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Minerva
04:05:24 Min
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Jewel Mountain Farms
03:38:15 ~Opal~
I've restarted my adopt shop with new horses and new lines! Check it out!
-HEE Click-
Gem
02:31:10 Tier 1 Artist
Art rumble auction!! Bigsby - T1 winner <3
Ends tomorrow!!
-HEE Click-
Nolified
02:29:19 noli,SH thief,bread
EWW mare with color and has good lines.

400k.
-HEE Click-
Elks
01:52:59 Elky
Straw thread available for this upcoming freshie next month! SH stallion out of the former #1ABLB x #29ABLB

Limited straws!
-HEE Click-
Valhalla Acreage
01:43:39 Eivor
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Items and decor for sale all cheaper than current market.
Returning buyers get 10% off in the shop
Rose Crimson Stables
12:55:45 Crimson
Any upgrades for sale??
Black Bean Stables
12:21:20 Sam
WC + Elite bravery up for auction.
(RID, KNN, SH)
LB mares and trained explorers included:

-HEE Click-
Port Royal Equines
12:11:30 Lvl 6+ Gelds 4 Sale
-HEE Click-
PPP+ Brave mares. 1-2k

-HEE Click-
EEE mares for sale! 1/1 colors included. 7-10k

-HEE Click-
Lvl 4+ geldings for sale! 1-3k

-HEE Click-
Shiney EWW ISH broods. 194. Embryo & LC.
Golden Rose
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WEP + 20 TB mare, Liver Chestnut Sabino Frame Brindle. Open to offers :)

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Critique Please :) August 22, 2019 01:02 PM


TheTriggeredHipster
 
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Crystal Heart Estate said:


TheTriggeredHipster said:
What program do you have, Luxxy?

Ibis Paint X on Google Play


Well, first of all:
Huge congrats and kudos to you for doing some excellent work using a paint program. I was completely unable to tell that you hadn't been using professional grade editing software (like Photoshop). I am unfamiliar with that program, but I do have a couple edits for you to consider in your future works. :)

Things I like:

- Your cutting is clean
- Your hair is great, and has movement.
- Your composition is spot-on.
- You put out unique, quality work.

Things you might try:

- Try matching your horse to its background just a little more. Horse coats naturally reflect colored light around them. I achieve this using "Color Balance" in Photoshop, but there may be an alternative way to do this in your own program (look for words like "cool filter" or "color cast". For example, your gorgeous unicorn piece:

Before:
https://i.lensdump.com/i/itcKgM.jpg

After (changing color tones):
https://i.lensdump.com/i/itcrv2.jpg


- Try doing a bit of background blur, to bring focus to your subject. This will make them pop! I use "Lens Blur" in Photoshop, but you might have other blur filters in your program. Also - watch your lighting! In your four horse banner, you have one horse who's lighting is coming from the opposite direction of the others! (I have drawn in the light source with teal arrows)

An example of background blending (I don't have the layers of this one, and just did a VERY ROUGH edit for the blur as an example, lol), and arrows to show light source:

Before:
https://i.postimg.cc/zzgVGDhR/Untitled325.jpg

After:
https://i.lensdump.com/i/itcgV9.jpg



Overall, I like your work and I think the only thing I can critique are small edits to refine your work. It's difficult to teach good composition and creativity, so you are on the right path. I personally like your horse prep as it is. <3 Keep at it!

Edited at August 22, 2019 01:04 PM by TheTriggeredHipster
Critique Please :) August 22, 2019 03:11 PM


Unexpected Visitor
 
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Thank you so much Trigg!! It means a lot to me to have such an amazing artist as yourself critique my art <3

You have really helped explain everything that I need to work on, I'll screenshot it and use it for future use :)

Again, thank you <33
Critique Please :) August 22, 2019 03:32 PM


TheTriggeredHipster
 
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Crystal Heart Estate said:
*squeaks*
Thank you so much Trigg!! It means a lot to me to have such an amazing artist as yourself critique my art <3

You have really helped explain everything that I need to work on, I'll screenshot it and use it for future use :)

Again, thank you <33



<3 Don't hesitate to reach out. You're on the right track here!

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