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Raid anyone? (for Quest)
Bioshock Manor
01:58:53 Storm
Need some more protein in your diet too.
Sunset River Arabian
01:56:32 Athena - AAs
drink some water. When you're thirsty your body just tells you you're hungry sometimes
Circle Star RIDs
01:47:53 Granny C
that's a shame
Black Meadow Estate
01:46:50 Meadow
I don't have the funds for a glass
Circle Star RIDs
01:46:10 Granny C
Meadow - I'd throw in a speed glass
Black Meadow Estate
01:45:07 Meadow
-HEE Click-
Thoughts on this?
Crestwood Eq.
01:41:36 Ivy / poison ivy
I just ate 4 slices of raisin bread because my lunch earlier was not enough and I am still hungry
Crestwood Eq.
01:38:59 Ivy / poison ivy
Hi trish
Cromwell Manor
01:34:53 Valentine
I was going to put it up for sale at some point, I've been working on it here and there for the last two weeks lmao at this pace it'll never be done
Crestwood Eq.
01:34:29 Ivy / poison ivy
Valentine

Gotcha
Morning Glory Farms
01:33:39 Terici/Dino/Trish
oh thats pretty whos it for? 👀👀
Cromwell Manor
01:33:04 Valentine
yeah I haven't gotten to the eye yet, the mane was the focus for today
Crestwood Eq.
01:32:53 Ivy / poison ivy
But, i do believe that it is amazing
Crestwood Eq.
01:32:34 Ivy / poison ivy
Or a slight color change. Just to differentiate it from the black on the face
Crestwood Eq.
01:32:04 Ivy / poison ivy
The eye could you some highlights too.
Pentagram Stables
01:29:38 Penta - KNNs
the forelock could use a few highlites, otherwise, looks very good.
Cromwell Manor
01:28:21 Valentine
unsure how I like the mane ... any thoughts? :(
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Crestwood Eq.
01:26:33 Ivy / poison ivy
Penta

Real though
Pentagram Stables
01:26:16 Penta - KNNs
Ivy - not really, just chores and riding.

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Emmas Eventers
02:03:09 
Raid anyone? (for Quest)
Bioshock Manor
01:58:53 Storm
Need some more protein in your diet too.
Sunset River Arabian
01:56:32 Athena - AAs
drink some water. When you're thirsty your body just tells you you're hungry sometimes
Circle Star RIDs
01:47:53 Granny C
that's a shame
Black Meadow Estate
01:46:50 Meadow
I don't have the funds for a glass
Circle Star RIDs
01:46:10 Granny C
Meadow - I'd throw in a speed glass
Black Meadow Estate
01:45:07 Meadow
-HEE Click-
Thoughts on this?
Crestwood Eq.
01:41:36 Ivy / poison ivy
I just ate 4 slices of raisin bread because my lunch earlier was not enough and I am still hungry
Crestwood Eq.
01:38:59 Ivy / poison ivy
Hi trish
Cromwell Manor
01:34:53 Valentine
I was going to put it up for sale at some point, I've been working on it here and there for the last two weeks lmao at this pace it'll never be done
Crestwood Eq.
01:34:29 Ivy / poison ivy
Valentine

Gotcha
Morning Glory Farms
01:33:39 Terici/Dino/Trish
oh thats pretty whos it for? 👀👀
Cromwell Manor
01:33:04 Valentine
yeah I haven't gotten to the eye yet, the mane was the focus for today
Crestwood Eq.
01:32:53 Ivy / poison ivy
But, i do believe that it is amazing
Crestwood Eq.
01:32:34 Ivy / poison ivy
Or a slight color change. Just to differentiate it from the black on the face
Crestwood Eq.
01:32:04 Ivy / poison ivy
The eye could you some highlights too.
Pentagram Stables
01:29:38 Penta - KNNs
the forelock could use a few highlites, otherwise, looks very good.
Cromwell Manor
01:28:21 Valentine
unsure how I like the mane ... any thoughts? :(
-Click-
Crestwood Eq.
01:26:33 Ivy / poison ivy
Penta

Real though
Pentagram Stables
01:26:16 Penta - KNNs
Ivy - not really, just chores and riding.

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I suck at writing emails and letters. I get all my thoughts all over the place and tend just not make any sense. If you guys don't mind maybe just having a quick read to see if this is actually useable? My vet asked for some suggestions about topics she could talk about.

Thank you so much for asking me about what I would be interested in learning. I am sorry for such a delayed response but I did come up with some topics that I would love to learn about.


I always hear about navicular but I am unsure what it really is. I would be interested in learning what navicular is and how a horse can develop navicular. I would also be interested in learning how to treat and rehab navicular. I would love to know more about abscesses. How do horses get abscesses, how do identify abscesses, and how to treat an abscess.I would also love to know what some common problems that different breeds have with their feet.


Nutrition is something that I would love to know more about. How does a horse's diet contribute to their health and performance? What is laminitas, how can it be prevented, and what connection does it have to their diet? Ulcers is something I would also be interested in learning more about. I never really heard about ulcers until recently and would love to find more about it.


Another topic could possibly be horse growth and joints. I am very interested in how horses grow and what rate. Is there any benefit or harm to joints to riding a young horse. How does growth differ from breed to breed. Why do some horses get arthritis at younger ages than others? I would also be interested in learning about how foals grow and straighten out. What should be concerning when a foal is straightening out, and at what age should a foal have straightened out?


Lastly I find dental very interesting. An example could be how and over bite and under bite can affect a horse. What are wolf teeth and how do they affect a horse. What are some common problems that different breeds have with teeth? I would also love to know how to assess when a horse would need their teeth done. For example, what are common signs?


Thanks so much for doing these talks. The breeding seminar over winter helped a whole bunch and answered so many questions.


Edited at July 22, 2020 04:35 PM by Ranch Lands Training
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FirstLightFarms

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This is such a neat topic! The only things I can really see is that I would put 'navicular' and 'abscesses' into two different paragraphs, so it's easier to read. There are also a few sentences where you ask a question but end it with a . instead of a ?
Otherwise, very concisely written!
Proof Read July 22, 2020 04:37 PM


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FirstLightFarms said:
This is such a neat topic! The only things I can really see is that I would put 'navicular' and 'abscesses' into two different paragraphs, so it's easier to read. There are also a few sentences where you ask a question but end it with a . instead of a ?
Otherwise, very concisely written!


Mmmk thank you so much. Nobody in my fmaily are really writers so I usally avoid writing big emails or letters with at least a few people reading it.
Proof Read July 23, 2020 12:29 PM


EmeraldHillsFarm
 
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This is definitely useable. In your last paragraph though, I would say "dental problems" instead of just "dental". You also misspelled "laminitis" in your second paragraph. There are also a couple spots where you leave out a "the" or use "an" when you should use "a", but those are just little typos.
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I think that looks super good. The only thing, but this is just me. You specified navicular, why not all unsoundnesses or a little bit more specific, unsoundnesses that occur in the front legs or the hind legs. If it's only navicular your interested in learning about, then your set.

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