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Tamarack Mountain
06:15:15 Opal
he is pretty fancy -HEE Click-
Tamarack Mountain
06:12:40 Opal
this is old lol -HEE Click-
Thunder~Country
06:07:13 
He getting so old -HEE Click-
SUMMER OF PEARLS
02:50:50 
bye
SUMMER OF PEARLS
02:40:42 
jeepers
SUMMER OF PEARLS
02:17:58 
i am trying to put things i will not use ever into the shop. BUT every time i try it says "ooops this item is alrready in a shop" DOES this mean, if someone else is selling it, that I cannot sell it too?
Elks
02:15:37 Elky
Sting
Thank you! Was trying to get a dapple grey (if I even can with her genetics) and got that so settled haha
Narran Park
02:11:39 Sting
That looks lovely on her Elky
Elks
02:10:44 Elky
Newbie to the stables -HEE Click- <3
Narran Park
02:03:03 Sting
yay Fish!
TheLandOfFishAndFish
02:01:11 Fish
I have 90 capture tokens, 26 pirate maps, 18 sherpa maps and 7 adventurer's maps saved for capture day
Narran Park
01:54:56 Sting
I am tired of Showing Quests.
Narran Park
01:49:08 Sting
Nice!
ZequineZ
01:47:19 ZEZ - ZZ
Haven’t really decided, I’m not super breed focussed myself but I’m thinking I’ll try for quarter horses
Narran Park
01:46:33 Sting
What breed will you catch ZZ?
Nightingales Ridge
01:46:28 
I've only got 4 maps...I will keep tryna hustle em haha
ZequineZ
01:45:08 ZEZ - ZZ
This will be my first time actually taking advantage of capture day, gonna spend all my ebs XD
Nightingales Ridge
01:44:25 
Very cool :)
Narran Park
01:43:31 Sting
Capture day is my Favourite!
Narran Park
01:43:17 Sting
:D

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Tamarack Mountain
06:15:15 Opal
he is pretty fancy -HEE Click-
Tamarack Mountain
06:12:40 Opal
this is old lol -HEE Click-
Thunder~Country
06:07:13 
He getting so old -HEE Click-
SUMMER OF PEARLS
02:50:50 
bye
SUMMER OF PEARLS
02:40:42 
jeepers
SUMMER OF PEARLS
02:17:58 
i am trying to put things i will not use ever into the shop. BUT every time i try it says "ooops this item is alrready in a shop" DOES this mean, if someone else is selling it, that I cannot sell it too?
Elks
02:15:37 Elky
Sting
Thank you! Was trying to get a dapple grey (if I even can with her genetics) and got that so settled haha
Narran Park
02:11:39 Sting
That looks lovely on her Elky
Elks
02:10:44 Elky
Newbie to the stables -HEE Click- <3
Narran Park
02:03:03 Sting
yay Fish!
TheLandOfFishAndFish
02:01:11 Fish
I have 90 capture tokens, 26 pirate maps, 18 sherpa maps and 7 adventurer's maps saved for capture day
Narran Park
01:54:56 Sting
I am tired of Showing Quests.
Narran Park
01:49:08 Sting
Nice!
ZequineZ
01:47:19 ZEZ - ZZ
Haven’t really decided, I’m not super breed focussed myself but I’m thinking I’ll try for quarter horses
Narran Park
01:46:33 Sting
What breed will you catch ZZ?
Nightingales Ridge
01:46:28 
I've only got 4 maps...I will keep tryna hustle em haha
ZequineZ
01:45:08 ZEZ - ZZ
This will be my first time actually taking advantage of capture day, gonna spend all my ebs XD
Nightingales Ridge
01:44:25 
Very cool :)
Narran Park
01:43:31 Sting
Capture day is my Favourite!
Narran Park
01:43:17 Sting
:D

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The Official Art Critique Forum November 11, 2019 01:08 PM


Stonecroft
 
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Cassa Belle said:
https://i.postimg.cc/bvR6qWRR/Untitled18-20191106181912.png

:D



For this piece, I would recommend bringing a light source in (the lightning provides one, so you can play off that) and highlight parts of the horse that are affected by the lighting. As it is, the horse is dark and a little hard to make out. You can fix this by adding small highlights or lightening the whole piece a bit to bring the horse to the center of attention. Personally, I would add *light* highlights to the nose, neck, and *slightly* stronger highlights to the back, and a few on the tail.
The Official Art Critique Forum November 11, 2019 01:15 PM

Former Stable
 
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BreezieM30w RIDs said:


Oak valley said:
https://i.postimg.cc/bvNLcD60/Untitled127.png

My first attempt at lineart, thoughts??


It looks good! Personally I would use a blue tool so that the shading is not so harsh. Also, be sure to clean up afterwards using an eraser. It looks a bit messy since the coloring goes outside the lines.

Thank you! Lol I was being a bit lazy by not cleaning it up. :)
The Official Art Critique Forum November 11, 2019 01:19 PM


Bridle Rock
 
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https://i.postimg.cc/Qd904Zb1/Untitled111-min.jpg

Thoughts?? Sorry the quality kinda sucks XD
The Official Art Critique Forum November 11, 2019 01:41 PM


Wolfcreek
 
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BreezieM30w RIDs said:
https://i.postimg.cc/Qd904Zb1/Untitled111-min.jpg

Thoughts?? Sorry the quality kinda sucks XD


Nice composition! The first thing I see is off is the lighting. The direction of the light don't match on the horse and on the background. You can fix it easily by mirroring either the horse or the bg. Also try to add more flow to the mane and tail, those look a bit stiff.
The Official Art Critique Forum November 11, 2019 02:04 PM


Sunset Grove Farm
 
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https://horseeden.com/forums.php?f=17&t=33061
Looking for some help please <3
(i haven't forgotten. About critique just doing some stuff atm, will get to them ASAP)
The Official Art Critique Forum November 12, 2019 05:57 PM


Tranquility
 
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Yellowtail Ranch said:
https://i.ibb.co/ngcFyyG/Kia.jpg

I use ibis paint but any help/advice would be appreciated. :D

I used this image for reference to the pose but not the color. The color was all me as well as painting. This was my first time doing something like this but it was very refreshing from the normal manips so I plan on making more.

https://www.deviantart.com/blissfully-blind/art/Horse-Stock-53-162205611

I didn't like how the original mane and tail was so I brought them to more attention. I don't exactly like the super wispy mane so I just did the basic mane/tail if ya know what I mean. I did the markings after I shaded and highlighted which I wholly regretted. Lol. It was so much extra shading/highlighting. Yes this horse is supposed to be mostly realistic with the exception of markings.

Is there anything you don't like about it? Anything you love? What should I try to improve? Any tips and tricks that could help? I do plan on making more only this time with more realistic mane/tail. Any way to paint manes/tails?

Thankyou in advance! :D


Any more thoughts on this?
The Official Art Critique Forum November 16, 2019 12:11 AM


Tanglewood
 
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https://i.postimg.cc/3NZHNyJh/Ignitor-ed-commission.png

Thoughts? Sorry, I know the lighting sucks
The Official Art Critique Forum November 18, 2019 10:42 AM


Bridle Rock
 
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https://i.postimg.cc/C1bWkpY3/3-F3-A7-AD2-85-C1-4-E77-A873-82-DCF62-E95-F5.jpg

Thoughts??
The Official Art Critique Forum November 18, 2019 11:09 AM


Tanglewood
 
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Breezie Rose said:
https://i.postimg.cc/C1bWkpY3/3-F3-A7-AD2-85-C1-4-E77-A873-82-DCF62-E95-F5.jpg

Thoughts??


I like it :) The quality could be improved but that probably isn't your mistake. Also, the fairy lights seem to appear from nowhere. Maybe make them into a ring around the horse's neck?
The Official Art Critique Forum November 18, 2019 04:07 PM


Toxic Carnage
 
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Tanglewood said:
https://i.postimg.cc/3NZHNyJh/Ignitor-ed-commission.png

Thoughts? Sorry, I know the lighting sucks


It looks good. I would give the horse a more Orange ish lighting or over shade if you know what I mean.

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