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Manchado TB mare with premium bravery 5k obo
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03:46:49

Manchado TB mare with premium bravery 5k obo
-HEE Click-

03:46:11

Manchado TB mare 4k
-HEE Click-

03:45:33 Jessie

Dark liver in auction
-HEE Click-

Port Royal Equines

03:42:51 Lvl 6+ Gelds 4 Sale

-HEE Click-
Cheapest stuff in shop!

-HEE Click-
Anyone want this gelding? Lvl 4+

03:37:40

Some horses for sale -HEE Click- saving to buy my first eww mare as I am tired of only breeding single ws

God is Mighty Stable

03:33:41 Willow ~ KNN Breeder

-HEE Click-
Big Clear out Sale
- 1x EWW
- 4x WEE combos
- 1x EEE
- 1x SEW
- 3x Elite SD foals

03:30:00

Full barn of WBs for sale cheap! High ratings and lots of color!
-HEE Click-

03:28:10 $yd_da_$quid77

I have 2 full barns full of high rated Xs for cheap! Please take a look!
-HEE Click-

Main Performance

03:27:34 Cassie

Leopard X Mare

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03:27:33 Will Buy Brindles!!

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November 30, 2017 11:11 PM

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Well I tried to do my first horse image art piece and I'm not sure what to think? Any opinions?

https://horseeden.com/horse.php?id=14193968

December 1, 2017 12:24 AM

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Looks better than my first go, that's for sure.

My comment would be to make the hair more detailed - add individual strands and clumps. Perhaps focus on making the nose more distinguishable from the rest of the neck as it kinda meshes together.

Overall nicely done

December 1, 2017 12:27 AM

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Try blurring the BG too

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