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Horse Eden Eventing Game

Horse Eden Eventing Game

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09:17:19 Tosk's KNN

Try it 😁

Morning Glory Farms

09:17:01 Terici/Dino/Trish

-HEE Click- Im so tempted to do this this year and just see what i get

Insignia Elites

09:11:43 Em

He looks like he has some spunk xD -HEE Click-

09:10:04 Tosk's KNN

But it's SD :(

Glacier Bay Cove

09:09:01 Arctic Katz

That is a gorgeous meh, Tosk

Dash and Duchess

09:08:30 DD | ~Squizard~

Sassy, I could help :)

09:08:00 Tosk's KNN

Meh

-HEE Click-

09:01:38 Ivy / poison ivy

Good Girl -HEE Click-

Niallator Acres

09:00:34 Ivy - Niallator side

hi

08:55:32 ✨ Sassy

Would anyone be willing to help me match my mare please? <3

08:50:14 Kelan/Rain

So far she looks to be on track for it!

08:42:23 Tosk's KNN

I'm hoping for her to be my next Wish
-HEE Click-

08:41:38 Kelan/Rain

Lol, well see, I never discount how your luck goes

08:39:17 Tosk's KNN

I got 3 wild www last month. My luck might have run out for the next months xD

08:38:48 Kelan/Rain

Lol, your wild luck somewhat failed this time

08:38:11 Kelan/Rain

I meant glad their KNNs are still helping, this coffee needs to be drank asap

08:38:05 Tosk's KNN

Rude.
-HEE Click-

08:37:48 Heyy it's Capp

No please XD my barns runneth over. Thank you tho!

08:37:06 Tosk's KNN

I am about to ditch a bunch of my dressage wubs, if you need some, before I freerange.

08:37:06 Kelan/Rain

Thanks tosk, couldn't do it without you since her grandpa is bas lol. Still sad spotty left, but glad she's still helping the KNNs.

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09:17:19 Tosk's KNN

Try it 😁

Morning Glory Farms

09:17:01 Terici/Dino/Trish

-HEE Click- Im so tempted to do this this year and just see what i get

Insignia Elites

09:11:43 Em

He looks like he has some spunk xD -HEE Click-

09:10:04 Tosk's KNN

But it's SD :(

Glacier Bay Cove

09:09:01 Arctic Katz

That is a gorgeous meh, Tosk

Dash and Duchess

09:08:30 DD | ~Squizard~

Sassy, I could help :)

09:08:00 Tosk's KNN

Meh

-HEE Click-

09:01:38 Ivy / poison ivy

Good Girl -HEE Click-

Niallator Acres

09:00:34 Ivy - Niallator side

hi

08:55:32 ✨ Sassy

Would anyone be willing to help me match my mare please? <3

08:50:14 Kelan/Rain

So far she looks to be on track for it!

08:42:23 Tosk's KNN

I'm hoping for her to be my next Wish
-HEE Click-

08:41:38 Kelan/Rain

Lol, well see, I never discount how your luck goes

08:39:17 Tosk's KNN

I got 3 wild www last month. My luck might have run out for the next months xD

08:38:48 Kelan/Rain

Lol, your wild luck somewhat failed this time

08:38:11 Kelan/Rain

I meant glad their KNNs are still helping, this coffee needs to be drank asap

08:38:05 Tosk's KNN

Rude.
-HEE Click-

08:37:48 Heyy it's Capp

No please XD my barns runneth over. Thank you tho!

08:37:06 Tosk's KNN

I am about to ditch a bunch of my dressage wubs, if you need some, before I freerange.

08:37:06 Kelan/Rain

Thanks tosk, couldn't do it without you since her grandpa is bas lol. Still sad spotty left, but glad she's still helping the KNNs.

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November 21, 2017 11:01 PM

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http://funkyimg.com/i/2zyRe.jpg

I want to know how to improve my art further :3 Please critique!

November 22, 2017 11:54 AM

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OMG!! Love It!

November 22, 2017 04:31 PM

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Why would you need to inprove you are SO good!!

November 22, 2017 04:36 PM

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The Wild Child said:
OMG!! Love It!

Rosiebud said:
Why would you need to inprove you are SO good!!

Thanks <3

November 22, 2017 04:36 PM

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how do you make art?

November 22, 2017 04:38 PM

Andraste Equine

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Only thing I really noticed is that the horse needs some more red/orange/yellow midtones which you can adjust in Colour Balance. Just the slightest bit makes the horse seem more like it belongs. Nice work though :)

November 22, 2017 04:53 PM

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Arven Equine said:
Only thing I really noticed is that the horse needs some more red/orange/yellow midtones which you can adjust in Colour Balance. Just the slightest bit makes the horse seem more like it belongs. Nice work though :)

I was wondering what was missing! Something seemed a little out of place but I couldn't seem to find what. Thanks :)

November 22, 2017 05:23 PM

Hollow Tree Acres

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I agree with the color balance part, but I'd also fix the mane a bit. The hair width looks a bit large to me. Other than that, looks great! :)

November 22, 2017 05:25 PM

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I am no artist but maybe make the credits stand out less. Yes, make them readable but maybe for that piece make them grey or put them in the sky. Just an opinion. :)

November 22, 2017 09:03 PM

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I feel like the tail needs to be moe flowing and spread out more. But other than that it looks great!

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