Horse Eden Eventing Game
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MakeEm Fancy
09:02:16 Ally 💜
Okay cool! I was just curious lol Im entering special shows now and thought hmm I wonder if there is a cut off
Pragma
09:00:45 Prag/Liz
I don't believe so Ally. I checked the game guide recently.
Duchesss ISH/SH/PONs
09:00:22 DDs other other SA
Oh...not expecting that xD
-HEE Click-
Why a colt though 🥲
Crescent Estate
08:55:47 River / Crescent
Hope he rates well -HEE Click-
MakeEm Fancy
08:53:02 Ally 💜
Is there a show limit for special shows?
Dash and Duchess
08:51:32 DD | ~Squizard~
Scf, I had the same confusion when I first saw it xD
SCF Sporting Chance
08:51:00 SCF/Gibbs
Oh.. I though it meant Toatally.. lol
Dash and Duchess
08:50:23 DD | ~Squizard~
Scf, a lil crying face lol!
SCF Sporting Chance
08:49:31 SCF/Gibbs
what is ToT?
The Old Gods
08:49:30 Void Malign
Bleh. News should not be paywalled. I'm really tired of getting sent news articles by mom and discovering I can't read the damn thing because it's paywalled.
Ellsworths Eden
08:49:24 
-HEE Click-

Pretty girl!
Dash and Duchess
08:46:34 DD | ~Squizard~
The pieces have been so good! I dashed to it the second I saw the alert from the rumble club about it xD
SCF Sporting Chance
08:45:52 SCF/Gibbs
Here is the forum link for the Rumble Voting.. sorry.
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Port Royal Equines
08:45:33 Elfie
oop nevermind
Port Royal Equines
08:44:06 Elfie
I also don't see any art just the names for them
Gypsy Family Farm
08:43:54 
I would like this flu to cease and desist.
Ellsworths Eden
08:43:45 
@Chey

Thank you! :D
ShiningStar Stables
08:43:15 Chey / Star
Ellsworths Eden
Here
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Crescent Estate
08:42:29 River / Crescent
My legs hurt SO bad
Ellsworths Eden
08:40:36 
Where are the art pieces for the rumble?

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MakeEm Fancy
09:02:16 Ally 💜
Okay cool! I was just curious lol Im entering special shows now and thought hmm I wonder if there is a cut off
Pragma
09:00:45 Prag/Liz
I don't believe so Ally. I checked the game guide recently.
Duchesss ISH/SH/PONs
09:00:22 DDs other other SA
Oh...not expecting that xD
-HEE Click-
Why a colt though 🥲
Crescent Estate
08:55:47 River / Crescent
Hope he rates well -HEE Click-
MakeEm Fancy
08:53:02 Ally 💜
Is there a show limit for special shows?
Dash and Duchess
08:51:32 DD | ~Squizard~
Scf, I had the same confusion when I first saw it xD
SCF Sporting Chance
08:51:00 SCF/Gibbs
Oh.. I though it meant Toatally.. lol
Dash and Duchess
08:50:23 DD | ~Squizard~
Scf, a lil crying face lol!
SCF Sporting Chance
08:49:31 SCF/Gibbs
what is ToT?
The Old Gods
08:49:30 Void Malign
Bleh. News should not be paywalled. I'm really tired of getting sent news articles by mom and discovering I can't read the damn thing because it's paywalled.
Ellsworths Eden
08:49:24 
-HEE Click-

Pretty girl!
Dash and Duchess
08:46:34 DD | ~Squizard~
The pieces have been so good! I dashed to it the second I saw the alert from the rumble club about it xD
SCF Sporting Chance
08:45:52 SCF/Gibbs
Here is the forum link for the Rumble Voting.. sorry.
-HEE Click-
Port Royal Equines
08:45:33 Elfie
oop nevermind
Port Royal Equines
08:44:06 Elfie
I also don't see any art just the names for them
Gypsy Family Farm
08:43:54 
I would like this flu to cease and desist.
Ellsworths Eden
08:43:45 
@Chey

Thank you! :D
ShiningStar Stables
08:43:15 Chey / Star
Ellsworths Eden
Here
-HEE Click-
Crescent Estate
08:42:29 River / Crescent
My legs hurt SO bad
Ellsworths Eden
08:40:36 
Where are the art pieces for the rumble?

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The Official Art Critique Forum October 14, 2019 01:44 PM


Toxic Carnage
 
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https://i.postimg.cc/LsYR50qT/Untitled34-20191013181515.png

https://i.postimg.cc/pLbXJ51Q/Untitled25-20191009210207.png
What can I do better here?

Edited at October 14, 2019 01:45 PM by AnimeAcres
The Official Art Critique Forum October 14, 2019 04:16 PM


Trillium Acres
 
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Raven, I would say anywhere from 30-50k for the set. Full avatar could be like 70kish :) I can be bad at pricing though, so if anyone else has any ideas, help Raven out!

Anime,
-Banner:

So for the banner the first thing that I notice is that the image is a bit grainy, is that fixable? Next thing is that the hair needs some more detailing and highlighting. Same goes for the horse as it all looks a bit flat. Also the eye does look a bit unrealistic. Maybe reference the link down below and search for the eye part of the video. I believe it is towards the end.

(I'm copy and pasting the highlighting advice I gave to Raven on the first page.)

I would use a pastel yellow color or a pastel blue for the back (Depends if your lighting is warm or cool. In this case I would us a yellow.) Very small brush size. 1-2 px on a pressure sensitive hard brush. After those each have their own layer, set the whole layer to overlay and mess with the opacity. Do this highlighting process for the horse and hair. It will make the image crisper and less flat.
I reference Manduh's youtube a bunch for my art, this time stamp might help you with highlighting. It helped me tremendously.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9xltza9Ojtw&t=551s
Time stamp:
32:36

-Avatar:

This image could use some of the same highlights mentioned above. Apply these everywhere. The eye on this one also is a little unrealistic. Next thing is that the hair looks blurry and kind of matted looking (not like "dreadlock" matting that you would see on regular hair. What I'm trying to say is that it looks kind of clumped together. There aren't really any flyaways or strands if you get what I mean.) and the forelock is a bit too thick. The position on the hair looks good, but if you decide to re-do he hair you would add some fly-aways. For the hair I recommend a soft pressure-sensitive brush set to 1-2 px.

Reference this for hair!
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AtNt3bT6fGo
Time stamp:
12:11

Hope this helped everyone (and made sense lol)! :)

Edited at October 14, 2019 04:23 PM by Trillium Acres
The Official Art Critique Forum October 14, 2019 05:23 PM


Toxic Carnage
 
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Thanks! :D
The Official Art Critique Forum October 14, 2019 06:47 PM


Sunset Grove Farm
 
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https://i.postimg.cc/MKc37f35/Untitled283-1.jpg
I would love some critique on this premade please :)
The Official Art Critique Forum October 16, 2019 04:20 PM

Former Stable
 
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The reflection on the eye is white,which should be a grayish blue in a normal light but because the reflection is from a fire ,eye drop the colour from the film and lighten it a little,then use that as the reflective color
The Official Art Critique Forum October 16, 2019 04:29 PM


Sunset Grove Farm
 
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I'm way too tired and didn't understand any of that :')
(not trying to be rude but I'm exhausted lol, I have school tommorow and I'm up mate again)
The Official Art Critique Forum October 16, 2019 08:37 PM

Former Stable
 
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Looking for Critique and a good price
https://i.postimg.cc/DfSMpbHx/My-Drawing-5.jpg
https://i.postimg.cc/J4XmvhGW/My-Drawing-6.jpg

Edited at October 17, 2019 02:22 PM by White Forest Farms
The Official Art Critique Forum October 17, 2019 06:45 PM


Unexpected Visitor
 
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Recent artwork. Critique?
*click for quality*

https://i.postimg.cc/28VCwyTD/Untitled375.jpg
The Official Art Critique Forum October 18, 2019 02:33 PM


Sunset Grove Farm
 
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I'm awful at pricing so can't help with that sorry

Peice #1

Honestly this peice messes with my eyes, the horse has no contrast and the white outline is way too out there, is there any way to fix that?
Try adjusting shadows and highlights
I'm assuming the horse is meant to be ghost like? Try lowering the opacity of the horse so lighting is better and the ghost effect is more real

Peice #2

Very nice, however the image looks really stretched and unnatural, when moving images always have the ratio proportions locked so nothing is stretched, make sure you add shadows

Again try playing around with shadows highlights and even a bit of smudging

Also try blurring a little bit of the bg to add focus to the horse

White Forest Farms said:
Looking for Critique and a good price
https://i.postimg.cc/DfSMpbHx/My-Drawing-5.jpg
https://i.postimg.cc/J4XmvhGW/My-Drawing-6.jpg



The Official Art Critique Forum October 18, 2019 02:34 PM


Sunset Grove Farm
 
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Ughh luxxy this peice is genuinely to die for 🤤😍

The horses eye is glowing green, however the highlights and glow don't quite match, try adding some small strands of green on the hair and some 1px highlights on another layer on low opacity

Other than that it looks amazing!

Crystal Heart Estate said:
Recent artwork. Critique?
*click for quality*

https://i.postimg.cc/28VCwyTD/Untitled375.jpg




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