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The Lazy Ninja
02:02:42 Jessie
Second embryo is available tomorrow pm me WWW 1/4
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Angels angels
02:02:00 Will Buy Brindles!!
-HEE Click-
SD W colts 1k
SD W filly 3k
EEE fillies 8k
EWE mares 30-50k
Need all gone, various breeds, pm to lower!
Bermuda Triangle
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Auction in progress
A small section of eee-www

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NightClan
01:59:27 Night
Lots of new ro babies for sale in my barns! EEE+, many with color!
Hayes Family Ranch
01:57:25 Fallon
Tons of horses for sale! Most have at least one World Class rating! Cheapest World Class horses you'll find! Open to offers!
-HEE Click-
Green Creek Stables
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Whispy
Left a comment on your forum
But check my sales barn!
Eagles Peak
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Win FREE SHLB Stud Straws: -HEE Click- Sale Barn: -HEE Click- Broodmares: -HEE Click- new SH focused club: -HEE Click-
Green Creek Stables
01:50:42 GC
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WWE - EE combo barn sale
Open to offers
Cody Creek
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What would be a fair brood price for her?? *Not* for sale
Fire and Ice
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Critique? And advice? March 14, 2018 01:51 PM

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This is my latest. I actually smudged it! And I think it turned out good BUT that is just me. If you think there is anything that would have made this better/ you would change PLEASE (!) let me know!


Edited at March 14, 2018 01:51 PM by Ruby Quater Horses
Critique? And advice? March 14, 2018 01:54 PM

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You did a nice job cutting it out. However the tail looks really small. And I think the mane could use some fly aways. You did a good job smudging as well. Nice a light ;) The only other thing is probably try to match the horse and the background more.
Critique? And advice? March 14, 2018 01:56 PM

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Trinity Equine said:
You did a nice job cutting it out. However the tail looks really small. And I think the mane could use some fly aways. You did a good job smudging as well. Nice a light ;) The only other thing is probably try to match the horse and the background more.

Thank you! Will remember all that an the next one! xD
Critique? And advice? March 14, 2018 02:00 PM

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The face isn’t really standing out and it’s super blurry. Try drawing in the eyes and doing highlights would make it a bit better. The mane and tail are also flat looking adding highlights will help that as well.
Critique? And advice? March 14, 2018 02:07 PM

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Midnight storm Arce said:
The face isn’t really standing out and it’s super blurry. Try drawing in the eyes and doing highlights would make it a bit better. The mane and tail are also flat looking adding highlights will help that as well.

OK thank you!

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