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Pon Brats
02:30:00 
I don't have much hope for that one, AL xD
Sweet Valley
02:24:38 Anna/Jewel
Cute teardrop on her forehead
ArcticLights
02:23:57 Ceci / (Call me) AL
Nice RF on that one
Pon Brats
02:22:15 
Just like this one
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Pon Brats
02:19:45 
That's so fitting AL xD
ArcticLights
02:19:22 Ceci / (Call me) AL
Maybe name her Forgetmenot LOL
Ashcroft Park Stud
02:18:06 
She must've been a nice surprise! :)
Sport Pony Island
02:17:38 
lol
Pon Brats
02:16:54 
Yep. I kept breeding my pixels, thinking i didn't get anything good this RO. Because i for the hell of it couldn't remember breeding her
Sport Pony Island
02:16:10 
She's a WWW
Pon Brats
02:15:10 
... I can't remember breeding her
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Vancouver
02:15:02 Ana / Van
Now in almost 3 years I have bred 15 WWWs!
Vancouver
02:14:20 Ana / Van
I saved up to buy a WWW mare in my earlier years and matched her well to get more WWWs :)
Greenheart Stables
02:11:52 Green|Gren|Grenlin
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We got some good TBs this RO 👀
ShiningStar Stables
02:11:07 Chey / Star
Oooh, Tosk she is gorgeous 😍
Equile
02:08:36 Tosk's RID
She surprised me
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Nanami
02:08:00 
seems to be insane luck, although I did come close with one of my breedings :3
Caramel
02:07:34 Keijo Or Lake
Im at 1 and 1\2 years mostly EWW's. It just takes time, paitence, and attention to detail
ShiningStar Stables
02:07:23 Chey / Star
If this brat throws me one more EEE I'm free ranging her ass LOL
She already lost her pretty art privileges
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Sport Pony Island
02:07:11 
Byee, gonna go

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Pon Brats
02:30:00 
I don't have much hope for that one, AL xD
Sweet Valley
02:24:38 Anna/Jewel
Cute teardrop on her forehead
ArcticLights
02:23:57 Ceci / (Call me) AL
Nice RF on that one
Pon Brats
02:22:15 
Just like this one
-HEE Click-
Pon Brats
02:19:45 
That's so fitting AL xD
ArcticLights
02:19:22 Ceci / (Call me) AL
Maybe name her Forgetmenot LOL
Ashcroft Park Stud
02:18:06 
She must've been a nice surprise! :)
Sport Pony Island
02:17:38 
lol
Pon Brats
02:16:54 
Yep. I kept breeding my pixels, thinking i didn't get anything good this RO. Because i for the hell of it couldn't remember breeding her
Sport Pony Island
02:16:10 
She's a WWW
Pon Brats
02:15:10 
... I can't remember breeding her
-HEE Click-
Vancouver
02:15:02 Ana / Van
Now in almost 3 years I have bred 15 WWWs!
Vancouver
02:14:20 Ana / Van
I saved up to buy a WWW mare in my earlier years and matched her well to get more WWWs :)
Greenheart Stables
02:11:52 Green|Gren|Grenlin
-HEE Click-
-HEE Click-
We got some good TBs this RO 👀
ShiningStar Stables
02:11:07 Chey / Star
Oooh, Tosk she is gorgeous 😍
Equile
02:08:36 Tosk's RID
She surprised me
-HEE Click-
Nanami
02:08:00 
seems to be insane luck, although I did come close with one of my breedings :3
Caramel
02:07:34 Keijo Or Lake
Im at 1 and 1\2 years mostly EWW's. It just takes time, paitence, and attention to detail
ShiningStar Stables
02:07:23 Chey / Star
If this brat throws me one more EEE I'm free ranging her ass LOL
She already lost her pretty art privileges
-HEE Click-
Sport Pony Island
02:07:11 
Byee, gonna go

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Art Critique December 19, 2023 02:52 AM


Golden Crest
 
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Hey everyone!

I am still learning the ropes of art and finding my style, so I would love some critique of my progress so far. Here are some pieces I have done with different themes, I would love if anyone experienced in the art field could please give me some pointers?

I really do thank you in advance and appreciate your time :)



Art Critique December 19, 2023 02:36 PM


Olive
 
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Though im not in the art field id like to say your style is unique in a way and really cute
But #1 The WIngs Need To be Blended Into The Body And The Color Match the Coat
#2 Your Eyes Need A Bit Of Work
#3 Try Blending your legs Into The Grass A Bit more or add a layer or grass ontop of it
#4 same thing
#5 I think the fawns lighting is a bit off
#6 its my favorite but try to blend the socket of the wing in a bit
Art Critique December 19, 2023 04:21 PM


KPH Equestrian
 
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I agree with Olive, but the biggest thing is shadows and reflections <3 I don't know which app you use, but I love Krita.
I've been compiling my favorite tutorials for a while now, I'll edit in a bit with em<3
Edit: Here they all are, in no particular order :3
Roanies Manip Tutorial(Love this one!)
Hope these help<3

Edited at December 19, 2023 08:33 PM by KPH Equestrian
Art Critique December 20, 2023 02:45 PM


WildWillow
 
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The first things I notice are a lack of a shadow on the ground and a lack of depth (shadow/highlight) on your horses. I definitely recommend checking out the tutorials that KPH has listed. I think learning to place a shadow on the ground as well as add shadows and highlights to your horse, mane/tail, and wings will really take your art to a next level. :) I go over this in my tutorial (KPH linked to it).

I think another thing to pay attention to is the tone of your background compared to the horse. For example, the background of your last piece is very blue/green toned while your horse has more of a yellow tone. If your program has a Color Balance tool, you can use this to adjust the tone of your horse to match the same tones as your background. This can be super helpful to get your horse to "fit" in its background.
You can also adjust the tones of the "extras" in your art (antlers, wings, animals) to fit both your horse and the background.
It's amazing what difference the little details can make!

I think you really have down the other major foundation components to art - such as horse body prep and the beginnings of grounding. For your grounding, I would go in with a softer, translucent brush to erase legs so it blends easier into your background.
I really like your manes and tails - that last piece especially has some phenomenal hair action!

If you have any questions, my mailbox is always open!

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