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Angels angels
03:10:34 [1k+ brindles] Angel
I believe it is just straight glucose syrup lol
MakeEm Fancy
03:10:21 Ally 💜
I have heard orange was the go to. I was going to pick orange cause I had an appointment scheduled and that didnt happen
Black Dragon Stable
03:09:45 BDS / Black / Stormy
I was given orange... I don't care for orange. But surprisingly, it was one of the only things that went down easy and stayed down while I was expecting.
Green River Stables
03:08:40 
That sucks BDS! I'm 29 wks preggers so I get the joys of doing it lol

I did the lemon lime flavor, it did not taste like lemon lime
Green River Stables
03:07:46 
Angel
It was like chugging syrup almost... Lol
Black Dragon Stable
03:07:34 BDS / Black / Stormy
This was while I was expecting.
Sunni
03:07:15 Sunni bunny
Green I hated those drinks I tired both flavors.
The fruit punch one was awful I felt so sick.
Black Dragon Stable
03:07:05 BDS / Black / Stormy
My doctor was insistent that I was diabetic, so I had to do the glucose test and came back as not diabetic and she was so mad at being wrong that she wanted me to test again... and again.

She's not my doctor any more.
MakeEm Fancy
03:07:02 Ally 💜
I never had to do it but I have heard its gross
Angels angels
03:06:38 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Green
Oh I have heard it is nasty lol
Green River Stables
03:05:13 
I was not expecting the drink for my glucose test to taste like straight sugar. Dear lord that was disgusting
MakeEm Fancy
03:04:34 Ally 💜
Lol pheezy
MakeEm Fancy
03:04:16 Ally 💜
Eekkk im so excited for tomorrow
pandemoniu_m
03:04:14 pheezy
ally
she almost looks just like my Jacket (you'll never guess how i came up with that name XD)
-HEE Click-
Angels angels
03:03:35 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Pheezy
I haven't been back from my break long enough for my good horses to be old enough to pass lol so yeah I will keep them when they are retired
Wild_Potatoes
03:03:16 
Ohhh thanks, 😂
pandemoniu_m
03:02:37 pheezy
angels
i'll do the same eventually but its sentimental for now, the seniors i have are the first generation i raised after really starting to take the game seriously so their lines contributed a lot either to the color program or the ratings
Angels angels
03:02:34 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Wild
It has to be empty
MakeEm Fancy
03:02:31 Ally 💜
This girly is still kicking it
-HEE Click-
Wild_Potatoes
03:02:13 
I keep all senior horses since I feel bad FR them to me it’s like letting a toddler onto the streets 😂
Also how do I turn the pasture to a memorial one, I don’t see a button

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Angels angels
03:10:34 [1k+ brindles] Angel
I believe it is just straight glucose syrup lol
MakeEm Fancy
03:10:21 Ally 💜
I have heard orange was the go to. I was going to pick orange cause I had an appointment scheduled and that didnt happen
Black Dragon Stable
03:09:45 BDS / Black / Stormy
I was given orange... I don't care for orange. But surprisingly, it was one of the only things that went down easy and stayed down while I was expecting.
Green River Stables
03:08:40 
That sucks BDS! I'm 29 wks preggers so I get the joys of doing it lol

I did the lemon lime flavor, it did not taste like lemon lime
Green River Stables
03:07:46 
Angel
It was like chugging syrup almost... Lol
Black Dragon Stable
03:07:34 BDS / Black / Stormy
This was while I was expecting.
Sunni
03:07:15 Sunni bunny
Green I hated those drinks I tired both flavors.
The fruit punch one was awful I felt so sick.
Black Dragon Stable
03:07:05 BDS / Black / Stormy
My doctor was insistent that I was diabetic, so I had to do the glucose test and came back as not diabetic and she was so mad at being wrong that she wanted me to test again... and again.

She's not my doctor any more.
MakeEm Fancy
03:07:02 Ally 💜
I never had to do it but I have heard its gross
Angels angels
03:06:38 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Green
Oh I have heard it is nasty lol
Green River Stables
03:05:13 
I was not expecting the drink for my glucose test to taste like straight sugar. Dear lord that was disgusting
MakeEm Fancy
03:04:34 Ally 💜
Lol pheezy
MakeEm Fancy
03:04:16 Ally 💜
Eekkk im so excited for tomorrow
pandemoniu_m
03:04:14 pheezy
ally
she almost looks just like my Jacket (you'll never guess how i came up with that name XD)
-HEE Click-
Angels angels
03:03:35 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Pheezy
I haven't been back from my break long enough for my good horses to be old enough to pass lol so yeah I will keep them when they are retired
Wild_Potatoes
03:03:16 
Ohhh thanks, 😂
pandemoniu_m
03:02:37 pheezy
angels
i'll do the same eventually but its sentimental for now, the seniors i have are the first generation i raised after really starting to take the game seriously so their lines contributed a lot either to the color program or the ratings
Angels angels
03:02:34 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Wild
It has to be empty
MakeEm Fancy
03:02:31 Ally 💜
This girly is still kicking it
-HEE Click-
Wild_Potatoes
03:02:13 
I keep all senior horses since I feel bad FR them to me it’s like letting a toddler onto the streets 😂
Also how do I turn the pasture to a memorial one, I don’t see a button

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Critique? August 8, 2017 04:08 PM


Casanova
 
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Looking for critique on this art piece:
https://s2.postimg.org/4tsarxbjt/IMG_6779.jpg
** I know the front legs look crossed! If the hooves were showing I don't think it would be that way! **

Also looking for advice on tips and tricks!
Critique? August 8, 2017 04:22 PM


Pyramid Equestrian
 
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I'm no art expert but, the tail looks flat, there is no difference in color it is all the same color. Personally I would also like it longer. I would put a reflection in the water too, I know there are Lilly pads but there are still some areas where a reflection is needed. Lastly, the horse should also be a little smaller because the nose shouldn't be almost chopped off. Hope this helps :)
Critique? August 8, 2017 04:23 PM


Casanova
 
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Pyramid Equestrian said:
I'm no art expert but, the tail looks flat, there is no difference in color it is all the same color. Personally I would also like it longer. I would put a reflection in the water too, I know there are Lilly pads but there are still some areas where a reflection is needed. Lastly, the horse should also be a little smaller because the nose shouldn't be almost chopped off. Hope this helps :)


Thank you for the critique! I will go see what I can do to fix some of this :)
Critique? August 8, 2017 04:25 PM


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Im like the queen of critiques today hehe

Background
- I would select most of the background (from around the end of the horses tail and up) and blur it out a bit. It will draw more focus to the horse.
- It seems as though you just took the bg without editing it at all, which is fine, but I personally would have tainted it more of a blue-hue or something of the sorts. Remeber to experiment instead of just going right to the original BG!
- I would add a darkened, precise reflection to the water here. Duplicate the horse layer, position it behind the horse, and laying on the water, and then darken it, and lower the opacity. Then, erase all of the spots where the lilly pads are, and replace that with a very light shadow, so that there is a reflection on the visible water, and a light shadow on the lilly pads. :)

Horse
Lighting
The lighting in this photo is quite nice. Its not a super difficult bg to work with, and you definatley chose a great stock image to pair it with. Well done!

Horse Body
- Great job with the majority of the body, I really like the way you prepped its coat! Just right on smudging and such.
- As for where his legs meet the water, I would reccomend a clean cut instead of a fade into the water. in real life, thats how it would really work. I would also add ripples in the water where the legs meet (you can find ones that are ready to go on DA) to add some detail.
- The eye needs some work. The horse in question has a small eye in this photo, so you need to be very precise. You definatley have the right idea here, but remember, practice makes perfect!

Mane and Tail
- Mane looks fine to me, it seems that in this image the mane was roached (shaved) so you didnt have to worry about that.
- Tail needs a bit more expression. Grab a 1px brush in 100% smudge mode and fan it out a bit. remember to use curved lines with movement!

Accessory
- I like your idea here, but the flower needs to be smaller. I would also put some shadows around it to make it fit in the image better.


I hope this helps!
Critique? August 8, 2017 04:41 PM


Casanova
 
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Thank you! I'll experiment with reflections (Not very experienced with shadows and reflections) and I'll edit the tail a bit more. I'll go see what I can do with the background and I'll see what I can do with the flower.

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