Horse Eden Eventing Game
Horse Eden Eventing Game


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Galaxy TBs
01:34:23 Galaxy ☆
Oak the sooty is gorgeous!
Gold Oak Estate
01:33:00 Opal's SA - AA &
I just bred this beauty O.0
-HEE Click-
Boulder Creek
01:29:20 
Tackroom - Actions - Sell Your Tack
Alpine Acres
01:22:54 Lily
where do I go to sell my used tack in the store?
MC Ace
01:20:34 McFossil
Burnt pork belly ends.
Galaxy TBs
01:14:23 Galaxy ☆
If someone could help me out with this, I'd be grateful!

-HEE Click-
Pegasus Lane
01:12:46 Peggy (or) Peg
I cannot do fat at all. I gag immediately on the texture lmao
pandemoniu_m
01:11:36 pheezy
thornwood
not specifically cattle brands, but when my family had a much bigger horse business we used to freeze brand. does that count?
Dash and Duchess
12:58:34 DD | ~Squizard~
Flea, the endless chewing is truly the stuff of horror 😭
KPH Equestrian
12:57:20 Rapcoon | Jester
omg Boulder I saw that on youtube the other day! xD
Boulder Creek
12:55:28 
I wish the frontal lobe cortex matured faster.
We need better brains at earlier age!
Thornwood Manor
12:48:47 
Is anyone familiar with brands, like a cattle brand?
Free and Wild
12:48:12 Book Nerd
I'm ok with most veggitables, but i don't like broccoli or cauliflower or okra.
Boulder Creek
12:46:07 
All I could think of is:
-Click-

Eat Yo Veggitables
Free and Wild
12:44:01 Book Nerd
But from my Dad's stance "Eat up! That fat is soo good!"
Yuck!
KPH Equestrian
12:43:15 Rapcoon | Jester
anyway, the hour grows late and I must be off to bed. Goodnight all!
Free and Wild
12:42:03 Book Nerd
So true.
KPH Equestrian
12:41:14 Rapcoon | Jester
when it's cooked right! but biting into that lump of fat and chewing endlessly is an absolute nightmare
Free and Wild
12:39:51 Book Nerd
Fatty good pasture raised meat is soo good! Unless it's the big chunks that are on slices...
KPH Equestrian
12:36:45 Rapcoon | Jester
I damn near cried when my uncle said "something's obviously bothering her" a few months ago, like nobody's ever recognized that before 😭

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Galaxy TBs
01:34:23 Galaxy ☆
Oak the sooty is gorgeous!
Gold Oak Estate
01:33:00 Opal's SA - AA &
I just bred this beauty O.0
-HEE Click-
Boulder Creek
01:29:20 
Tackroom - Actions - Sell Your Tack
Alpine Acres
01:22:54 Lily
where do I go to sell my used tack in the store?
MC Ace
01:20:34 McFossil
Burnt pork belly ends.
Galaxy TBs
01:14:23 Galaxy ☆
If someone could help me out with this, I'd be grateful!

-HEE Click-
Pegasus Lane
01:12:46 Peggy (or) Peg
I cannot do fat at all. I gag immediately on the texture lmao
pandemoniu_m
01:11:36 pheezy
thornwood
not specifically cattle brands, but when my family had a much bigger horse business we used to freeze brand. does that count?
Dash and Duchess
12:58:34 DD | ~Squizard~
Flea, the endless chewing is truly the stuff of horror 😭
KPH Equestrian
12:57:20 Rapcoon | Jester
omg Boulder I saw that on youtube the other day! xD
Boulder Creek
12:55:28 
I wish the frontal lobe cortex matured faster.
We need better brains at earlier age!
Thornwood Manor
12:48:47 
Is anyone familiar with brands, like a cattle brand?
Free and Wild
12:48:12 Book Nerd
I'm ok with most veggitables, but i don't like broccoli or cauliflower or okra.
Boulder Creek
12:46:07 
All I could think of is:
-Click-

Eat Yo Veggitables
Free and Wild
12:44:01 Book Nerd
But from my Dad's stance "Eat up! That fat is soo good!"
Yuck!
KPH Equestrian
12:43:15 Rapcoon | Jester
anyway, the hour grows late and I must be off to bed. Goodnight all!
Free and Wild
12:42:03 Book Nerd
So true.
KPH Equestrian
12:41:14 Rapcoon | Jester
when it's cooked right! but biting into that lump of fat and chewing endlessly is an absolute nightmare
Free and Wild
12:39:51 Book Nerd
Fatty good pasture raised meat is soo good! Unless it's the big chunks that are on slices...
KPH Equestrian
12:36:45 Rapcoon | Jester
I damn near cried when my uncle said "something's obviously bothering her" a few months ago, like nobody's ever recognized that before 😭

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Art Critique December 19, 2023 02:52 AM


Golden Crest
 
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Hey everyone!

I am still learning the ropes of art and finding my style, so I would love some critique of my progress so far. Here are some pieces I have done with different themes, I would love if anyone experienced in the art field could please give me some pointers?

I really do thank you in advance and appreciate your time :)



Art Critique December 19, 2023 02:36 PM


Olive
 
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Though im not in the art field id like to say your style is unique in a way and really cute
But #1 The WIngs Need To be Blended Into The Body And The Color Match the Coat
#2 Your Eyes Need A Bit Of Work
#3 Try Blending your legs Into The Grass A Bit more or add a layer or grass ontop of it
#4 same thing
#5 I think the fawns lighting is a bit off
#6 its my favorite but try to blend the socket of the wing in a bit
Art Critique December 19, 2023 04:21 PM


KPH Equestrian
 
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I agree with Olive, but the biggest thing is shadows and reflections <3 I don't know which app you use, but I love Krita.
I've been compiling my favorite tutorials for a while now, I'll edit in a bit with em<3
Edit: Here they all are, in no particular order :3
Roanies Manip Tutorial(Love this one!)
Hope these help<3

Edited at December 19, 2023 08:33 PM by KPH Equestrian
Art Critique December 20, 2023 02:45 PM


WildWillow
 
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The first things I notice are a lack of a shadow on the ground and a lack of depth (shadow/highlight) on your horses. I definitely recommend checking out the tutorials that KPH has listed. I think learning to place a shadow on the ground as well as add shadows and highlights to your horse, mane/tail, and wings will really take your art to a next level. :) I go over this in my tutorial (KPH linked to it).

I think another thing to pay attention to is the tone of your background compared to the horse. For example, the background of your last piece is very blue/green toned while your horse has more of a yellow tone. If your program has a Color Balance tool, you can use this to adjust the tone of your horse to match the same tones as your background. This can be super helpful to get your horse to "fit" in its background.
You can also adjust the tones of the "extras" in your art (antlers, wings, animals) to fit both your horse and the background.
It's amazing what difference the little details can make!

I think you really have down the other major foundation components to art - such as horse body prep and the beginnings of grounding. For your grounding, I would go in with a softer, translucent brush to erase legs so it blends easier into your background.
I really like your manes and tails - that last piece especially has some phenomenal hair action!

If you have any questions, my mailbox is always open!

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