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The Lazy Ninja
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Wild PWW WC Bravery KNN mare 245k obo
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Pumpkin pie ranch
01:16:25 Pugsley,flipsy,pug
LF 3 month upgrade. Send me a message.
Connally Stud
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Wow great color pricing and all rated most 1K!
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Valhalla Studs
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Fluffy's Cosy Home
01:00:56 Fluffy
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*Chimera
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Sleepwalker Centre
12:56:58 Walker
EEE-Sub silver roan tobiano sabino 1/126 WB stud, last year to breed with him!

I've dropped his lc fee to 100 ebs and removed his minimum requirements, go ham. He has produced some pretty babies!

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Someday Farm
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-HEE Click- Several great mares still available for public brood this RO! Also have a few LB mares with second embryos available, PM to inquire :)
BlueBirdFalls
12:47:14 Blu
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Rising Stars Stable
12:45:15 Willow ~ AA Breeder
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EEE+ Wild AA Mares
Angels angels
12:44:34 Will Buy Brindles!!
Looking for another EWE+ brood for 194! AA, TB, PON, or WB
I do have some color requirements, but you can send me anything you have! :)

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The Lazy Ninja
01:19:25 Jessie
Wild PWW WC Bravery KNN mare 245k obo
-HEE Click-
Pumpkin pie ranch
01:16:25 Pugsley,flipsy,pug
LF 3 month upgrade. Send me a message.
Connally Stud
01:13:15 Senda
Wow great color pricing and all rated most 1K!
-HEE Click-
Valhalla Studs
01:10:32 Grace, Goose, Paris
-HEE Click-
Fluffy's Cosy Home
01:00:56 Fluffy
Auction:
*World Class
*PEE combo
*Brindle
*Chimera
-HEE Click-

I have:
*WWW/WW Straws
*Studs
*Items in my store
*Decors
*Sale horses
-HEE Click-

Sleepwalker Centre
12:56:58 Walker
EEE-Sub silver roan tobiano sabino 1/126 WB stud, last year to breed with him!

I've dropped his lc fee to 100 ebs and removed his minimum requirements, go ham. He has produced some pretty babies!

-HEE Click-
Someday Farm
12:56:46 
-HEE Click- #1 ISH Freshman still has a few LC and straws available!

-HEE Click- Several great mares still available for public brood this RO! Also have a few LB mares with second embryos available, PM to inquire :)
BlueBirdFalls
12:47:14 Blu
Pony Clear out!
Breeding stock, color, PWW(LB Stud/also the cheapest on the market right now), Elites, and more!
-HEE Click-
Rising Stars Stable
12:45:15 Willow ~ AA Breeder
-HEE Click-
EEE+ Wild AA Mares
Angels angels
12:44:34 Will Buy Brindles!!
Looking for another EWE+ brood for 194! AA, TB, PON, or WB
I do have some color requirements, but you can send me anything you have! :)

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Constructive Criticism January 8, 2018 05:39 PM

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Hey! I'm just wondering where I can improve my art :) I haven't been doing for that long so any any help is appreciated!
This is my most recent piece:

https://horseeden.com/horse.php?id=15154277

Thanks!
Constructive Criticism January 8, 2018 05:49 PM


Wings Of Glory
 
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my only thing i have to say is that the background looks a bit too blurry but otherwise i love this piece
Constructive Criticism January 8, 2018 10:58 PM


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$Wings of Glory$ said:
my only thing i have to say is that the background looks a bit too blurry but otherwise i love this piece


Partly agree with this. Maybe try and make the horse clearer/sharper to match the little baby tree next to it? Overall a beautiful piece. Great work.

EDIT: Also, maybe try playing with the highlights on the horse? Just look at the light source.

Edited at January 8, 2018 11:02 PM by Oceane Elites
Constructive Criticism January 8, 2018 11:07 PM

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Oceane Elites said:


$Wings of Glory$ said:
my only thing i have to say is that the background looks a bit too blurry but otherwise i love this piece


Partly agree with this. Maybe try and make the horse clearer/sharper to match the little baby tree next to it? Overall a beautiful piece. Great work.

EDIT: Also, maybe try playing with the highlights on the horse? Just look at the light source.


Yeah good point! I’m just starting to add highlights and lowlights into my manips now ao hopefully that will be fixed soon xD

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