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Hey, Hey Color Breeders, If you happen to breed anything matching my color program ISO list, please reach out to me! I am looking for new blood to grow my lines 😊

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Boulder Creek
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The Pretty Pony Pageant Needs You!!!

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Painted Dreams
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ISO a 3 month upgrade! Have the funds ON HAND and will pay top price!
Legazy Stables
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Help me test - EWE combo producer so far :)
Alpine Acres
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Auction ending in 4 hours! Lots of EEE mares with low bids and peacock geldings
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Secretariat Ranch
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PEE 1/4 ISH Stallion EE D Z To SplSplLP2P2 5k

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Port Royal Equines
10:39:07 Lvl 6+ Gelds 4 Sale
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Leveled Geldings at auction!
Down South Stud
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Selling nice color PON foals colts and fillies imma leave gelding the colts up to yall since beauty is in the eyes of the beholder. Extra barn
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The Official Art Critique Forum December 29, 2019 11:00 PM


Snowmass Horses
 
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Oak valley said:
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Wouldn't mind some critique on this one please :)


Very pretty piece Oak! I feel like their is a lot of smudging going on, on the coat. Instead of smudging coats try blurring the coat. When you blur it it doesn't take different parts of the coat color anywhere. I also notice some extra white pieces around the head and down the neck, not sure if it is part of the piece or you forgot to erase it. Hope this helps. :)
The Official Art Critique Forum December 29, 2019 11:02 PM

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Snowmass Horses said:

Oak valley said:
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Wouldn't mind some critique on this one please :)


Very pretty piece Oak! I feel like their is a lot of smudging going on, on the coat. Instead of smudging coats try blurring the coat. When you blur it it doesn't take different parts of the coat color anywhere. I also notice some extra white pieces around the head and down the neck, not sure if it is part of the piece or you forgot to erase it. Hope this helps. :)


Agreed ^^
The one thing that gets me off about the piece is that there is a lot going on with the ground. It just seems like a big blob. Otherwise, great piece!
The Official Art Critique Forum December 29, 2019 11:02 PM

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Snowmass Horses said:

Oak valley said:
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Wouldn't mind some critique on this one please :)


Very pretty piece Oak! I feel like their is a lot of smudging going on, on the coat. Instead of smudging coats try blurring the coat. When you blur it it doesn't take different parts of the coat color anywhere. I also notice some extra white pieces around the head and down the neck, not sure if it is part of the piece or you forgot to erase it. Hope this helps. :)


XD I over blurred if that's a thing. Andvyeah I see the white now, oops lol
The Official Art Critique Forum December 29, 2019 11:28 PM


Moonglade Manor
 
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I am looking for some strong critique on this piece, not offensive but very strongly worded, I am trying out different styles and I am just taking a go at this one
Also, it will be in my premade shop, how much should it cost?
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The Official Art Critique Forum December 29, 2019 11:55 PM

Wonderland
 
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Moonglade Manor said:
I am looking for some strong critique on this piece, not offensive but very strongly worded, I am trying out different styles and I am just taking a go at this one
Also, it will be in my premade shop, how much should it cost?
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You're on the right track your lighting is pretty good but the mane and tail just don't fit. If you look on deviant art there are great mane and tail tutorials and I think Jello has one or two. The halter kinda throws me off Not being rude but it doesn't look like it belongs on the horse. Smudge your horse just a tiny bit and add yellow maybe slight green to a color change on it and poof
I also have the way I do manes and tails broken down feel free to pm me if you need it or can't find jellos

Edited at December 29, 2019 11:56 PM by Phoenix Rising Ranch
The Official Art Critique Forum December 30, 2019 11:06 AM

Former Stable
 
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I'd appreciate some critique on these :)

Edited at December 31, 2019 02:08 PM by GreysAnatomy Stables
The Official Art Critique Forum January 1, 2020 11:06 PM


Moonglade Manor
 
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Me and Cali did this together and are looking for some pricing help for its auction
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The Official Art Critique Forum January 1, 2020 11:40 PM

Former Stable
 
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What can I do to improve?
The Official Art Critique Forum January 3, 2020 12:37 PM


Snowmass Horses
 
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I made a thing...and don't know how to feel about it.
Any ideas for auction pricing?
The Official Art Critique Forum January 5, 2020 01:16 AM

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Looking for critiques and pricing, newest at the bottom.

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