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10:43:28 Kay <3
13 Year Old X Mare
5 more breeding seasons
1 of 69
For Sale: 80k
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-HEE Click-
Eagle Creek
10:11:51 Eagle
ISO 20 pack reroll
message me.
Port Royal Equines
10:07:56 Lvl 6+ Gelds 4 Sale
-HEE Click-
EEE+ broods for 4k. Some are W producers.
Skyrim
09:52:00 Wynter/Ghostly
-HEE Click-
WWE rated RID stallion for sale at 250k. Multiple EEE and EWE producer.
KPH Equestrian
09:40:07 Jake From State Farm
SWE Wild TB stallion
-HEE Click-
Indiana Peaches
09:25:23 Indi
-HEE Click- Top TB mares available for next month!
ShiningStar Stables
09:22:01 Chey / Star
ISO an upgrade. Ebs on hand, just PM me if you have one for sale.
The Lazy Ninja
09:11:01 Jessie
Wild PWW WC Bravery KNN mare 245k
-HEE Click-
DaisyMeadowEventing
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Need gone! Unbred 9yr old WWW mare, only asking 600k
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Critiques/Tips March 11, 2018 09:35 PM


~Savy~
 
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https://image.ibb.co/ejyrTS/Untitled.png
So this is my most recent image. I played with it for an hour or two, and besides the eyes, I am rather happy with it.
However, this is only my 5th or 6th piece, so I know there must be room for improvement. I am looking for suggestions to improve my style of art, as well as comments on the piece as a whole.
Please, constructive, reasonable suggestions only. I am still very new to the art world :P
Critiques/Tips March 11, 2018 10:57 PM


Hallucination Manor
 
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I would make the feet look more grounded in the grass if you want examples of what I mean you can PM me :D
Critiques/Tips March 11, 2018 11:10 PM


~Savy~
 
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I can see what you mean there. Adding some grass to the hooves would've helped.
Critiques/Tips March 11, 2018 11:14 PM

Former Stable
 
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Looove it. :D My advice would be using the eraser tool to clean up the lines on the legs! Also smudging the tail in the direction the hair would be going or creating individual strands (tedious though)
It looks amazing, what a great start. <3
Critiques/Tips March 11, 2018 11:36 PM


~Savy~
 
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I agree, the legs were looking a bit messy the more I looked at it. I attempted to draw individual strands, I just think the smudging went weird. Maybe I should go on more than one layer? I just find then it's tedious to smudge :P

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