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Lucky
08:38:19 luvky
walker
thank you! i've got 16 papers to sit over the next wee while, so a lot of studying to do hahha
Sleepwalker Centre
08:37:33 Walker
Ally,
that's reasonable!! this guy was about 3 years old when I got him haha

ohhh I love a big goof with a tail that could injure you
Morning Glory Farms
08:36:56 Terici/Dino/Trish
Ari, my P1 girl threw a WWW this year, and landed like 70ish on her breed board
Sleepwalker Centre
08:36:48 Walker
luvky,
good luck on exams!! I feel you, I'm finishing up two summer classes
Lucky
08:36:27 luvky
DD
heheh thank you!! hoping she trains well
MakeEm Fancy
08:36:27 Ally 💜
Im still working on potty training my puppy but he is only 2 months lol

Oh yes he is a rather interesting breed combo 🤣 He is a big goof and has a bat for a tail @Walker
Lucky
08:36:07 luvky
Ari
Rerolled her off snowflake appy (no clue why, i was just in a gamblingish mood hahah)
But yes! hoping i can snag some sort of item for her muma next RO

Ahh yeah bout the same over here. Exams are coming up and there's a fair bit of pressure but i'm managing
Sleepwalker Centre
08:35:07 Walker
Ally,
yeah!! he was basically not housetrained when I ended up with him, I had to keep him in my sight at all times or he would 100% make a mess somewhere for the first year at least

and ohh, that's an interesting mix! I love border collies, too
Dash and Duchess
08:34:46 DD | ~Squizard~
Luvky, Oooosges beautiful 🤩
MakeEm Fancy
08:34:13 Ally 💜
Oh yikes!
The Joker
08:33:58 Ari <3
Oh my gosh she's gorgeous! Aramis lines too, I love him <3

And I've been good! Busy and stressed but good things come from hard work :3
MakeEm Fancy
08:33:37 Ally 💜
My mom has a border collie and a Anatolian shepherd /Great Dane currently @Walker
Sleepwalker Centre
08:33:18 Walker
Ally,
it really is!! My first dachshund was a very weird rescue, I got him from somebody who "rescued" (this person wasn't really treating him much better) him from a wealthy woman who had something like 5-6 purebred small dogs of different breeds that she would leave alone all day while she was at work, letting them "go" inside the bathtube :/
The Joker
08:33:11 Ari <3
Thank you! Just hoping it takes first time around for my bank accounts' sake 😂
Lucky
08:33:00 luvky
I've been decent Ari, thanks for asking! Had a good ro too, my maiden girlie dropped a WWW :)
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How have you been?
Dash and Duchess
08:32:36 DD | ~Squizard~
Arctic, yup! In T1 <3
Dash and Duchess
08:32:07 DD | ~Squizard~
Ari, he totally will!! Good luck!
Glacier Bay Cove
08:31:35 Arctic Katz
Does charm have an art gallery or shop
MakeEm Fancy
08:31:15 Ally 💜
Such a shame :( @Walker
Sleepwalker Centre
08:30:48 Walker
Ally,
that sounds very similar to how my dad ended up with some of his first rotties :c

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Lucky
08:38:19 luvky
walker
thank you! i've got 16 papers to sit over the next wee while, so a lot of studying to do hahha
Sleepwalker Centre
08:37:33 Walker
Ally,
that's reasonable!! this guy was about 3 years old when I got him haha

ohhh I love a big goof with a tail that could injure you
Morning Glory Farms
08:36:56 Terici/Dino/Trish
Ari, my P1 girl threw a WWW this year, and landed like 70ish on her breed board
Sleepwalker Centre
08:36:48 Walker
luvky,
good luck on exams!! I feel you, I'm finishing up two summer classes
Lucky
08:36:27 luvky
DD
heheh thank you!! hoping she trains well
MakeEm Fancy
08:36:27 Ally 💜
Im still working on potty training my puppy but he is only 2 months lol

Oh yes he is a rather interesting breed combo 🤣 He is a big goof and has a bat for a tail @Walker
Lucky
08:36:07 luvky
Ari
Rerolled her off snowflake appy (no clue why, i was just in a gamblingish mood hahah)
But yes! hoping i can snag some sort of item for her muma next RO

Ahh yeah bout the same over here. Exams are coming up and there's a fair bit of pressure but i'm managing
Sleepwalker Centre
08:35:07 Walker
Ally,
yeah!! he was basically not housetrained when I ended up with him, I had to keep him in my sight at all times or he would 100% make a mess somewhere for the first year at least

and ohh, that's an interesting mix! I love border collies, too
Dash and Duchess
08:34:46 DD | ~Squizard~
Luvky, Oooosges beautiful 🤩
MakeEm Fancy
08:34:13 Ally 💜
Oh yikes!
The Joker
08:33:58 Ari <3
Oh my gosh she's gorgeous! Aramis lines too, I love him <3

And I've been good! Busy and stressed but good things come from hard work :3
MakeEm Fancy
08:33:37 Ally 💜
My mom has a border collie and a Anatolian shepherd /Great Dane currently @Walker
Sleepwalker Centre
08:33:18 Walker
Ally,
it really is!! My first dachshund was a very weird rescue, I got him from somebody who "rescued" (this person wasn't really treating him much better) him from a wealthy woman who had something like 5-6 purebred small dogs of different breeds that she would leave alone all day while she was at work, letting them "go" inside the bathtube :/
The Joker
08:33:11 Ari <3
Thank you! Just hoping it takes first time around for my bank accounts' sake 😂
Lucky
08:33:00 luvky
I've been decent Ari, thanks for asking! Had a good ro too, my maiden girlie dropped a WWW :)
-HEE Click-
How have you been?
Dash and Duchess
08:32:36 DD | ~Squizard~
Arctic, yup! In T1 <3
Dash and Duchess
08:32:07 DD | ~Squizard~
Ari, he totally will!! Good luck!
Glacier Bay Cove
08:31:35 Arctic Katz
Does charm have an art gallery or shop
MakeEm Fancy
08:31:15 Ally 💜
Such a shame :( @Walker
Sleepwalker Centre
08:30:48 Walker
Ally,
that sounds very similar to how my dad ended up with some of his first rotties :c

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Critique Ari July 13, 2022 06:58 PM


Quizzical Quarters
 
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Y'all, I have no idea what to improve on. Because I wanna improve everywhere. So I can't pick just one thing to focus on. I also am SO stuck between styles I want. Should I stick my more painty style, is that what y'all like? It's fun being more painty, but I absolutely love sharper styles that look a bit more "natrual" I guess, its just so pleasing to the eyes.

I'll post my gallery below so y'all can see my recents lately. I definitely need help/tips on eyes. They kill me to do. Be as harsh as you need, because that's the only way imma learn anything. Besides, Ari's a bitch I can take it :')

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Critique Ari July 13, 2022 07:04 PM

The Golden Horse
 
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i love all the styles XD it looks so cool!
the hair is also amazing and i don't even notice the eyes like at all...

Edited at July 14, 2022 12:31 AM by The Golden Horse
Critique Ari July 13, 2022 07:17 PM


Reindeers

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This isn't much of a 'critique', but your style is amazing, especially the hair! You've definitely improved from when I bought art from you some moons ago.
Critique Ari July 13, 2022 07:21 PM

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I really love your horse anatomy, it's really spot on! The only thing I have to critique is the hair, if you are going for realistic that will have to be an area to work on(looks kinds like vines more than hair). As I notice you do some semi-realistic which looks good, but my attention get caught on the hair that doesn't quite look right. You've done a couple really nice ones!

Edited at July 13, 2022 07:27 PM by Beans247
Critique Ari July 13, 2022 07:40 PM

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I'm not a HEE artist but something i've learned from drawing is your style is CONSTANTLY changing... you're trying new things (even without knowing it) each time you draw anything... look at your drawings and figure out what YOU like about them... make notes of what you like and what you want to change up your drawings are beautiful but your style is your own and its constantly changing you do something a bit different each time you draw lol... do what you like and figure out what you don't like if you have 2 ways you like to draw horses figure out what you like or don't like about the styles you use and see what you come up with by combining what you like from the two styles. Your art is really really beautiful though :) I looked at your gallery and its stunning :3

Critique Ari July 13, 2022 09:20 PM


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I love more painted type looks. I don't like sharp art but also not super smudgy. I like softness. I prefer your current style to the style you practiced with your latest premade. As an artist though I'm constantly trying different things trying to work out my own techniques
Critique Ari July 13, 2022 10:24 PM


Tranquility
 
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Hollow Tree Acres said:
I love more painted type looks. I don't like sharp art but also not super smudgy. I like softness. I prefer your current style to the style you practiced with your latest premade. As an artist though I'm constantly trying different things trying to work out my own techniques


This. All of it. 100%. Thanks Hollow for writing it out so I didnt have too 😂.
No, part of the reason I love your art so much is your style, your unique touch! Sure, if you arent enjoying, that's ok too, it's your art so try something new! <3 Every time I see a piece of art done by you, I 100% know it's you without looking at credits! Personally, as an artist myself, that's what I strive for, uniqueness of "my" style. And you have literally done it perfectly!
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Some points I notice on your current style (so not the new one)
- the eyes, I only noticed them becuase you pointed them out on your post, and I LOVE eyes, I feel like they draw the entire piece together and I also love the way I do eyes. So, if you'd like, just pm me, and I can give you a "tutorial" so to speak, and you can help me becuase I've been wanting to plan one for a while, but you could help me test it out :D if you wanted to of course.
- I mean, I really dont have much other critique, on your very last piece, the shadows on the horse (near shoulder, ears, belly) were very unnecessarily sharp and contrasting so I would smudge them down or blur them down a bit
- also, on white markings (need to do a tutorial for them too so pm me!) I think if you copied them on another layer and take a rough watercolor eraser around the edges at a low opacity, it might help making them look more realistic
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:D Your awesome Ari!!
Critique Ari July 14, 2022 12:16 AM


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Honestly I really love your style of hair and like what Hollow and Tranquility have both said that the painted look is awesome and is what makes your art unique. I also prefer your current style rather then the last piece you practised but everyone is different so others might like that style more. Not really much I can think to critique cause I'm not that great at doing that haha.
Critique Ari July 14, 2022 09:09 PM


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Thank you all so much!! It's greatly appreciated 💚

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