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Horse Eden Eventing Game

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10:24:41

Maybe a totally morbid thought,
What if there was some sort of gift given for having a senior die peacefully in game

Not fully sure of the logistics
- would it clog the server full of old horses
- would players hoard senior horses for the gift
- would it create a senior horses market?

What if each year they get older, the prize increases?
To incentivize using senior mash for older horses

10:24:30 Rainy/Fritzi

gem
thanks ! will do when I have time :D

10:23:58 Aki <3

I studied genetics for like 6 months straight in high school simply because biology fascinated me. I should do that again,

Glacier Bay Cove

10:23:48 Arctic Katz

I think it would be AWESOME to learn flower genetics

10:21:53 Snow❆Gem

@rainy

The Game Guide has 'Horse Genetics' that makes it easy to learn. Or at least go one horse at a time to see what they do and don't have. :D

10:19:57 Snow❆Gem

So for I've FRed like 40 horses. :D More hay pasture for next RO!

10:19:42 Rainy/Fritzi

gem
thats really cool ! we learned simple stuff in school but now since it's summer my mind just goes blank 😭

10:16:57 Snow❆Gem

I wanna learn about dog an cat genes next. :D

10:16:17 Snow❆Gem

@rainy

OK. I love genetics. I've learned about horses, rabbits, canaries, and working on pigeons. lol Now that's a huge undertaking! So many genes in pigeons, some are easy though. Like feather on their feet and the crests on the neck.

10:12:19 Rainy/Fritzi

gem
ooh yea, I don't really understand anything about those so I avoid XD

10:11:03 Snow❆Gem

@rainy

I see. :D I usaully give them a name with their genetics in it. ;p

10:10:05 Rainy/Fritzi

gem
im renaming mine, based off of my playlist :0 I don't even know why the names I give them kinda suck, I think it's cooler if they have the names of my favorite songs lol

10:08:21 Snow❆Gem

@rainy

;P I'm not going to look for them right now though. I'm sorting pixel ponies. I didn't know I had this many senior horses! O.o

10:07:20 Rainy/Fritzi

help who knows, they do make me giggle everytime I see one lol

10:04:54 Snow❆Gem

@rainy

LMAO I honestly forgot about them. I wonder where I put them on my PC?

10:03:39 Rainy/Fritzi

ah yes, I remember your collection of wacky horses gem XD

10:03:16 Rainy/Fritzi

angel
hehehe thanks lol

10:01:49 Snow❆Gem

When you show up to an ad for a nice horse and see this kinda back...

-HEE Click-

10:01:21 [1k+ brindles] Angel

Rainy
I will share :)

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10:24:41

Maybe a totally morbid thought,
What if there was some sort of gift given for having a senior die peacefully in game

Not fully sure of the logistics
- would it clog the server full of old horses
- would players hoard senior horses for the gift
- would it create a senior horses market?

What if each year they get older, the prize increases?
To incentivize using senior mash for older horses

10:24:30 Rainy/Fritzi

gem
thanks ! will do when I have time :D

10:23:58 Aki <3

I studied genetics for like 6 months straight in high school simply because biology fascinated me. I should do that again,

Glacier Bay Cove

10:23:48 Arctic Katz

I think it would be AWESOME to learn flower genetics

10:21:53 Snow❆Gem

@rainy

The Game Guide has 'Horse Genetics' that makes it easy to learn. Or at least go one horse at a time to see what they do and don't have. :D

10:19:57 Snow❆Gem

So for I've FRed like 40 horses. :D More hay pasture for next RO!

10:19:42 Rainy/Fritzi

gem
thats really cool ! we learned simple stuff in school but now since it's summer my mind just goes blank 😭

10:16:57 Snow❆Gem

I wanna learn about dog an cat genes next. :D

10:16:17 Snow❆Gem

@rainy

OK. I love genetics. I've learned about horses, rabbits, canaries, and working on pigeons. lol Now that's a huge undertaking! So many genes in pigeons, some are easy though. Like feather on their feet and the crests on the neck.

10:12:19 Rainy/Fritzi

gem
ooh yea, I don't really understand anything about those so I avoid XD

10:11:03 Snow❆Gem

@rainy

I see. :D I usaully give them a name with their genetics in it. ;p

10:10:05 Rainy/Fritzi

gem
im renaming mine, based off of my playlist :0 I don't even know why the names I give them kinda suck, I think it's cooler if they have the names of my favorite songs lol

10:08:21 Snow❆Gem

@rainy

;P I'm not going to look for them right now though. I'm sorting pixel ponies. I didn't know I had this many senior horses! O.o

10:07:20 Rainy/Fritzi

help who knows, they do make me giggle everytime I see one lol

10:04:54 Snow❆Gem

@rainy

LMAO I honestly forgot about them. I wonder where I put them on my PC?

10:03:39 Rainy/Fritzi

ah yes, I remember your collection of wacky horses gem XD

10:03:16 Rainy/Fritzi

angel
hehehe thanks lol

10:01:49 Snow❆Gem

When you show up to an ad for a nice horse and see this kinda back...

-HEE Click-

10:01:21 [1k+ brindles] Angel

Rainy
I will share :)

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10:00:34 Penta - KNNs

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June 13, 2018 05:50 AM

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Here’s an example of my art

http://i63.tinypic.com/oax2c3.jpg
I was wondering if anyone could give me feedback and ways to improve

Edited at June 13, 2018 05:50 AM by Kirralee stud farm

June 13, 2018 06:52 PM

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Wonderful job cutting out your horse! Maybe smudge the horse a little bit less to reserve some of the quality and muscle tone.

Use Brightness/Contrast, Colour Balance to help blend your horses into the background more and make them look as if they belong. (If you use PS then you can play around with Auto Tone/Colour/Contrast)

Horses need shadows ;) Shadows, though you may not realize it at first, make a huge difference in how real you picture looks.

Maybe try adding some highlights/lowlights to help your horse pop.

Most artists also like to redraw eyes to give them a little more life.

Hope this helps! Also, there are tons of tutorials on DA that can help you improve! You are doing very good!

June 14, 2018 12:48 AM

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June 14, 2018 01:29 AM

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It's a great precut. It is, however, overly smudged in my opinion. Much like Trinity said, not smudging as much preserves detail.

Adjust the hue/brightness so it blends better with the background

Adding shadows and drawing on hair and highlights will give it a ton more detail also.

Great job

June 14, 2018 03:48 AM

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June 14, 2018 04:16 AM

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http://i63.tinypic.com/30kvfb7.jpg

Is that better

Edited at June 14, 2018 06:53 AM by Kirralee stud farm

June 14, 2018 07:17 AM

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What art program do you use?

If the shadow stays the sharp the you need to have it outline the horse more. I think in this case the shadow can be softer. Try adding darker spots and softer sides a bit more.

Also don't blur the background as much. Keep the foreground sharp and the background slightly blurred if you are going to do it.

I think the horse could still use a little less smudging.

June 15, 2018 03:13 AM

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Ok

I use

ibisPaint X on IPhone

Thanks

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