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Wolf Dancer
04:04:43 Wolf Burger (Leg)
Yea I wish there was another day or two especially for prelims and stuff lol
MakeEm Fancy
04:04:32 Ally 💜
Me too
Maple Moth Meadows
04:04:14 Versa
Bleh. I always have such horrible luck with capture days
Minerva
04:01:52 Min
Ooooh I forgot I'll have my hay pastures open before capture day- more space for poor decisions xD
Versailles
04:01:17 Versa
That is indeed not how the rumble works lol
Versailles
04:00:41 Versa
I feel like if there was a little more time each round, then MAYBE I could squeeze something in. But as of right now, it's too up in the air and I'd definitely let people down :(
Astral Appies
04:00:26 Athena's SA - KNNs
...thats not how the rumble works
Glacier Bay Cove
04:00:23 Arctic Katz
Once I make major improvements to each art piece
Glacier Bay Cove
03:59:45 Arctic Katz
I keep all of my artwork, and maybe in the future, will submit it to a art rumble
Red Panda Hollow
03:55:57 Athena's SA-PON
Well yeah I mean you dont have to signup but I'm talking about people who do signup and than dont participate. Kinda sad. But I also understnad being busy
Pegasus Lane
03:55:51 Peggy (or) Peg
Oh gosh, felt. I am also kind of bummed about how many people didn't turn in an entry. Even a WIP would be fine! We can probably see the vision ;)
Versailles
03:54:39 Versa
I didn't ask to be a part of it since I knew I wouldn't have time. I'm chaotic enough with my premades alone
Glacier Bay Cove
03:54:20 Arctic Katz
Athena, I thought about it, but my art pieces aren't good enough for the rumble, yet
Red Panda Hollow
03:47:20 Athena's SA-PON
Its sad how many people didnt turn in an entry. I really don't want the rumble to go away
Glacier Bay Cove
03:46:05 Arctic Katz
Same here, Wolf
Wolf Dancer
03:42:35 Wolf Burger (Leg)
I can't wait to see all the Non-elimination Submissions
Haloed Legends
03:42:28 AW | Incognito
300k away from my goal before I spend it all on barns and show horses!!
Glacier Bay Cove
03:41:17 Arctic Katz
Checked the rumble and those are nice art pieces
Pegasus Lane
03:34:18 Peggy (or) Peg
Ah the rumble is up! Im so excited
Transformers Acres
03:27:33 Geek, Eek
All I can say is, I'm losing my damn patience. His parents take hour long showers, leaving me with a screaming child, even before he was teething. It's getting on my last fucking nerve. I barely sleep and I'm stressed enough as it is, and this isn't helping.

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Wolf Dancer
04:04:43 Wolf Burger (Leg)
Yea I wish there was another day or two especially for prelims and stuff lol
MakeEm Fancy
04:04:32 Ally 💜
Me too
Maple Moth Meadows
04:04:14 Versa
Bleh. I always have such horrible luck with capture days
Minerva
04:01:52 Min
Ooooh I forgot I'll have my hay pastures open before capture day- more space for poor decisions xD
Versailles
04:01:17 Versa
That is indeed not how the rumble works lol
Versailles
04:00:41 Versa
I feel like if there was a little more time each round, then MAYBE I could squeeze something in. But as of right now, it's too up in the air and I'd definitely let people down :(
Astral Appies
04:00:26 Athena's SA - KNNs
...thats not how the rumble works
Glacier Bay Cove
04:00:23 Arctic Katz
Once I make major improvements to each art piece
Glacier Bay Cove
03:59:45 Arctic Katz
I keep all of my artwork, and maybe in the future, will submit it to a art rumble
Red Panda Hollow
03:55:57 Athena's SA-PON
Well yeah I mean you dont have to signup but I'm talking about people who do signup and than dont participate. Kinda sad. But I also understnad being busy
Pegasus Lane
03:55:51 Peggy (or) Peg
Oh gosh, felt. I am also kind of bummed about how many people didn't turn in an entry. Even a WIP would be fine! We can probably see the vision ;)
Versailles
03:54:39 Versa
I didn't ask to be a part of it since I knew I wouldn't have time. I'm chaotic enough with my premades alone
Glacier Bay Cove
03:54:20 Arctic Katz
Athena, I thought about it, but my art pieces aren't good enough for the rumble, yet
Red Panda Hollow
03:47:20 Athena's SA-PON
Its sad how many people didnt turn in an entry. I really don't want the rumble to go away
Glacier Bay Cove
03:46:05 Arctic Katz
Same here, Wolf
Wolf Dancer
03:42:35 Wolf Burger (Leg)
I can't wait to see all the Non-elimination Submissions
Haloed Legends
03:42:28 AW | Incognito
300k away from my goal before I spend it all on barns and show horses!!
Glacier Bay Cove
03:41:17 Arctic Katz
Checked the rumble and those are nice art pieces
Pegasus Lane
03:34:18 Peggy (or) Peg
Ah the rumble is up! Im so excited
Transformers Acres
03:27:33 Geek, Eek
All I can say is, I'm losing my damn patience. His parents take hour long showers, leaving me with a screaming child, even before he was teething. It's getting on my last fucking nerve. I barely sleep and I'm stressed enough as it is, and this isn't helping.

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The Official Art Critique Forum October 12, 2019 05:56 AM

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Kirralee said:

https://i.postimg.cc/g2nPms7G/EE58-E956-68-DD-47-AA-AA64-CFF27-AD7071-C.png


The hair ends on the forlock are rather bluunt,try use a brush <1 px
If you use ibis paint the is a button (next to the ruler one if you press it you may find something called 'force fade' make sure it is on and continue ^-^ hope this helps

Edited at October 12, 2019 06:03 AM by Raven Hollow Elite
The Official Art Critique Forum October 12, 2019 06:02 AM


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Kirralee said:

https://i.postimg.cc/g2nPms7G/EE58-E956-68-DD-47-AA-AA64-CFF27-AD7071-C.png



Overall I really like the composition of this image Kirra. It's dramatic and the pose of the horse stands out with the hills in the background framing it. Composition of the horse can make or break an image I find and you have really played it to your advantage here! Great job! Nit picking I'd say make the horse slightly larger to fill the canvas more. I try to make my horse fill as much of the image as possible.

I love using Ben from BlueBird_Stock so you have done a pretty smooth job colour changing him to white from black. He's quite a dramatic moody pony isn't he? I'd try to make the variation between coats slightly more jagged and not as soft.
You have lost the shadows a bit in the right front leg. I'd redraw them in black on a new layer set to softlight and as clipping layer on the horse. Then smudge that layer so it becomes smooth. I do this over the entire horse in black and white for highlights. This will help intensify any shadows or highlights lost in the recolouring process. I'd also do a new layer clipping mask outlining the body to create a rim light effect. You could also at the end flatten the image and add a sunflare render where the neck and butt meet to make it uber dramatic lighting. (this is a personal artistic choice as I love love love dramatic lighting in pieces).
I'd also do this for the mane and create a halo like glow around the tail and forelock. Light passes through less denser strands of hair easier than thicker parts. This helps tie into the overall image of the piece. Also perhaps maybe vary the overall length of the forelock it seems very military cut all on the length and angle.

Overall I really like this piece and you can really feel the air and mood of this artwork. :)
The Official Art Critique Forum October 12, 2019 06:05 AM

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Thank you :D

He was a little smaller as I was originally going to have him holding a rose but change my mind

Edited at October 12, 2019 06:06 AM by Kirralee
The Official Art Critique Forum October 12, 2019 06:37 AM


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Raven Hollow Elite said:
This is very nice of you trillium!
https://i.postimg.cc/k59dn6tW/Untitled159-3.jpg
Any way I can make this better?it's for a high stakes contest



This is a really nice subtle background and foreground blur to highlight the horse Raven. It's done really nicely and really focuses the view on the horse.

The overall lighting of the piece ties in nicely while being dramatic but not to harsh to the eye, a good subtle balance.
Since you're using ElaineSelene as a stock provider I'm guessing the horse was bay originally and Nate? If so that is an epic colour change girl! Great effort.

My general critiques for this piece would be over all a deeper shadow to bring in higlights for the mane and tail as well as the body. I feel like the horse should have deeper contrast between the shoulder joints of the two front legs. The 2nd front leg would have an entire scapula and everything so would be quite boney and muscely, tt feels too smooth. The hind end is better than the front end but could do with more shadows. An eight legged horse is a wicked idea so you want to make the legs stand out. you have merged the legs into the body really nicely Raven.
I like the detail and smoothness of the face, it;s eye-catching and soft. The eye is really nicely done as well.

The main thing that I think is drawing away from the piece is the lighting of the lamp. It seems washed out and actually hides the lamp and loses the detail of the face and mane. If you could for glowing lights in lamps. I use a bright saturated colour but never white and then set to softlight or overlay. This keeps the glow or brightness but doesnt lose the details in the piece. then on an ultra fine brush bright highlight the areas of objects or horse around the glow.

I hope this makes sense :D
The Official Art Critique Forum October 12, 2019 06:42 AM

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Phantasm Farm said:


Raven Hollow Elite said:
This is very nice of you trillium!
https://i.postimg.cc/k59dn6tW/Untitled159-3.jpg
Any way I can make this better?it's for a high stakes contest



This is a really nice subtle background and foreground blur to highlight the horse Raven. It's done really nicely and really focuses the view on the horse.

The overall lighting of the piece ties in nicely while being dramatic but not to harsh to the eye, a good subtle balance.
Since you're using ElaineSelene as a stock provider I'm guessing the horse was bay originally and Nate? If so that is an epic colour change girl! Great effort.

My general critiques for this piece would be over all a deeper shadow to bring in higlights for the mane and tail as well as the body. I feel like the horse should have deeper contrast between the shoulder joints of the two front legs. The 2nd front leg would have an entire scapula and everything so would be quite boney and muscely, tt feels too smooth. The hind end is better than the front end but could do with more shadows. An eight legged horse is a wicked idea so you want to make the legs stand out. you have merged the legs into the body really nicely Raven.
I like the detail and smoothness of the face, it;s eye-catching and soft. The eye is really nicely done as well.

The main thing that I think is drawing away from the piece is the lighting of the lamp. It seems washed out and actually hides the lamp and loses the detail of the face and mane. If you could for glowing lights in lamps. I use a bright saturated colour but never white and then set to softlight or overlay. This keeps the glow or brightness but doesnt lose the details in the piece. then on an ultra fine brush bright highlight the areas of objects or horse around the glow.

I hope this makes sense :D


Thank you so much!unfortunatly it wasn't the colour change you thought I was,it was a white andalusian to start with,however I shall go and work on it according to this ^-^
The Official Art Critique Forum October 12, 2019 07:03 AM


HRS

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Probably there is a good reason why people don't seem to like this one.
Can someone point that reason out please? (I have one guess, but I'm curious what you guys think)

https://i.lensdump.com/i/i4cNJm.png

Edited at October 12, 2019 07:04 AM by HRS
The Official Art Critique Forum October 12, 2019 07:13 AM

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HRS said:
Probably there is a good reason why people don't seem to like this one.
Can someone point that reason out please? (I have one guess, but I'm curious what you guys think)

https://i.lensdump.com/i/i4cNJm.png


Personally I like it,it may just be because it's odd and different,but the icicle tail (although it IS icicles)still looks to spiky and rigid,maybe try move it around a bit
The Official Art Critique Forum October 12, 2019 10:07 AM


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Kirralee said:

https://i.postimg.cc/g2nPms7G/EE58-E956-68-DD-47-AA-AA64-CFF27-AD7071-C.png


I LOVEEE that chimera coat! The lighter front leg's hoof kind of looks a bit faded into the shadow from a distance though.
The Official Art Critique Forum October 12, 2019 10:35 AM


HRS

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Thank you, the tail is exactly what I was thinking about.

Raven Hollow Elite said:


HRS said:
Probably there is a good reason why people don't seem to like this one.
Can someone point that reason out please? (I have one guess, but I'm curious what you guys think)

https://i.lensdump.com/i/i4cNJm.png


Personally I like it,it may just be because it's odd and different,but the icicle tail (although it IS icicles)still looks to spiky and rigid,maybe try move it around a bit


The Official Art Critique Forum October 12, 2019 11:13 AM


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BreezieM30w RIDs said:
https://i.postimg.cc/ZqmDGGZZ/Untitled83.jpg

Here's another one, if y'all don't mind critiquing :D


I’ve added a bit of a glow around the horse (not shown here...) to make him seem kinda ghostly ;)

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