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Year: 193   Season: Fall   
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Hummingbird Meadows
01:41:01 Bird
I'm debating if I should sell my spotting scope I have used for birdwatching. I've been feeling unhappy in life and want to start making progress towards my dream of owning a horse.
Black Meadow Estate
01:13:12 Meadow
spd glass it is then
Angels angels
01:10:16 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Meadow
Spd glass
Quill Fern Estates
01:09:47 Quillie~Quill~Quin
-HEE Click-
here she is! What should I call her? :3
Black Meadow Estate
01:09:08 Meadow
-HEE Click- what item should i use for this match?
Quill Fern Estates
01:07:45 Quillie~Quill~Quin
I just bred my first PEE! I'm so happy
Angels angels
01:04:36 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Bird
Ebs are always nice but no I have plenty I just don't want to spend so much at one time xD
Dash and Duchess
12:57:38 DD | ~Squizard~
Angel, you got this! Just dont pay attention to the loss :')
Hummingbird Meadows
12:57:30 Bird
@Angels, strength or EBs? XD
Angels angels
12:56:30 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Someone give me thr strength to buy the sven I need xD
Rising Stars Stable
12:54:50 Willow ~ AA Breeder
I have to go, bye

I'm so glad he has settled in
Hummingbird Meadows
12:53:51 Bird
Thankfully it came out in the wash. I was worried because the blanket was white. I also wiped his paws off before he licked any.
Rising Stars Stable
12:53:01 Willow ~ AA Breeder
Bird
Awww
Hummingbird Meadows
12:52:40 Bird
@Willow, yesterday I was eating Nutella toast in my bed and he jumped up and landed on my toast. I had chocolate paw prints on my blanket. >.<
God is Mighty Stable
12:50:36 Willow ~ KNN Breeder
Bird
How is he so cute?
Hummingbird Meadows
12:50:07 Bird
@Angels, I think it looks uncomfortable. XD
Angels angels
12:48:38 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Bird
My dog will do that lol
Hummingbird Meadows
12:45:43 Bird
I think Finley likes being squished. He just climbed into a pillow case with a pillow in it.
-Click-
Crestwood Eq.
12:44:23 Ivy / poison ivy
free stable

thanks
free stable
12:44:14 
so cuteee

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Hummingbird Meadows
01:41:01 Bird
I'm debating if I should sell my spotting scope I have used for birdwatching. I've been feeling unhappy in life and want to start making progress towards my dream of owning a horse.
Black Meadow Estate
01:13:12 Meadow
spd glass it is then
Angels angels
01:10:16 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Meadow
Spd glass
Quill Fern Estates
01:09:47 Quillie~Quill~Quin
-HEE Click-
here she is! What should I call her? :3
Black Meadow Estate
01:09:08 Meadow
-HEE Click- what item should i use for this match?
Quill Fern Estates
01:07:45 Quillie~Quill~Quin
I just bred my first PEE! I'm so happy
Angels angels
01:04:36 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Bird
Ebs are always nice but no I have plenty I just don't want to spend so much at one time xD
Dash and Duchess
12:57:38 DD | ~Squizard~
Angel, you got this! Just dont pay attention to the loss :')
Hummingbird Meadows
12:57:30 Bird
@Angels, strength or EBs? XD
Angels angels
12:56:30 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Someone give me thr strength to buy the sven I need xD
Rising Stars Stable
12:54:50 Willow ~ AA Breeder
I have to go, bye

I'm so glad he has settled in
Hummingbird Meadows
12:53:51 Bird
Thankfully it came out in the wash. I was worried because the blanket was white. I also wiped his paws off before he licked any.
Rising Stars Stable
12:53:01 Willow ~ AA Breeder
Bird
Awww
Hummingbird Meadows
12:52:40 Bird
@Willow, yesterday I was eating Nutella toast in my bed and he jumped up and landed on my toast. I had chocolate paw prints on my blanket. >.<
God is Mighty Stable
12:50:36 Willow ~ KNN Breeder
Bird
How is he so cute?
Hummingbird Meadows
12:50:07 Bird
@Angels, I think it looks uncomfortable. XD
Angels angels
12:48:38 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Bird
My dog will do that lol
Hummingbird Meadows
12:45:43 Bird
I think Finley likes being squished. He just climbed into a pillow case with a pillow in it.
-Click-
Crestwood Eq.
12:44:23 Ivy / poison ivy
free stable

thanks
free stable
12:44:14 
so cuteee

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Critique Please August 20, 2019 08:00 PM


Raindrop Ridge
 
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New ones
https://i.postimg.cc/HxjZHKVz/DE56-D190-08-A0-459-B-977-F-E5-D27-C1-C0-C66.jpg
https://i.postimg.cc/3R6LwBGT/231-C5429-2621-4-CED-AC53-E77-B38177-F15.jpg

Edited at August 20, 2019 08:00 PM by Raindrop Ridge
Critique Please August 31, 2019 07:17 PM


Raindrop Ridge
 
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Even more new ones
https://i.postimg.cc/sxx0vNS6/5411-CEE4-683-F-417-A-9-A35-598054-E49822.jpg
https://i.postimg.cc/P5YVpZpj/726-A30-D0-E880-4-A35-B648-BE557-EB5077-C.jpg
https://i.postimg.cc/zv4p3Xqv/B1-DC0-AD1-E38-B-40-C4-BDB8-2-D4-F5-BD602-EC.jpg
Critique Please August 31, 2019 07:35 PM


Aussie Wattles
 
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They look a lot better!
They do still look kinda like a blob on the ground though. Thing about where the lights coming from and the shape of the horse. Looking at RL photos as well as others art can help give you an idea of where shadows should be. Make sure your edges are nice and soft. The hardness and the darkness/lightness of a shadow will vary between pieces.
Overall it just takes a lot of practice.

What device do you use for your art?
Critique Please September 1, 2019 02:02 AM


TheTriggeredHipster
 
Posts: 927
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Hey Raindrop!

My best critique would be to work on realistic shadowing, like others have suggested. Your shadows are off to a great start! They are just too dark and too shapeless at the moment.

These DA tutorials might help!

https://www.deviantart.com/lady-entice/art/Shadow-tutorial-186362600

https://www.deviantart.com/xxsanuk/art/shadow-tutorial-for-GIMP-173291036


I would also make sure that your subject and background are well matched (size-wise). The second horse (the bay on the wood pier) stands out the most for me. He is pretty tiny, compared to the wood planks. :)

Otherwise, you do a pretty good job of finding stock with decent matching lighting/coloration to your backgrounds. Keep practicing! So many things come from just trying new things. <3 You are on your way.
Critique Please September 1, 2019 10:05 AM


Raindrop Ridge
 
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Thanks Trigg and Aussie, IÂ’ll try that next time, I think itÂ’ll really help.
Aussie, I use my iPad, but sometimes my Computer.
Critique Please September 1, 2019 07:06 PM


Raindrop Ridge
 
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Any pricing help would be nice too.

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