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WWW ISH mare for sale
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Eagles Peak
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SH Sale Barn: -HEE Click-

SH Broodmares: -HEE Click-

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Valhalla Acreage
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WWW AALB sire up for stud
MockingJay
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Looking for a 3 month upgrade! I have the ebs on hand and ready to send straight away!
Whispering Wood Barn
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Hey, Hey Color Breeders, If you happen to breed anything matching my color program ISO list, please reach out to me! I am looking for new blood to grow my lines 😊

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Boulder Creek
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The Pretty Pony Pageant Needs You!!!

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Painted Dreams
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ISO a 3 month upgrade! Have the funds ON HAND and will pay top price!
Legazy Stables
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Help me test - EWE combo producer so far :)
Alpine Acres
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Secretariat Ranch
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Critiques? November 21, 2017 11:01 PM


Casanova
 
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http://funkyimg.com/i/2zyRe.jpg

I want to know how to improve my art further :3 Please critique!
Critiques? November 22, 2017 11:54 AM

Former Stable
 
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OMG!! Love It!
Critiques? November 22, 2017 04:31 PM

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Why would you need to inprove you are SO good!!
Critiques? November 22, 2017 04:36 PM


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The Wild Child said:
OMG!! Love It!




Rosiebud said:
Why would you need to inprove you are SO good!!


Thanks <3
Critiques? November 22, 2017 04:36 PM

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how do you make art?
Critiques? November 22, 2017 04:38 PM


Andraste Equine
 
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Only thing I really noticed is that the horse needs some more red/orange/yellow midtones which you can adjust in Colour Balance. Just the slightest bit makes the horse seem more like it belongs. Nice work though :)
Critiques? November 22, 2017 04:53 PM


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Arven Equine said:
Only thing I really noticed is that the horse needs some more red/orange/yellow midtones which you can adjust in Colour Balance. Just the slightest bit makes the horse seem more like it belongs. Nice work though :)


I was wondering what was missing! Something seemed a little out of place but I couldn't seem to find what. Thanks :)
Critiques? November 22, 2017 05:23 PM


Hollow Tree Acres
 
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I agree with the color balance part, but I'd also fix the mane a bit. The hair width looks a bit large to me. Other than that, looks great! :)
Critiques? November 22, 2017 05:25 PM

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I am no artist but maybe make the credits stand out less. Yes, make them readable but maybe for that piece make them grey or put them in the sky. Just an opinion. :)
Critiques? November 22, 2017 09:03 PM

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I feel like the tail needs to be moe flowing and spread out more. But other than that it looks great!

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