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Versailles
06:58:03 Versa
DD,
I, too, live for texas toast! However I also live for fried rice and these two things are VERY filling together lol
Glacier Bay Cove
06:53:54 Arctic Katz
Did someone say Texas toast
Dash and Duchess
06:51:01 DD | ~Squizard~
Versa, I live for Texas toast 🤣
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Wilf, oh no 😭 let me give my paddling ponies a pep talk then 🤣
Wolf Dancer
06:50:08 Wolf Burger (Leg)
DD
xD You'll live :D Maybe I'll help escalate the situatuion!
Versa
Ohh! Yum!
Thornwood Manor
06:49:17 
Anyone want to add their opinions?
-HEE Click-
Dash and Duchess
06:48:12 DD | ~Squizard~
Versa, aww what a cutie!
Versailles
06:47:29 Versa
The cardinal dance???
-Click-
Dash and Duchess
06:46:53 DD | ~Squizard~
Versa, Ooo the solid white ones are so pretty!!
Dash and Duchess
06:46:28 DD | ~Squizard~
Oh shoot 💀 wk 7s are tomorrow and I'm underwater xD 🤿
Versailles
06:46:11 Versa
Wolf,
Fried rice :) Though I might make some texas toast on the side, still debating

DD,
Ooohh. Gotta put some solid white ones in there, that's mostly what I have lol
Dash and Duchess
06:44:38 DD | ~Squizard~
Wilf, send help 😭 I am a stable if sea horses now xD
Dash and Duchess
06:44:05 DD | ~Squizard~
Versa, That'd be adorable lol! Koi are so cute! now I need to get art of a bunch of sea ponies and koi fish to remember this day 🤣
Wolf Dancer
06:44:02 Wolf Burger (Leg)
Versa
Lol ohh what you making? I'm about to make some super super easy and quick garlic breadsticks! I may try a cinnamon sugar version too if I feel bold lol
Versailles
06:43:09 Versa
Don't worry, I'll come back twice as lethal. I just have to make myself dinner and such currently lol
Wolf Dancer
06:42:19 Wolf Burger (Leg)
DD
You took the most of the river it looks like lol
Versailles
06:41:30 Versa
Want some koi to go along with them? I've got plenty of those. LOL
Dash and Duchess
06:39:58 DD | ~Squizard~
Versa, xD that they will lol! Real sea horses 🤣
Dash and Duchess
06:39:36 DD | ~Squizard~
*i'll
Versailles
06:39:31 Versa
DD,
They're gonna grow fins and gills and such lol
Dash and Duchess
06:39:28 DD | ~Squizard~
Yeah 2555 is 2550 too many to clear, I'm tough it out xD

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Versailles
06:58:03 Versa
DD,
I, too, live for texas toast! However I also live for fried rice and these two things are VERY filling together lol
Glacier Bay Cove
06:53:54 Arctic Katz
Did someone say Texas toast
Dash and Duchess
06:51:01 DD | ~Squizard~
Versa, I live for Texas toast 🤣
-
Wilf, oh no 😭 let me give my paddling ponies a pep talk then 🤣
Wolf Dancer
06:50:08 Wolf Burger (Leg)
DD
xD You'll live :D Maybe I'll help escalate the situatuion!
Versa
Ohh! Yum!
Thornwood Manor
06:49:17 
Anyone want to add their opinions?
-HEE Click-
Dash and Duchess
06:48:12 DD | ~Squizard~
Versa, aww what a cutie!
Versailles
06:47:29 Versa
The cardinal dance???
-Click-
Dash and Duchess
06:46:53 DD | ~Squizard~
Versa, Ooo the solid white ones are so pretty!!
Dash and Duchess
06:46:28 DD | ~Squizard~
Oh shoot 💀 wk 7s are tomorrow and I'm underwater xD 🤿
Versailles
06:46:11 Versa
Wolf,
Fried rice :) Though I might make some texas toast on the side, still debating

DD,
Ooohh. Gotta put some solid white ones in there, that's mostly what I have lol
Dash and Duchess
06:44:38 DD | ~Squizard~
Wilf, send help 😭 I am a stable if sea horses now xD
Dash and Duchess
06:44:05 DD | ~Squizard~
Versa, That'd be adorable lol! Koi are so cute! now I need to get art of a bunch of sea ponies and koi fish to remember this day 🤣
Wolf Dancer
06:44:02 Wolf Burger (Leg)
Versa
Lol ohh what you making? I'm about to make some super super easy and quick garlic breadsticks! I may try a cinnamon sugar version too if I feel bold lol
Versailles
06:43:09 Versa
Don't worry, I'll come back twice as lethal. I just have to make myself dinner and such currently lol
Wolf Dancer
06:42:19 Wolf Burger (Leg)
DD
You took the most of the river it looks like lol
Versailles
06:41:30 Versa
Want some koi to go along with them? I've got plenty of those. LOL
Dash and Duchess
06:39:58 DD | ~Squizard~
Versa, xD that they will lol! Real sea horses 🤣
Dash and Duchess
06:39:36 DD | ~Squizard~
*i'll
Versailles
06:39:31 Versa
DD,
They're gonna grow fins and gills and such lol
Dash and Duchess
06:39:28 DD | ~Squizard~
Yeah 2555 is 2550 too many to clear, I'm tough it out xD

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Photo critiques? June 27, 2022 07:57 PM

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(Added shadow; Thanks Brook xD)
So this is my favorite piece that I have done. I am currently a T3 artist and this is my first piece that I have painted on (war paint), done a proper mane for, and tried to make the horse blend with its surroundings (which not gonna lie is quite nice imo.) But I feel like there's just something missing. I hope you guys can help me figure it out. Critiques on the piece in general are obviously appreciated.

Edited at June 27, 2022 08:11 PM by Araminta Farms
Photo critiques? June 27, 2022 08:04 PM


Brook Mill Dressage
 
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I'm not an artist. I have ZERO art abilities. I just thought I'd get that out of the way ;)
I think adding the shadow of the horse would really help so that it look more planted (I think). I hope this helps? Just the first think that came to me! Otherwise, it's quite good and the mane is quite nice :)
Photo critiques? June 27, 2022 08:07 PM

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I actually forgot the shadow. *facepalm* I just went in to fix it, posting the edited version now since adding a shadow is very easy lol

Brook Mill Dressage said:
I'm not an artist. I have ZERO art abilities. I just thought I'd get that out of the way ;)
I think adding the shadow of the horse would really help so that it look more planted (I think). I hope this helps? Just the first think that came to me! Otherwise, it's quite good and the mane is quite nice :)


Photo critiques? June 27, 2022 08:12 PM

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There is potential here! The horse is the size of a titan right now. It is much too big for the background. The shadow you added does not line up with the horse either, and it's a little sharp for such chill lighting in my opinion. There are details lost by the smudging on the horse that you could definitely benefit from drawing back in. Those are the main things throwing the piece off, plus poor grounding.
Photo critiques? June 27, 2022 11:52 PM

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One thing that may help is adding highlight! If the sun is shining in front of the horse (causing the shadow to go behind him) Then you could add a highlight where the sun would hit the horse directly like his mane, top of face/ears, front of the legs(ish) and upper back!
Photo critiques? June 28, 2022 09:49 AM


Kuewi knn stable

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Additionally please use a more readable size and font for the credits - thanks ;)

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