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SilverDawn
12:13:42 
Feeling like throwing up... just joined the rumble on HEE for the first time.... got an epic case of the "What Ifs"...
Peacock Estate
12:13:20 
how do I find where people are selling avatars and stable banners?
Glacier Bay Cove
11:54:36 Arctic Katz
Curious as to whether I can stuff any more horses in my barns
Wolf Dancer
11:53:30 Wolf Burger (Leg)
OMG I'm so excited about work tomorrow!
KPH Equestrian
11:53:04 Rapcoon | Jester
<3
Bluegrass Racing
11:51:37 Blue
oh so its host/server based, not when I tell it. Thank you Jester
KPH Equestrian
11:49:21 Rapcoon | Jester
it ends on the :10, so 9:50, 10:00, 10:10, etc
Bluegrass Racing
11:34:21 Blue
yeah got a two and a seven minute on my alt. Back to back 6's here
Glacier Bay Cove
11:33:59 Arctic Katz
Okay time to work on getting another barn, somehow
ZequineZ
11:32:27 ZEZ - ZZ
For me sometimes it’s 8 minutes, I wondered that too lol
Bluegrass Racing
11:25:50 Blue
how come the crafting time on bits is inconsistent? its either 1, 6, or 10 minutes. Majority of the time its 10 but happens enough for me to notice
Lambda Estates
11:24:17 Eps RID
I only had 30 stalls available after I finished breeding the SD.. I think I need a couple more barns 😅
Glacier Bay Cove
11:21:50 Arctic Katz
I apologize for the caps
MakeEm Fancy
11:21:34 Ally 💜
Geld or keep for quests?
-HEE Click-
Glacier Bay Cove
11:20:54 Arctic Katz
Hummer, I would
Hummingbird Meadows
11:20:32 Bird
I'm seriously ready to cut off contact with my brother after hearing this.
Hummingbird Meadows
11:20:09 Bird
It did deserve better. My mom says it is the girlfriend's fault, but I think my brother is just as much as fault since he is the one who started locking him in a room in the first place.
Glacier Bay Cove
11:19:17 Arctic Katz
SAY WHAT, now I am PISSED, the cat didn't deserve that, it deserves better
Hummingbird Meadows
11:17:53 Bird
I'm pissed. Earlier I mentioned that my brother broke up with his girlfriend and that my Mom was bringing his cat home so we could rehome it. Turns out the thing has been getting neglected. It was locked in a room with little food and water and no litter box.
Hyrule Camp
11:17:41 Ryan
RP anyone pm me

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SilverDawn
12:13:42 
Feeling like throwing up... just joined the rumble on HEE for the first time.... got an epic case of the "What Ifs"...
Peacock Estate
12:13:20 
how do I find where people are selling avatars and stable banners?
Glacier Bay Cove
11:54:36 Arctic Katz
Curious as to whether I can stuff any more horses in my barns
Wolf Dancer
11:53:30 Wolf Burger (Leg)
OMG I'm so excited about work tomorrow!
KPH Equestrian
11:53:04 Rapcoon | Jester
<3
Bluegrass Racing
11:51:37 Blue
oh so its host/server based, not when I tell it. Thank you Jester
KPH Equestrian
11:49:21 Rapcoon | Jester
it ends on the :10, so 9:50, 10:00, 10:10, etc
Bluegrass Racing
11:34:21 Blue
yeah got a two and a seven minute on my alt. Back to back 6's here
Glacier Bay Cove
11:33:59 Arctic Katz
Okay time to work on getting another barn, somehow
ZequineZ
11:32:27 ZEZ - ZZ
For me sometimes it’s 8 minutes, I wondered that too lol
Bluegrass Racing
11:25:50 Blue
how come the crafting time on bits is inconsistent? its either 1, 6, or 10 minutes. Majority of the time its 10 but happens enough for me to notice
Lambda Estates
11:24:17 Eps RID
I only had 30 stalls available after I finished breeding the SD.. I think I need a couple more barns 😅
Glacier Bay Cove
11:21:50 Arctic Katz
I apologize for the caps
MakeEm Fancy
11:21:34 Ally 💜
Geld or keep for quests?
-HEE Click-
Glacier Bay Cove
11:20:54 Arctic Katz
Hummer, I would
Hummingbird Meadows
11:20:32 Bird
I'm seriously ready to cut off contact with my brother after hearing this.
Hummingbird Meadows
11:20:09 Bird
It did deserve better. My mom says it is the girlfriend's fault, but I think my brother is just as much as fault since he is the one who started locking him in a room in the first place.
Glacier Bay Cove
11:19:17 Arctic Katz
SAY WHAT, now I am PISSED, the cat didn't deserve that, it deserves better
Hummingbird Meadows
11:17:53 Bird
I'm pissed. Earlier I mentioned that my brother broke up with his girlfriend and that my Mom was bringing his cat home so we could rehome it. Turns out the thing has been getting neglected. It was locked in a room with little food and water and no litter box.
Hyrule Camp
11:17:41 Ryan
RP anyone pm me

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The Official Art Critique Forum October 13, 2019 11:13 AM


Sunset Grove Farm
 
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Joe the horse doesn't match the baclground
There are plenty of tutorials on deviant art to help you but from what I'm able to do-

Duplicate the background layer, put it on a clipping mask to the horse layer and blur so its just blobs of colour, then switch this layer to one of the following
Soft.light
Overlay
Colour

Then mess with the opacity. If it still looks a little out of place dupliactae the horse layer so you have backup then bead with brightness and contrast and/or colour change
The Official Art Critique Forum October 13, 2019 11:23 AM


Lambo Farms
 
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https://i.postimg.cc/W3nDPTDk/Untitled375-2.jpg
thoughts on this?

Edited at October 13, 2019 11:44 AM by Lambo Farms
The Official Art Critique Forum October 13, 2019 11:47 AM

Former Stable
 
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Lambo Farms said:
https://i.postimg.cc/jj7CCRB9/Untitled375-1.jpg
thoughts on this?


That is gorgeous!! I love the mane and the background choice is beautiful. The only thing I can see is the hooves are obviously blurred. Try making it seem like they're under the water by playing with the different colors and brushes.

Edited at October 13, 2019 11:48 AM by White Forest Farms
The Official Art Critique Forum October 13, 2019 11:50 AM


Trillium Acres
 
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Lambo Farms said:
https://i.postimg.cc/jj7CCRB9/Untitled375-1.jpg
thoughts on this? I have not finished the tail yet.



Hey!

To start off, the hooves are very blurry. Try finding some water splash stock and putting over the hooves (adjust the opacity of the splash layer if it looks funny).

Next... The horse doesn't really match the background. They are two different lightings- Warm and cool[er] (The horse is warm and the background is too cool for it to look realistic with the horse.) If you dont want to replace the background, I would play around with hues and balance on the horse and bg. You could also blur the bg a little if you want to draw more attention to the horse.

The mane and tail look fine, but I would add some shadows and a [few] harsh highlights (with the layer set to overlay). Apply the highlights all over the body\wherever you want the viewer to focus.

One last thing... The credits are a bit hard to read due to the trees in the background. Maybe try moving the credits to the bottom or another place where they are more visible :P

Hope this makes sense and helps :D

Edited at October 13, 2019 11:51 AM by Trillium Acres
The Official Art Critique Forum October 13, 2019 11:51 AM


Sunset Grove Farm
 
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This peice is great

Some pointers

-the tail wouldn't be so thick and straight, try adding some curve near the bottom in the opposite direction

-as stated ahive the hooves are blurred, when it comes to situations like these the hooves would be covered by water but not completely
~to do this dupliactate the horse layer, erase some of the hooves on one layer and lower the opacity of the other layer

-try blurring some of the bg to add more focus to the subject [the horse]

-the horse would have more green and cyan hues, try messing around with the colour change option

For the tailill do a quick red pen for the image now

Lambo Farms said:
https://i.postimg.cc/W3nDPTDk/Untitled375-2.jpg
thoughts on this?



The Official Art Critique Forum October 13, 2019 11:54 AM


Trillium Acres
 
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Sunset Grove Farm said:

-the tail wouldn't be so thick and straight, try adding some curve near the bottom in the opposite direction



I agree with Sunset on this. I hadn't even thought about it lol!
Thank you for making a red pen :)
The Official Art Critique Forum October 13, 2019 12:30 PM


Sunset Grove Farm
 
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https://i.postimg.cc/HLkTdZtk/Untitled291.png
Here ya are

Lambo Farms said:
https://i.postimg.cc/W3nDPTDk/Untitled375-2.jpg
thoughts on this?



The Official Art Critique Forum October 13, 2019 05:02 PM


Caprina Springs
 
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https://i.postimg.cc/pdPD8mQ4/bbbb3-2.jpg
i would love to hear thoughts on this! I did this in about roughly 2-3 days :/ and i havent properly resized it yet so the quality isnt the best >.<

Edited at October 13, 2019 05:03 PM by Captain Marvel
The Official Art Critique Forum October 13, 2019 05:09 PM


Lambo Farms
 
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Captain Marvel said:
https://i.postimg.cc/pdPD8mQ4/bbbb3-2.jpg
i would love to hear thoughts on this! I did this in about roughly 2-3 days :/ and i havent properly resized it yet so the quality isnt the best >.<


I would say to blend the feet in the ground and the end of the tail spreads kinda of funny.
The Official Art Critique Forum October 13, 2019 05:12 PM


Caprina Springs
 
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Lambo Farms said:


Captain Marvel said:
https://i.postimg.cc/pdPD8mQ4/bbbb3-2.jpg
i would love to hear thoughts on this! I did this in about roughly 2-3 days :/ and i havent properly resized it yet so the quality isnt the best >.<


I would say to blend the feet in the ground and the end of the tail spreads kinda of funny.


well i would have blended feet and paid more attention to the tail but it is supposed to be made into a set and i only had 3 days to complete. i will take extra precaution to this next time though, thank you!

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