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Insignia Elites
03:05:12 Em
I love the look of this boy! -HEE Click-
Red Acres Ranch
03:04:19 
just bought him and need name suggestions -HEE Click-
Cryptik
02:56:07 
thank you guys <33 and i went with naming her Sweet Forever, so thanks for the suggestion ^_^

not the best when it comes to training but gonna do my best for her <33
Gypsy Family Farm
02:55:07 
Wow, that color!
Embervale Acres
02:54:58 Solar Phoenix
For a name, maybe Sweet Forever?
Nightingales Ridge
02:52:29 Issy
Stunning Cryptik!!!
Lynx Glory
02:52:23 ⛈ whisper/lynx
and a filly too
Embervale Acres
02:52:08 Solar Phoenix
Oh, she's beautiful!
Lynx Glory
02:52:07 ⛈ whisper/lynx
cryptik
that's amazing :0 1/1 WWW is the best you can get, and first try on top of that! congrats :D
Castle Creek Stable
02:50:37 CC
1/1 and WWW cryptik, congrats!!!
Cryptik
02:49:53 
name suggestions?

;^; pretty 1 of 1 girl
Pragma
02:49:03 Prag/Liz
Ooh nice color too!
Cryptik
02:48:45 
oh my god-
unexpected. so unexpected.
first WWW <333

-HEE Click-
Pragma
02:48:39 Prag/Liz
Right lol
Embervale Acres
02:46:50 Solar Phoenix
RF can be a jerk
Pragma
02:41:41 Prag/Liz
Gotta love when the SD LB x LB matches are turning out Elites.
Clear Water Stud
02:41:06 
-HEE Click-
I'm excited. EWW color boy
Wilder ISHs
02:40:18 Wilder/Wild/Sun
Woooooow no kidding!
Glacier Bay Cove
02:20:19 Arctic Katz
Rusty bit shards in the hidden falls
Mythological
02:04:05 Crowley
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Insignia Elites
03:05:12 Em
I love the look of this boy! -HEE Click-
Red Acres Ranch
03:04:19 
just bought him and need name suggestions -HEE Click-
Cryptik
02:56:07 
thank you guys <33 and i went with naming her Sweet Forever, so thanks for the suggestion ^_^

not the best when it comes to training but gonna do my best for her <33
Gypsy Family Farm
02:55:07 
Wow, that color!
Embervale Acres
02:54:58 Solar Phoenix
For a name, maybe Sweet Forever?
Nightingales Ridge
02:52:29 Issy
Stunning Cryptik!!!
Lynx Glory
02:52:23 ⛈ whisper/lynx
and a filly too
Embervale Acres
02:52:08 Solar Phoenix
Oh, she's beautiful!
Lynx Glory
02:52:07 ⛈ whisper/lynx
cryptik
that's amazing :0 1/1 WWW is the best you can get, and first try on top of that! congrats :D
Castle Creek Stable
02:50:37 CC
1/1 and WWW cryptik, congrats!!!
Cryptik
02:49:53 
name suggestions?

;^; pretty 1 of 1 girl
Pragma
02:49:03 Prag/Liz
Ooh nice color too!
Cryptik
02:48:45 
oh my god-
unexpected. so unexpected.
first WWW <333

-HEE Click-
Pragma
02:48:39 Prag/Liz
Right lol
Embervale Acres
02:46:50 Solar Phoenix
RF can be a jerk
Pragma
02:41:41 Prag/Liz
Gotta love when the SD LB x LB matches are turning out Elites.
Clear Water Stud
02:41:06 
-HEE Click-
I'm excited. EWW color boy
Wilder ISHs
02:40:18 Wilder/Wild/Sun
Woooooow no kidding!
Glacier Bay Cove
02:20:19 Arctic Katz
Rusty bit shards in the hidden falls
Mythological
02:04:05 Crowley
Horses...

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Constructive Criticism January 8, 2018 05:39 PM

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Hey! I'm just wondering where I can improve my art :) I haven't been doing for that long so any any help is appreciated!
This is my most recent piece:

https://horseeden.com/horse.php?id=15154277

Thanks!
Constructive Criticism January 8, 2018 05:49 PM


Wings Of Glory
 
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my only thing i have to say is that the background looks a bit too blurry but otherwise i love this piece
Constructive Criticism January 8, 2018 10:58 PM


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$Wings of Glory$ said:
my only thing i have to say is that the background looks a bit too blurry but otherwise i love this piece


Partly agree with this. Maybe try and make the horse clearer/sharper to match the little baby tree next to it? Overall a beautiful piece. Great work.

EDIT: Also, maybe try playing with the highlights on the horse? Just look at the light source.

Edited at January 8, 2018 11:02 PM by Oceane Elites
Constructive Criticism January 8, 2018 11:07 PM

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Oceane Elites said:


$Wings of Glory$ said:
my only thing i have to say is that the background looks a bit too blurry but otherwise i love this piece


Partly agree with this. Maybe try and make the horse clearer/sharper to match the little baby tree next to it? Overall a beautiful piece. Great work.

EDIT: Also, maybe try playing with the highlights on the horse? Just look at the light source.


Yeah good point! I’m just starting to add highlights and lowlights into my manips now ao hopefully that will be fixed soon xD

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