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Galloping_Gems

04:23:56 Gemstone

-HEE Click-
Oh my god!!!

Purestables

03:12:48

Hey everyone how does this match look -HEE Click-

Frog Judgment Acers

02:21:27 Dulcie/Crazy

5 accounts
Kicked on round 3
4 times
Kicked on round 1
1 time

Miniature Muffins

02:18:37 Dulcie's Spot Farm

I should see if I get hoof kissed by Nigel or not

Wild Wind Stables

01:32:34 Wind

Is placing in the top 30 on a freshman sire single breed leaderboard any good?

Kuewi knn stable

01:31:21 Bazinga Force

@Palomino: usually they need more training sessions to place good.
With just 1 training that colt you have entered ATM will not place, too.
Check the guide forums for training and showing guides

Dash and Duchess

12:41:22 DD | ~Squizard~

*of

Dash and Duchess

12:41:09 DD | ~Squizard~

I'm surprised I haven't beaten Nigel every time xD I've got a history with extremely difficult ponies 🤣 *cough one if this stable's namesakes cough*

Fantasy Horses

12:39:33 Fantasy | Fanta

The first time I tried, I cleaned Nigel, and now he hates me lol

Dash and Duchess

12:24:05 DD | ~Squizard~

Ooo he's beautiful!! Good luck on 7s Diva!

Mooncloud Magic

12:23:20 🧸 Diva

I got one coming myself I'm a bit excited for, but I try not to expect too much
-HEE Click-

Palomino Meadow

12:23:18

None of my horses placed :( I dont get what Im doing wrong

Dash and Duchess

12:18:52 DD | ~Squizard~

Angel, it seems like it XD they like to surprise us lol!

Galloping_Gems

12:17:50 Gemstone

-HEE Click-
Thank you sooooo much for all the help Angel!

Angels angels

12:16:50 [1k+ brindles] Angel

DD
I feel like that is how a lot of WWWs come about lol

Galloping_Gems

12:08:34 Gemstone

-HEE Click-
This little baby is such a adorable thing

Dash and Duchess

12:08:04 DD | ~Squizard~

Diva, thank you!! Somehow it's the second time my first WWW on an account has come from a random W combo mare on a yolo match 🤣

Mooncloud Magic

12:07:23 🧸 Diva

Will do Eve, thanks

Mooncloud Magic

12:07:03 🧸 Diva

That's awesome and with a wee gal, you got some powerful RF

Cadence Farms

12:06:54 evebot

Diva please put that in the bug forum so it gets on my radar.

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Galloping_Gems

04:23:56 Gemstone

-HEE Click-
Oh my god!!!

Purestables

03:12:48

Hey everyone how does this match look -HEE Click-

Frog Judgment Acers

02:21:27 Dulcie/Crazy

5 accounts
Kicked on round 3
4 times
Kicked on round 1
1 time

Miniature Muffins

02:18:37 Dulcie's Spot Farm

I should see if I get hoof kissed by Nigel or not

Wild Wind Stables

01:32:34 Wind

Is placing in the top 30 on a freshman sire single breed leaderboard any good?

Kuewi knn stable

01:31:21 Bazinga Force

@Palomino: usually they need more training sessions to place good.
With just 1 training that colt you have entered ATM will not place, too.
Check the guide forums for training and showing guides

Dash and Duchess

12:41:22 DD | ~Squizard~

*of

Dash and Duchess

12:41:09 DD | ~Squizard~

I'm surprised I haven't beaten Nigel every time xD I've got a history with extremely difficult ponies 🤣 *cough one if this stable's namesakes cough*

Fantasy Horses

12:39:33 Fantasy | Fanta

The first time I tried, I cleaned Nigel, and now he hates me lol

Dash and Duchess

12:24:05 DD | ~Squizard~

Ooo he's beautiful!! Good luck on 7s Diva!

Mooncloud Magic

12:23:20 🧸 Diva

I got one coming myself I'm a bit excited for, but I try not to expect too much
-HEE Click-

Palomino Meadow

12:23:18

None of my horses placed :( I dont get what Im doing wrong

Dash and Duchess

12:18:52 DD | ~Squizard~

Angel, it seems like it XD they like to surprise us lol!

Galloping_Gems

12:17:50 Gemstone

-HEE Click-
Thank you sooooo much for all the help Angel!

Angels angels

12:16:50 [1k+ brindles] Angel

DD
I feel like that is how a lot of WWWs come about lol

Galloping_Gems

12:08:34 Gemstone

-HEE Click-
This little baby is such a adorable thing

Dash and Duchess

12:08:04 DD | ~Squizard~

Diva, thank you!! Somehow it's the second time my first WWW on an account has come from a random W combo mare on a yolo match 🤣

Mooncloud Magic

12:07:23 🧸 Diva

Will do Eve, thanks

Mooncloud Magic

12:07:03 🧸 Diva

That's awesome and with a wee gal, you got some powerful RF

Cadence Farms

12:06:54 evebot

Diva please put that in the bug forum so it gets on my radar.

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Constructive Criticism

January 8, 2018 05:39 PM

Former Stable

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Hey! I'm just wondering where I can improve my art :) I haven't been doing for that long so any any help is appreciated!

This is my most recent piece:

https://horseeden.com/horse.php?id=15154277

Thanks!

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January 8, 2018 05:49 PM

Wings Of Glory

Posts: 2670
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my only thing i have to say is that the background looks a bit too blurry but otherwise i love this piece

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January 8, 2018 10:58 PM

Casanova

Posts: 1522
#106696
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$Wings of Glory$ said:
my only thing i have to say is that the background looks a bit too blurry but otherwise i love this piece

Partly agree with this. Maybe try and make the horse clearer/sharper to match the little baby tree next to it? Overall a beautiful piece. Great work.

EDIT: Also, maybe try playing with the highlights on the horse? Just look at the light source.

Edited at January 8, 2018 11:02 PM by Oceane Elites

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January 8, 2018 11:07 PM

Former Stable

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Oceane Elites said:

$Wings of Glory$ said:
my only thing i have to say is that the background looks a bit too blurry but otherwise i love this piece

Partly agree with this. Maybe try and make the horse clearer/sharper to match the little baby tree next to it? Overall a beautiful piece. Great work.

EDIT: Also, maybe try playing with the highlights on the horse? Just look at the light source.

Yeah good point! Im just starting to add highlights and lowlights into my manips now ao hopefully that will be fixed soon xD

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