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Angels angels
06:37:32 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Em
It means they have straws for sale
Insignia Elites
06:35:48 Em
What does the dot mean next to the names of the LB stallions?
MakeEm Fancy
06:32:20 Ally 💜
Okay :) I sent what I could
Fantasy Horses
06:31:54 Fantasy | Fanta
remind me to stay on your good side
Fantasy Horses
06:31:45 Fantasy | Fanta
ghost
oh gosh that's terrifiying
ghost light stables
06:31:30 moldy bread / ghost
Fanta

Dont convenience yourself that, I bit a teacher in junior high lol
Fantasy Horses
06:30:24 Fantasy | Fanta
Gotta go, everyone! bye!
Fantasy Horses
06:30:11 Fantasy | Fanta
Angel
Aww ghost is so nice <3
Angels angels
06:29:32 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Fanta
Yes thanks to Ghost lol

I am also off on the first. Unless they need me to come in and bathe dogs for the groomers lol which would only be for a couple hours in the morning
Fantasy Horses
06:29:22 Fantasy | Fanta
Also for RO I need to get on RF's good side.
ghost light stables
06:29:10 moldy bread / ghost
I hurt, who convinced me to go to dainnas baths (Google it) I slipped and fell so many times 😭
Fantasy Horses
06:28:43 Fantasy | Fanta
Angel
The straw number is going down! lol
Black Dragon Stable
06:28:21 BDS / Black / Stormy
A Friday. Yay. I'll be off work.
Angels angels
06:28:17 [1k+ brindles] Angel
I just bought my filly C med lol I need 14 more filly straws, a scp glass, about 400k more ebs and two more straws
Glacier Bay Cove
06:28:09 Arctic Katz
For RO
ghost light stables
06:28:09 moldy bread / ghost
Angel
No problem!
Glacier Bay Cove
06:27:40 Arctic Katz
Not sure what I need
Angels angels
06:27:32 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Ghost
Awe thank you!
Black Dragon Stable
06:27:28 BDS / Black / Stormy
When even is the 1st... *checks*
Glacier Bay Cove
06:26:29 Arctic Katz
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Angels angels
06:37:32 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Em
It means they have straws for sale
Insignia Elites
06:35:48 Em
What does the dot mean next to the names of the LB stallions?
MakeEm Fancy
06:32:20 Ally 💜
Okay :) I sent what I could
Fantasy Horses
06:31:54 Fantasy | Fanta
remind me to stay on your good side
Fantasy Horses
06:31:45 Fantasy | Fanta
ghost
oh gosh that's terrifiying
ghost light stables
06:31:30 moldy bread / ghost
Fanta

Dont convenience yourself that, I bit a teacher in junior high lol
Fantasy Horses
06:30:24 Fantasy | Fanta
Gotta go, everyone! bye!
Fantasy Horses
06:30:11 Fantasy | Fanta
Angel
Aww ghost is so nice <3
Angels angels
06:29:32 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Fanta
Yes thanks to Ghost lol

I am also off on the first. Unless they need me to come in and bathe dogs for the groomers lol which would only be for a couple hours in the morning
Fantasy Horses
06:29:22 Fantasy | Fanta
Also for RO I need to get on RF's good side.
ghost light stables
06:29:10 moldy bread / ghost
I hurt, who convinced me to go to dainnas baths (Google it) I slipped and fell so many times 😭
Fantasy Horses
06:28:43 Fantasy | Fanta
Angel
The straw number is going down! lol
Black Dragon Stable
06:28:21 BDS / Black / Stormy
A Friday. Yay. I'll be off work.
Angels angels
06:28:17 [1k+ brindles] Angel
I just bought my filly C med lol I need 14 more filly straws, a scp glass, about 400k more ebs and two more straws
Glacier Bay Cove
06:28:09 Arctic Katz
For RO
ghost light stables
06:28:09 moldy bread / ghost
Angel
No problem!
Glacier Bay Cove
06:27:40 Arctic Katz
Not sure what I need
Angels angels
06:27:32 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Ghost
Awe thank you!
Black Dragon Stable
06:27:28 BDS / Black / Stormy
When even is the 1st... *checks*
Glacier Bay Cove
06:26:29 Arctic Katz
🤔🤔

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Newbie Critique October 13, 2024 04:32 PM


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This is the first piece I have ever done and was wondering if some more experienced artists could offer some tips and pointers? It would be really helpful to hear what people like and then what they think can be improved (a lot can I know lol). I think because so much needs improving, I'm a bit lost on where to start!
Newbie Critique October 14, 2024 04:20 PM


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I think this piece is really cute! Here are some pointers.
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1. Choose a better background. I love the theme, but I don't like how it's blurry. Personaly, I like the blur the background behind the horse, but it should be crisp and sharp on the ground by the horse.
2. The horse looks a little squished, like the perspective is off. If that was the stock, then I'd recommend choosing a different one, or if that was how you got it to horse avatar size, I'd recommend finding a different way.
3. I like how you remembered to add a shadow! That's really important to ground the piece. But you have to make sure to match the lighting of the background. Personally, although it's hard to tell, the light is coming from the left middle/top of the image. So the shadow should be on the opposite side, the bottom right hand corner.
4. Painting hair. This is something for future, my best recommendation is to follow one of the many tutorials for it! How well you do hair is honestly one of the biggest factors of what piece sells, along with how good quality your images are.
5. Eyes. Since this is a ghost theme it doesn't matter much and the dark eyes goes quite well with the piece. But usually you'd want to repaint the eye, there are a few tutorials you can find pinned to the top of this forum section!
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Overall this is an awesome first piece and a great start in your art journey! Feel free to reach out to me if you ever want more advice in the future/more specific advice.
Newbie Critique October 14, 2024 05:18 PM


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Thank you so much! This is really helpful and gives me some clear direction
:D

Sagebrush said:
I think this piece is really cute! Here are some pointers.
.
1. Choose a better background. I love the theme, but I don't like how it's blurry. Personaly, I like the blur the background behind the horse, but it should be crisp and sharp on the ground by the horse.
2. The horse looks a little squished, like the perspective is off. If that was the stock, then I'd recommend choosing a different one, or if that was how you got it to horse avatar size, I'd recommend finding a different way.
3. I like how you remembered to add a shadow! That's really important to ground the piece. But you have to make sure to match the lighting of the background. Personally, although it's hard to tell, the light is coming from the left middle/top of the image. So the shadow should be on the opposite side, the bottom right hand corner.
4. Painting hair. This is something for future, my best recommendation is to follow one of the many tutorials for it! How well you do hair is honestly one of the biggest factors of what piece sells, along with how good quality your images are.
5. Eyes. Since this is a ghost theme it doesn't matter much and the dark eyes goes quite well with the piece. But usually you'd want to repaint the eye, there are a few tutorials you can find pinned to the top of this forum section!
.
Overall this is an awesome first piece and a great start in your art journey! Feel free to reach out to me if you ever want more advice in the future/more specific advice.



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