-HEE Click-
Foal Me Once Farms
11:57:53 Roan🦋⃤
One, 1 month upgrade left for grabs!
EB is HIGHLY preferred!
Pm me! </3
Tambo Valley Estate
11:47:38 KNNs & Bravery
- WC Bravery Auction
-HEE Click-

- KNN Broods -
#23 #89 #6 available to yr 193
-HEE Click-

- For Sale -
EWW 5yo KNN Mare - open to offers
-HEE Click-
Kepler Wings
11:28:12 Dae
SH Mares for sale!
#74 SHLB WWW
-HEE Click-

Homo Spl WEW (WWW producer)
-HEE Click-

Other WWE combos for sale here -HEE Click-
Boulder Creek
11:17:20 
A Different Type of
Art Contest

- Racehorses must be entered by Sunday

Off To The Races
-HEE Click-
Snitches' Stitches
10:58:27 Snitch
Sherpa maps and rusty bits restocked in my shop -HEE Click-
Platinum Plaits
10:57:09 Payton
-HEE Click- *
Platinum Plaits
10:57:00 Payton
Barn clear-out! Accepting offers on all horses in this barn. All are rated EEW+.


You must be a registered member for more
than 1 day before you can use our chatbox.



Rules   Hide
You are in: Sales
View Main Chat
Quests
Horse Eden Eventing Game
Chatbox
Port Royal Equines
01:38:10 ISH Bravery 4 Sale!
-HEE Click-
4 days left to bid!

-HEE Click-
Freezer cleanout. Hugely discounted straws from my boys. Retired ABLB and Bravery straws included.

-HEE Click-
EEE+ broods starting at 4k. Some are W producers. Will you take a chance?
pandemoniu_m
01:14:39 pheezy
-HEE Click-
Taking offers on this 9yo WILD Chestnut TB Mare. Wanting her gone! Has produced multiple AD W combos.
Highly considering any offers over 100k, but others welcome!

DM me!
Will also consider offers on embryos/breedings from her, but I'd prefer to sell her to someone who's utilize her to her fullest potential better than I can with my budget 😅
Alpine Acres
12:37:10 Lily
PEW TB colt up for sale, only 1k!
-HEE Click-
Foal Me Once Farms
11:57:53 Roan🦋⃤
One, 1 month upgrade left for grabs!
EB is HIGHLY preferred!
Pm me! </3
Tambo Valley Estate
11:47:38 KNNs & Bravery
- WC Bravery Auction
-HEE Click-

- KNN Broods -
#23 #89 #6 available to yr 193
-HEE Click-

- For Sale -
EWW 5yo KNN Mare - open to offers
-HEE Click-
Kepler Wings
11:28:12 Dae
SH Mares for sale!
#74 SHLB WWW
-HEE Click-

Homo Spl WEW (WWW producer)
-HEE Click-

Other WWE combos for sale here -HEE Click-
Boulder Creek
11:17:20 
A Different Type of
Art Contest

- Racehorses must be entered by Sunday

Off To The Races
-HEE Click-
Snitches' Stitches
10:58:27 Snitch
Sherpa maps and rusty bits restocked in my shop -HEE Click-
Platinum Plaits
10:57:09 Payton
-HEE Click- *
Platinum Plaits
10:57:00 Payton
Barn clear-out! Accepting offers on all horses in this barn. All are rated EEW+.


You must be a registered member for more
than 1 day before you can use our chatbox.






Refresh


Forums

→ Horse Eden is a fun game! Sign Up Now!

My Subscriptions
My Bookmarks
My Topics
Latest Topics
Following

Forums > Art Shops > Art Help
   1   ..    15    16    17    18    19   ..   201 

The Official Art Critique Forum November 11, 2019 01:08 PM


Stonecroft
 
Posts: 147
#487061
Give Award


Cassa Belle said:
https://i.postimg.cc/bvR6qWRR/Untitled18-20191106181912.png

:D



For this piece, I would recommend bringing a light source in (the lightning provides one, so you can play off that) and highlight parts of the horse that are affected by the lighting. As it is, the horse is dark and a little hard to make out. You can fix this by adding small highlights or lightening the whole piece a bit to bring the horse to the center of attention. Personally, I would add *light* highlights to the nose, neck, and *slightly* stronger highlights to the back, and a few on the tail.
The Official Art Critique Forum November 11, 2019 01:15 PM

Former Stable
 
Posts: 0
#487064
Give Award


BreezieM30w RIDs said:


Oak valley said:
https://i.postimg.cc/bvNLcD60/Untitled127.png

My first attempt at lineart, thoughts??


It looks good! Personally I would use a blue tool so that the shading is not so harsh. Also, be sure to clean up afterwards using an eraser. It looks a bit messy since the coloring goes outside the lines.

Thank you! Lol I was being a bit lazy by not cleaning it up. :)
The Official Art Critique Forum November 11, 2019 01:19 PM


Bridle Rock
 
Posts: 3730
#487069
Give Award
https://i.postimg.cc/Qd904Zb1/Untitled111-min.jpg

Thoughts?? Sorry the quality kinda sucks XD
The Official Art Critique Forum November 11, 2019 01:41 PM


Wolfcreek
 
Posts: 370
#487088
Give Award


BreezieM30w RIDs said:
https://i.postimg.cc/Qd904Zb1/Untitled111-min.jpg

Thoughts?? Sorry the quality kinda sucks XD


Nice composition! The first thing I see is off is the lighting. The direction of the light don't match on the horse and on the background. You can fix it easily by mirroring either the horse or the bg. Also try to add more flow to the mane and tail, those look a bit stiff.
The Official Art Critique Forum November 11, 2019 02:04 PM


Sunset Grove Farm
 
Posts: 7336
#487106
Give Award
https://horseeden.com/forums.php?f=17&t=33061
Looking for some help please <3
(i haven't forgotten. About critique just doing some stuff atm, will get to them ASAP)
The Official Art Critique Forum November 12, 2019 05:57 PM


Tranquility
 
Posts: 4522
#488035
Give Award


Yellowtail Ranch said:
https://i.ibb.co/ngcFyyG/Kia.jpg

I use ibis paint but any help/advice would be appreciated. :D

I used this image for reference to the pose but not the color. The color was all me as well as painting. This was my first time doing something like this but it was very refreshing from the normal manips so I plan on making more.

https://www.deviantart.com/blissfully-blind/art/Horse-Stock-53-162205611

I didn't like how the original mane and tail was so I brought them to more attention. I don't exactly like the super wispy mane so I just did the basic mane/tail if ya know what I mean. I did the markings after I shaded and highlighted which I wholly regretted. Lol. It was so much extra shading/highlighting. Yes this horse is supposed to be mostly realistic with the exception of markings.

Is there anything you don't like about it? Anything you love? What should I try to improve? Any tips and tricks that could help? I do plan on making more only this time with more realistic mane/tail. Any way to paint manes/tails?

Thankyou in advance! :D


Any more thoughts on this?
The Official Art Critique Forum November 16, 2019 12:11 AM


Tanglewood
 
Posts: 10108
#489722
Give Award
https://i.postimg.cc/3NZHNyJh/Ignitor-ed-commission.png

Thoughts? Sorry, I know the lighting sucks
The Official Art Critique Forum November 18, 2019 10:42 AM


Bridle Rock
 
Posts: 3730
#491016
Give Award
https://i.postimg.cc/C1bWkpY3/3-F3-A7-AD2-85-C1-4-E77-A873-82-DCF62-E95-F5.jpg

Thoughts??
The Official Art Critique Forum November 18, 2019 11:09 AM


Tanglewood
 
Posts: 10108
#491023
Give Award


Breezie Rose said:
https://i.postimg.cc/C1bWkpY3/3-F3-A7-AD2-85-C1-4-E77-A873-82-DCF62-E95-F5.jpg

Thoughts??


I like it :) The quality could be improved but that probably isn't your mistake. Also, the fairy lights seem to appear from nowhere. Maybe make them into a ring around the horse's neck?
The Official Art Critique Forum November 18, 2019 04:07 PM


Toxic Carnage
 
Posts: 3182
#491230
Give Award


Tanglewood said:
https://i.postimg.cc/3NZHNyJh/Ignitor-ed-commission.png

Thoughts? Sorry, I know the lighting sucks


It looks good. I would give the horse a more Orange ish lighting or over shade if you know what I mean.

Forums > Art Shops > Art Help
   1   ..    15    16    17    18    19   ..   201 

Refresh