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Gemstone Stable
10:53:19 Snow❆Gem
Oh, is it the coding thing?
Gemstone Stable
10:51:33 Snow❆Gem
@willow

What is it exactly?
pandemoniu_m
10:50:54 pheezy
i usually wait a few hours minimum to check game updates anyway because the servers get so laggy with so many people swarming like flies right when it drops
North Street
10:45:43 North
It is not going to go away
Willow Grove
10:42:27 Stalker of Chat
I love when a game drops a massive update that people have been wanting for years now while im at fucking work 😭
Sleepwalker Centre
10:20:20 Walker
>rapidly tosses more balloons on my way out<
Angels angels
10:20:07 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Oh yay AL!
Crestwood Eq.
10:19:54 Ivy / poison ivy
walker

good luck
Just Chaos
10:19:46 AL
-HEE Click-

Oh, what a good girl you are <3
Sleepwalker Centre
10:19:44 Walker
also, luckily for you guys, I must go take an oral exam
Sleepwalker Centre
10:19:33 Walker
the notifications please me
Angels angels
10:19:11 [1k+ brindles] Angel
You can turn the notifications for it off lol
Kingswood Eq
10:19:05 ghost
it really never does XD
CWY country
10:18:59 C
The amount of misses :( XD.
Sleepwalker Centre
10:18:46 Walker
ghost,
you're welcome
Crestwood Eq.
10:18:45 Ivy / poison ivy
ghost

it never ends
Kingswood Eq
10:18:30 ghost
its been literally 2 minutes since i got rid of all my notifications and i already have 33 more
CWY country
10:16:08 C
I just made myself a target XD.
KPH Equestrian
10:15:46 Rapcoon | Jester
xD
Sleepwalker Centre
10:15:32 Walker
Jester,
>rotates ominously in your direction<

Ivy,
loll

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Gemstone Stable
10:53:19 Snow❆Gem
Oh, is it the coding thing?
Gemstone Stable
10:51:33 Snow❆Gem
@willow

What is it exactly?
pandemoniu_m
10:50:54 pheezy
i usually wait a few hours minimum to check game updates anyway because the servers get so laggy with so many people swarming like flies right when it drops
North Street
10:45:43 North
It is not going to go away
Willow Grove
10:42:27 Stalker of Chat
I love when a game drops a massive update that people have been wanting for years now while im at fucking work 😭
Sleepwalker Centre
10:20:20 Walker
>rapidly tosses more balloons on my way out<
Angels angels
10:20:07 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Oh yay AL!
Crestwood Eq.
10:19:54 Ivy / poison ivy
walker

good luck
Just Chaos
10:19:46 AL
-HEE Click-

Oh, what a good girl you are <3
Sleepwalker Centre
10:19:44 Walker
also, luckily for you guys, I must go take an oral exam
Sleepwalker Centre
10:19:33 Walker
the notifications please me
Angels angels
10:19:11 [1k+ brindles] Angel
You can turn the notifications for it off lol
Kingswood Eq
10:19:05 ghost
it really never does XD
CWY country
10:18:59 C
The amount of misses :( XD.
Sleepwalker Centre
10:18:46 Walker
ghost,
you're welcome
Crestwood Eq.
10:18:45 Ivy / poison ivy
ghost

it never ends
Kingswood Eq
10:18:30 ghost
its been literally 2 minutes since i got rid of all my notifications and i already have 33 more
CWY country
10:16:08 C
I just made myself a target XD.
KPH Equestrian
10:15:46 Rapcoon | Jester
xD
Sleepwalker Centre
10:15:32 Walker
Jester,
>rotates ominously in your direction<

Ivy,
loll

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Art feedback June 13, 2018 05:50 AM

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Here’s an example of my art
http://i63.tinypic.com/oax2c3.jpg
I was wondering if anyone could give me feedback and ways to improve

Edited at June 13, 2018 05:50 AM by Kirralee stud farm
Art feedback June 13, 2018 06:52 PM

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Wonderful job cutting out your horse! Maybe smudge the horse a little bit less to reserve some of the quality and muscle tone.

Use Brightness/Contrast, Colour Balance to help blend your horses into the background more and make them look as if they belong. (If you use PS then you can play around with Auto Tone/Colour/Contrast)

Horses need shadows ;) Shadows, though you may not realize it at first, make a huge difference in how real you picture looks.

Maybe try adding some highlights/lowlights to help your horse pop.

Most artists also like to redraw eyes to give them a little more life.


Hope this helps! Also, there are tons of tutorials on DA that can help you improve! You are doing very good!
Art feedback June 14, 2018 12:48 AM

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Art feedback June 14, 2018 01:29 AM

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It's a great precut. It is, however, overly smudged in my opinion. Much like Trinity said, not smudging as much preserves detail.
Adjust the hue/brightness so it blends better with the background
Adding shadows and drawing on hair and highlights will give it a ton more detail also.

Great job
Art feedback June 14, 2018 03:48 AM

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Art feedback June 14, 2018 04:16 AM

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http://i63.tinypic.com/30kvfb7.jpg
Is that better

Edited at June 14, 2018 06:53 AM by Kirralee stud farm
Art feedback June 14, 2018 07:17 AM

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What art program do you use?

If the shadow stays the sharp the you need to have it outline the horse more. I think in this case the shadow can be softer. Try adding darker spots and softer sides a bit more.

Also don't blur the background as much. Keep the foreground sharp and the background slightly blurred if you are going to do it.

I think the horse could still use a little less smudging.
Art feedback June 15, 2018 03:13 AM

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Ok
I use
ibisPaint X on IPhone

Thanks

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