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Looking for a 3 month upgrade asap!
Chase's Place
09:46:01 :)Chase
Horses for breeding
-HEE Click-

Shop - new things added constantly
-HEE Click-

ISO
-HEE Click-
SunStar SportHorses
09:24:22 
WWW SH freshman - live covers and straws still available! On 4 leaderboards and produced 2 WWW this year!
-HEE Click-
hookfang
08:51:29 
Mix of brindles for sale KNN & WBB sss through EEE
-HEE Click-
Port Royal Equines
08:22:49 Lvl 6+ Gelds 4 Sale
Iso 50pk rerolls.

Dozens of Lvl 6+ Geldings for 4k!

-HEE Click-
Bravery mares, Geldings, and more at auction. 1k start.

-HEE Click-
Freezer cleanout! These straws need to go. All discounted. Ablb retirees included.

I am also taking embryo offers on all of my EWW+ girls. PM if interested. :)
JP Show Stables
08:21:28 
Looking to buy an upgrade
Epona
08:18:58 Mill$sen
selling 3 month upgrades 200k pm me
Scout Creek
08:18:13 Scout
WES mare for sale, 15k
-HEE Click-
Horse Haven Stables
08:11:57 HHS⎹ Lyla
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EEE-WWW Mares auction! Includes:
-Wild PEE-E SH Mare
-EEW/EWE/WEE SH and ISH Mares
-EWW SH Mare
-WWW ISH Mare
Come check 'em out! Need them gone :) 1 Hour left!!
Connally Stud
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Critiques/Tips March 11, 2018 09:35 PM


~Savy~
 
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#136184
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https://image.ibb.co/ejyrTS/Untitled.png
So this is my most recent image. I played with it for an hour or two, and besides the eyes, I am rather happy with it.
However, this is only my 5th or 6th piece, so I know there must be room for improvement. I am looking for suggestions to improve my style of art, as well as comments on the piece as a whole.
Please, constructive, reasonable suggestions only. I am still very new to the art world :P
Critiques/Tips March 11, 2018 10:57 PM


Hallucination Manor
 
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I would make the feet look more grounded in the grass if you want examples of what I mean you can PM me :D
Critiques/Tips March 11, 2018 11:10 PM


~Savy~
 
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I can see what you mean there. Adding some grass to the hooves would've helped.
Critiques/Tips March 11, 2018 11:14 PM

Former Stable
 
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Looove it. :D My advice would be using the eraser tool to clean up the lines on the legs! Also smudging the tail in the direction the hair would be going or creating individual strands (tedious though)
It looks amazing, what a great start. <3
Critiques/Tips March 11, 2018 11:36 PM


~Savy~
 
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I agree, the legs were looking a bit messy the more I looked at it. I attempted to draw individual strands, I just think the smudging went weird. Maybe I should go on more than one layer? I just find then it's tedious to smudge :P

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