Horse Eden Eventing Game
Horse Eden Eventing Game


Year: 193   Season: Spring   
$: 0
Forecast: Nighttime Thunderstorms with Hail
Forecast:
Tue 10:49am  
Stables Online:  133 
Chatbox
Daybreak
10:47:21 
-HEE Click-
EEE TB mare for brood.
With a pretty Golden Bay.
$5'000
FirstLightFarms
10:45:10 puck
-HEE Click-

TB Sale! Bravery, AD, color, and more.
The Lazy Ninja
10:40:26 Jessie
Wild EEE premium bravery pony mare 15k
-HEE Click-
Elysian Meadows
10:35:35 
I am looking for PON mares who match my studs well:
-HEE Click-
-HEE Click-

My boys are getting older so I have to start seriously working on breeding a replacement to continue my program. Please PM me
Rising Stars Stable
10:32:37 Willow ~ AA Breeder
-HEE Click-
EEE+ AAs available
Legazy Stables
10:23:19 
-HEE Click-

Help me test! EWE combo producer so far. If he throws you an EWE+ I will refund, I just want to get him debuted :)
Eagle Creek
10:03:34 Eagle
Wild 1 of 3 grey WWW AA Mares Auction
-HEE Click-
Two Trees Stables
09:44:40 Willow ~ TB Breeder
-HEE Click-
Twilight Farms
09:39:49 
ISO an upgrade!!! Pm me!
Port Royal Equines
09:39:12 Lvl 6+ Gelds 4 Sale
-HEE Click-
Proven Seal Brown ABLB WWW Sire.

-HEE Click-
Proven Silver Grullo LB WWW Sire.

-HEE Click-
Proven Grullo WWW Sire.


-HEE Click-
EEE+ Broodmares at 4k. Bravery mares included! Some are W producers.

You must be a registered member for more
than 1 day before you can use our chatbox.



Rules   Hide
You are in: Sales
View Main Chat
Quests
Horse Eden Eventing Game
Chatbox
Daybreak
10:47:21 
-HEE Click-
EEE TB mare for brood.
With a pretty Golden Bay.
$5'000
FirstLightFarms
10:45:10 puck
-HEE Click-

TB Sale! Bravery, AD, color, and more.
The Lazy Ninja
10:40:26 Jessie
Wild EEE premium bravery pony mare 15k
-HEE Click-
Elysian Meadows
10:35:35 
I am looking for PON mares who match my studs well:
-HEE Click-
-HEE Click-

My boys are getting older so I have to start seriously working on breeding a replacement to continue my program. Please PM me
Rising Stars Stable
10:32:37 Willow ~ AA Breeder
-HEE Click-
EEE+ AAs available
Legazy Stables
10:23:19 
-HEE Click-

Help me test! EWE combo producer so far. If he throws you an EWE+ I will refund, I just want to get him debuted :)
Eagle Creek
10:03:34 Eagle
Wild 1 of 3 grey WWW AA Mares Auction
-HEE Click-
Two Trees Stables
09:44:40 Willow ~ TB Breeder
-HEE Click-
Twilight Farms
09:39:49 
ISO an upgrade!!! Pm me!
Port Royal Equines
09:39:12 Lvl 6+ Gelds 4 Sale
-HEE Click-
Proven Seal Brown ABLB WWW Sire.

-HEE Click-
Proven Silver Grullo LB WWW Sire.

-HEE Click-
Proven Grullo WWW Sire.


-HEE Click-
EEE+ Broodmares at 4k. Bravery mares included! Some are W producers.

You must be a registered member for more
than 1 day before you can use our chatbox.






Refresh


Forums

→ Horse Eden is a fun game! Sign Up Now!

My Subscriptions
My Bookmarks
My Topics
Latest Topics
Following

Forums > Art Shops > Art Help
   1 

Art Critique December 19, 2023 02:52 AM


Golden Crest
 
Posts: 2625
#1162876
Give Award
Hey everyone!

I am still learning the ropes of art and finding my style, so I would love some critique of my progress so far. Here are some pieces I have done with different themes, I would love if anyone experienced in the art field could please give me some pointers?

I really do thank you in advance and appreciate your time :)



Art Critique December 19, 2023 02:36 PM


Olive
 
Posts: 62
#1163001
Give Award
Though im not in the art field id like to say your style is unique in a way and really cute
But #1 The WIngs Need To be Blended Into The Body And The Color Match the Coat
#2 Your Eyes Need A Bit Of Work
#3 Try Blending your legs Into The Grass A Bit more or add a layer or grass ontop of it
#4 same thing
#5 I think the fawns lighting is a bit off
#6 its my favorite but try to blend the socket of the wing in a bit
Art Critique December 19, 2023 04:21 PM


KPH Equestrian
 
Posts: 3365
#1163018
Give Award
I agree with Olive, but the biggest thing is shadows and reflections <3 I don't know which app you use, but I love Krita.
I've been compiling my favorite tutorials for a while now, I'll edit in a bit with em<3
Edit: Here they all are, in no particular order :3
Roanies Manip Tutorial(Love this one!)
Hope these help<3

Edited at December 19, 2023 08:33 PM by KPH Equestrian
Art Critique December 20, 2023 02:45 PM


WildWillow
 
Posts: 2164
#1163227
Give Award
The first things I notice are a lack of a shadow on the ground and a lack of depth (shadow/highlight) on your horses. I definitely recommend checking out the tutorials that KPH has listed. I think learning to place a shadow on the ground as well as add shadows and highlights to your horse, mane/tail, and wings will really take your art to a next level. :) I go over this in my tutorial (KPH linked to it).

I think another thing to pay attention to is the tone of your background compared to the horse. For example, the background of your last piece is very blue/green toned while your horse has more of a yellow tone. If your program has a Color Balance tool, you can use this to adjust the tone of your horse to match the same tones as your background. This can be super helpful to get your horse to "fit" in its background.
You can also adjust the tones of the "extras" in your art (antlers, wings, animals) to fit both your horse and the background.
It's amazing what difference the little details can make!

I think you really have down the other major foundation components to art - such as horse body prep and the beginnings of grounding. For your grounding, I would go in with a softer, translucent brush to erase legs so it blends easier into your background.
I really like your manes and tails - that last piece especially has some phenomenal hair action!

If you have any questions, my mailbox is always open!

Forums > Art Shops > Art Help
   1 

Refresh