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Mythological
06:34:58 Crowley
DD!
ArcticLights
06:13:53 Ceci / (Call me) AL
Loki is medium sized :)
Dash and Duchess
06:10:50 DD | ~Squizard~
4 1/2 mile hike done 😅
Mythological
06:01:39 Crowley
16.2hh 🥲
ArcticLights
05:54:23 Ceci / (Call me) AL
Oh I love that look!
Mythological
05:52:05 Crowley
-HEE Click-
Mythological
05:51:00 Crowley
Ceci
I rerolled Loki!
ArcticLights
05:50:38 Ceci / (Call me) AL
Thanks, and same to you :)
Mythological
05:49:46 Crowley
Congrats
Mythological
05:48:34 Crowley
Ooh
ArcticLights
05:48:31 Ceci / (Call me) AL
-HEE Click-

The X girlie
ArcticLights
05:47:45 Ceci / (Call me) AL
-HEE Click-

The TB filly
ArcticLights
05:47:07 Ceci / (Call me) AL
Oh, he is gorgeous! I got 2 WWWs. A ZZ TB filly and a tobi prlprl X filly. Let me find links
Mythological
05:45:47 Crowley
-HEE Click-

You?
ArcticLights
05:44:32 Ceci / (Call me) AL
Hey Myth, how was RO?
Mythological
05:44:03 Crowley
Heyo Ceci
ArcticLights
05:37:29 Ceci / (Call me) AL
Friendly reminder that its trivia today at 1pm gametime. Topics not known yet :)
Calela Eventing
04:10:21 Cali
River
Ohh, thank you!
The Valley
04:06:22 River
If you hover over the symbol it shows Member of JRA
Calela Eventing
04:04:00 Cali
You know when your on list view in the stables? Obviously all my horses have the M by them for Managed but one of them has this Diamond symbol???

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Mythological
06:34:58 Crowley
DD!
ArcticLights
06:13:53 Ceci / (Call me) AL
Loki is medium sized :)
Dash and Duchess
06:10:50 DD | ~Squizard~
4 1/2 mile hike done 😅
Mythological
06:01:39 Crowley
16.2hh 🥲
ArcticLights
05:54:23 Ceci / (Call me) AL
Oh I love that look!
Mythological
05:52:05 Crowley
-HEE Click-
Mythological
05:51:00 Crowley
Ceci
I rerolled Loki!
ArcticLights
05:50:38 Ceci / (Call me) AL
Thanks, and same to you :)
Mythological
05:49:46 Crowley
Congrats
Mythological
05:48:34 Crowley
Ooh
ArcticLights
05:48:31 Ceci / (Call me) AL
-HEE Click-

The X girlie
ArcticLights
05:47:45 Ceci / (Call me) AL
-HEE Click-

The TB filly
ArcticLights
05:47:07 Ceci / (Call me) AL
Oh, he is gorgeous! I got 2 WWWs. A ZZ TB filly and a tobi prlprl X filly. Let me find links
Mythological
05:45:47 Crowley
-HEE Click-

You?
ArcticLights
05:44:32 Ceci / (Call me) AL
Hey Myth, how was RO?
Mythological
05:44:03 Crowley
Heyo Ceci
ArcticLights
05:37:29 Ceci / (Call me) AL
Friendly reminder that its trivia today at 1pm gametime. Topics not known yet :)
Calela Eventing
04:10:21 Cali
River
Ohh, thank you!
The Valley
04:06:22 River
If you hover over the symbol it shows Member of JRA
Calela Eventing
04:04:00 Cali
You know when your on list view in the stables? Obviously all my horses have the M by them for Managed but one of them has this Diamond symbol???

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than 1 day before you can use our chatbox.






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Art feedback June 13, 2018 05:50 AM

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Here’s an example of my art
http://i63.tinypic.com/oax2c3.jpg
I was wondering if anyone could give me feedback and ways to improve

Edited at June 13, 2018 05:50 AM by Kirralee stud farm
Art feedback June 13, 2018 06:52 PM

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Wonderful job cutting out your horse! Maybe smudge the horse a little bit less to reserve some of the quality and muscle tone.

Use Brightness/Contrast, Colour Balance to help blend your horses into the background more and make them look as if they belong. (If you use PS then you can play around with Auto Tone/Colour/Contrast)

Horses need shadows ;) Shadows, though you may not realize it at first, make a huge difference in how real you picture looks.

Maybe try adding some highlights/lowlights to help your horse pop.

Most artists also like to redraw eyes to give them a little more life.


Hope this helps! Also, there are tons of tutorials on DA that can help you improve! You are doing very good!
Art feedback June 14, 2018 12:48 AM

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Art feedback June 14, 2018 01:29 AM

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It's a great precut. It is, however, overly smudged in my opinion. Much like Trinity said, not smudging as much preserves detail.
Adjust the hue/brightness so it blends better with the background
Adding shadows and drawing on hair and highlights will give it a ton more detail also.

Great job
Art feedback June 14, 2018 03:48 AM

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Art feedback June 14, 2018 04:16 AM

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http://i63.tinypic.com/30kvfb7.jpg
Is that better

Edited at June 14, 2018 06:53 AM by Kirralee stud farm
Art feedback June 14, 2018 07:17 AM

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What art program do you use?

If the shadow stays the sharp the you need to have it outline the horse more. I think in this case the shadow can be softer. Try adding darker spots and softer sides a bit more.

Also don't blur the background as much. Keep the foreground sharp and the background slightly blurred if you are going to do it.

I think the horse could still use a little less smudging.
Art feedback June 15, 2018 03:13 AM

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Ok
I use
ibisPaint X on IPhone

Thanks

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