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Calela Eventing

04:10:21 Cali

River
Ohh, thank you!

04:06:22 River

If you hover over the symbol it shows Member of JRA

Calela Eventing

04:04:00 Cali

You know when your on list view in the stables? Obviously all my horses have the M by them for Managed but one of them has this Diamond symbol???

03:53:07 Amb

I don't feel like that's something you can train. Hold a treat and hope for the best

Calela Eventing

03:52:35 Cali

Rose
Target Training works amazingly

03:35:24

Positive Reinforcement
Clicker Training
Target Training

Namerik Stables

03:26:16 Rose

Does anyone have any advice on which training I should do in order to make the horse not toss its head when I'm trying to take a photo

02:57:24

Quest:
Breed a brindle foal

Wish me luck guys

Caprina Springs

02:28:29 Mads

-HEE Click- Excited for this fella

02:10:30 Lily

Thanks so much Boulder :)

Gold Oak Estate

01:44:23 Opal's SA - AA &

Ty! And then straight after that I bred a manchado XD

01:34:23 Galaxy ☆

Oak the sooty is gorgeous!

Gold Oak Estate

01:33:00 Opal's SA - AA &

I just bred this beauty O.0
-HEE Click-

01:29:20

Tackroom - Actions - Sell Your Tack

01:22:54 Lily

where do I go to sell my used tack in the store?

MC Ace

01:20:34 McFossil

Burnt pork belly ends.

01:14:23 Galaxy ☆

If someone could help me out with this, I'd be grateful!

-HEE Click-

01:12:46 Peggy (or) Peg

I cannot do fat at all. I gag immediately on the texture lmao

01:11:36 pheezy

thornwood
not specifically cattle brands, but when my family had a much bigger horse business we used to freeze brand. does that count?

Dash and Duchess

12:58:34 DD | ~Squizard~

Flea, the endless chewing is truly the stuff of horror 😭

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Calela Eventing

04:10:21 Cali

River
Ohh, thank you!

04:06:22 River

If you hover over the symbol it shows Member of JRA

Calela Eventing

04:04:00 Cali

You know when your on list view in the stables? Obviously all my horses have the M by them for Managed but one of them has this Diamond symbol???

03:53:07 Amb

I don't feel like that's something you can train. Hold a treat and hope for the best

Calela Eventing

03:52:35 Cali

Rose
Target Training works amazingly

03:35:24

Positive Reinforcement
Clicker Training
Target Training

Namerik Stables

03:26:16 Rose

Does anyone have any advice on which training I should do in order to make the horse not toss its head when I'm trying to take a photo

02:57:24

Quest:
Breed a brindle foal

Wish me luck guys

Caprina Springs

02:28:29 Mads

-HEE Click- Excited for this fella

02:10:30 Lily

Thanks so much Boulder :)

Gold Oak Estate

01:44:23 Opal's SA - AA &

Ty! And then straight after that I bred a manchado XD

01:34:23 Galaxy ☆

Oak the sooty is gorgeous!

Gold Oak Estate

01:33:00 Opal's SA - AA &

I just bred this beauty O.0
-HEE Click-

01:29:20

Tackroom - Actions - Sell Your Tack

01:22:54 Lily

where do I go to sell my used tack in the store?

MC Ace

01:20:34 McFossil

Burnt pork belly ends.

01:14:23 Galaxy ☆

If someone could help me out with this, I'd be grateful!

-HEE Click-

01:12:46 Peggy (or) Peg

I cannot do fat at all. I gag immediately on the texture lmao

01:11:36 pheezy

thornwood
not specifically cattle brands, but when my family had a much bigger horse business we used to freeze brand. does that count?

Dash and Duchess

12:58:34 DD | ~Squizard~

Flea, the endless chewing is truly the stuff of horror 😭

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January 8, 2018 05:39 PM

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Hey! I'm just wondering where I can improve my art :) I haven't been doing for that long so any any help is appreciated!

This is my most recent piece:

https://horseeden.com/horse.php?id=15154277

Thanks!

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January 8, 2018 05:49 PM

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my only thing i have to say is that the background looks a bit too blurry but otherwise i love this piece

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January 8, 2018 10:58 PM

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$Wings of Glory$ said:
my only thing i have to say is that the background looks a bit too blurry but otherwise i love this piece

Partly agree with this. Maybe try and make the horse clearer/sharper to match the little baby tree next to it? Overall a beautiful piece. Great work.

EDIT: Also, maybe try playing with the highlights on the horse? Just look at the light source.

Edited at January 8, 2018 11:02 PM by Oceane Elites

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January 8, 2018 11:07 PM

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Oceane Elites said:

$Wings of Glory$ said:
my only thing i have to say is that the background looks a bit too blurry but otherwise i love this piece

Partly agree with this. Maybe try and make the horse clearer/sharper to match the little baby tree next to it? Overall a beautiful piece. Great work.

EDIT: Also, maybe try playing with the highlights on the horse? Just look at the light source.

Yeah good point! Im just starting to add highlights and lowlights into my manips now ao hopefully that will be fixed soon xD

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