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Sunni
04:01:32 Sunni bunny
Haha, my mom's neighbor had to show me where to find the tire size.
I feel so stupid right now but, am so drained my brain just won't work.
Greenheart Stables
03:58:07 Green|Gren|Grenlin
@Myth
Oh dear 😬, was the dog older or just had bad teeth?
Mythological
03:57:17 Crowley
2 weeks ago my mom's yorkie got taken in for an emergency visit. She had blood poisoning from her teeth.
Greenheart Stables
03:55:28 Green|Gren|Grenlin
@Myth
Thats good! What did you go for? I missed that part running errends
Mythological
03:54:48 Crowley
Green
Good Pol thanked us for not doing anything crazy and just seeing if the antibiotics helped.
Greenheart Stables
03:53:41 Green|Gren|Grenlin
Heyy myth, how was the vet visit?
Mythological
03:53:18 Crowley
Hey Green
Greenheart Stables
03:52:42 Green|Gren|Grenlin
@Angel
Fair, maybe if I hate my peace before RO I'll go threw with it
Angels angels
03:51:14 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Green
Nah too much work for no reason lol
Greenheart Stables
03:50:40 Green|Gren|Grenlin
I wonder if I should do a zero inbreeding project for myself and fun, see how far I can get, and only use inside stock as much as possible
Snitches' Stitches
03:47:56 Snitch
New link works, Very pretty! I like how the mane and tail turned out
Canterwood Acres
03:47:23 Canter
I think I fixed it
Snitches' Stitches
03:46:15 Snitch
First is gorgeous canter, second is a broken link though:/
Canterwood Acres
03:45:50 Canter
-HEE Click-
Canterwood Acres
03:45:29 Canter
-HEE Click- I also just rerolled her <3
Snitches' Stitches
03:45:25 Snitch
Ivy! Hello!
Crestwood Eq.
03:44:39 Ivy / poison ivy
Of course!
Canterwood Acres
03:44:26 Canter
thank you!
Crestwood Eq.
03:44:18 Ivy / poison ivy
Canter

Happy Birthday and happy hee anniversary
Canterwood Acres
03:43:59 Canter
-HEE Click-
ooh look at what the dapples did O_o

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Sunni
04:01:32 Sunni bunny
Haha, my mom's neighbor had to show me where to find the tire size.
I feel so stupid right now but, am so drained my brain just won't work.
Greenheart Stables
03:58:07 Green|Gren|Grenlin
@Myth
Oh dear 😬, was the dog older or just had bad teeth?
Mythological
03:57:17 Crowley
2 weeks ago my mom's yorkie got taken in for an emergency visit. She had blood poisoning from her teeth.
Greenheart Stables
03:55:28 Green|Gren|Grenlin
@Myth
Thats good! What did you go for? I missed that part running errends
Mythological
03:54:48 Crowley
Green
Good Pol thanked us for not doing anything crazy and just seeing if the antibiotics helped.
Greenheart Stables
03:53:41 Green|Gren|Grenlin
Heyy myth, how was the vet visit?
Mythological
03:53:18 Crowley
Hey Green
Greenheart Stables
03:52:42 Green|Gren|Grenlin
@Angel
Fair, maybe if I hate my peace before RO I'll go threw with it
Angels angels
03:51:14 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Green
Nah too much work for no reason lol
Greenheart Stables
03:50:40 Green|Gren|Grenlin
I wonder if I should do a zero inbreeding project for myself and fun, see how far I can get, and only use inside stock as much as possible
Snitches' Stitches
03:47:56 Snitch
New link works, Very pretty! I like how the mane and tail turned out
Canterwood Acres
03:47:23 Canter
I think I fixed it
Snitches' Stitches
03:46:15 Snitch
First is gorgeous canter, second is a broken link though:/
Canterwood Acres
03:45:50 Canter
-HEE Click-
Canterwood Acres
03:45:29 Canter
-HEE Click- I also just rerolled her <3
Snitches' Stitches
03:45:25 Snitch
Ivy! Hello!
Crestwood Eq.
03:44:39 Ivy / poison ivy
Of course!
Canterwood Acres
03:44:26 Canter
thank you!
Crestwood Eq.
03:44:18 Ivy / poison ivy
Canter

Happy Birthday and happy hee anniversary
Canterwood Acres
03:43:59 Canter
-HEE Click-
ooh look at what the dapples did O_o

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Photo critiques? June 27, 2022 07:57 PM

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(Added shadow; Thanks Brook xD)
So this is my favorite piece that I have done. I am currently a T3 artist and this is my first piece that I have painted on (war paint), done a proper mane for, and tried to make the horse blend with its surroundings (which not gonna lie is quite nice imo.) But I feel like there's just something missing. I hope you guys can help me figure it out. Critiques on the piece in general are obviously appreciated.

Edited at June 27, 2022 08:11 PM by Araminta Farms
Photo critiques? June 27, 2022 08:04 PM


Brook Mill Dressage
 
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I'm not an artist. I have ZERO art abilities. I just thought I'd get that out of the way ;)
I think adding the shadow of the horse would really help so that it look more planted (I think). I hope this helps? Just the first think that came to me! Otherwise, it's quite good and the mane is quite nice :)
Photo critiques? June 27, 2022 08:07 PM

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I actually forgot the shadow. *facepalm* I just went in to fix it, posting the edited version now since adding a shadow is very easy lol

Brook Mill Dressage said:
I'm not an artist. I have ZERO art abilities. I just thought I'd get that out of the way ;)
I think adding the shadow of the horse would really help so that it look more planted (I think). I hope this helps? Just the first think that came to me! Otherwise, it's quite good and the mane is quite nice :)


Photo critiques? June 27, 2022 08:12 PM

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There is potential here! The horse is the size of a titan right now. It is much too big for the background. The shadow you added does not line up with the horse either, and it's a little sharp for such chill lighting in my opinion. There are details lost by the smudging on the horse that you could definitely benefit from drawing back in. Those are the main things throwing the piece off, plus poor grounding.
Photo critiques? June 27, 2022 11:52 PM

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One thing that may help is adding highlight! If the sun is shining in front of the horse (causing the shadow to go behind him) Then you could add a highlight where the sun would hit the horse directly like his mane, top of face/ears, front of the legs(ish) and upper back!
Photo critiques? June 28, 2022 09:49 AM


Kuewi knn stable

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Additionally please use a more readable size and font for the credits - thanks ;)

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