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Port Royal Equines
05:00:59 Elfie
xD Thank you, the taste of revenge is sweet.
Glacier Bay Valley
04:59:42 The Brindle Princess
*Throwing six water balloons at Enoki, for you,* Elfie
Gem Queens Estate
04:58:18 Snow❆Gem
@nix

I might too, if my internet was faster. ;P
Port Royal Equines
04:58:10 Elfie
Enoki just hit me in the eye with a water balloon.
Tobiano Lady
04:56:07 Tobi | Nix
I feel like a little kid on the playground again when we have the Water Balloon event lol
Gem Queens Estate
04:55:47 Snow❆Gem
@bay

I'm going after PK. ;P hehehe!
Port Royal Equines
04:55:28 Elfie
Anyone willing to help me match this little lady?
-HEE Click-
Glacier Bay Valley
04:55:01 The Brindle Princess
I am hiding
Glacier Bay Valley
04:54:41 The Brindle Princess
Who purchased water balloons, going into hiding
Gem Queens Estate
04:54:05 Snow❆Gem
Congrats on your water balloon purchase! Now go whoop some butt.
Black Meadow Estate
04:51:08 Meadow
Spd
Embervale Acres
04:50:59 Solar Phoenix
Absolute brat. I almost FR'd you immediately
-HEE Click-
Black Meadow Estate
04:50:58 Meadow
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What glass should I use i was told specifically but what is everyone else's thoughts
Port Royal Equines
04:50:17 Elfie
I've noticed that also..

It makes breeding for Ratings and Bravery very difficult.
pandemoniu_m
04:50:08 pheezy
thank you madi, must just be this ancient artifact of computer then since it wont even load photos lol
Sunset River Arabian
04:49:52 Athena - AAs
Remi
Rosalind
Embervale Acres
04:48:56 Solar Phoenix
Elfie
No, I don't really use premiums to be honest. Maybe if I find a strong boy for her, but bravery studs are difficult to match with since so many I've looked at aren't really tracked or trained
Dun Fall Estates
04:48:46 Remi | Rem | PON/TB
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Showname for this girllll
Florestä
04:48:29 Madi
looks fine over here pheezy
pandemoniu_m
04:47:09 pheezy
woah im on a very old macbook and my palette is all sorts of jacked up. can someone on desktop please confirm if its like that on all computers? XD

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Port Royal Equines
05:00:59 Elfie
xD Thank you, the taste of revenge is sweet.
Glacier Bay Valley
04:59:42 The Brindle Princess
*Throwing six water balloons at Enoki, for you,* Elfie
Gem Queens Estate
04:58:18 Snow❆Gem
@nix

I might too, if my internet was faster. ;P
Port Royal Equines
04:58:10 Elfie
Enoki just hit me in the eye with a water balloon.
Tobiano Lady
04:56:07 Tobi | Nix
I feel like a little kid on the playground again when we have the Water Balloon event lol
Gem Queens Estate
04:55:47 Snow❆Gem
@bay

I'm going after PK. ;P hehehe!
Port Royal Equines
04:55:28 Elfie
Anyone willing to help me match this little lady?
-HEE Click-
Glacier Bay Valley
04:55:01 The Brindle Princess
I am hiding
Glacier Bay Valley
04:54:41 The Brindle Princess
Who purchased water balloons, going into hiding
Gem Queens Estate
04:54:05 Snow❆Gem
Congrats on your water balloon purchase! Now go whoop some butt.
Black Meadow Estate
04:51:08 Meadow
Spd
Embervale Acres
04:50:59 Solar Phoenix
Absolute brat. I almost FR'd you immediately
-HEE Click-
Black Meadow Estate
04:50:58 Meadow
-HEE Click-
What glass should I use i was told specifically but what is everyone else's thoughts
Port Royal Equines
04:50:17 Elfie
I've noticed that also..

It makes breeding for Ratings and Bravery very difficult.
pandemoniu_m
04:50:08 pheezy
thank you madi, must just be this ancient artifact of computer then since it wont even load photos lol
Sunset River Arabian
04:49:52 Athena - AAs
Remi
Rosalind
Embervale Acres
04:48:56 Solar Phoenix
Elfie
No, I don't really use premiums to be honest. Maybe if I find a strong boy for her, but bravery studs are difficult to match with since so many I've looked at aren't really tracked or trained
Dun Fall Estates
04:48:46 Remi | Rem | PON/TB
-HEE Click-
Showname for this girllll
Florestä
04:48:29 Madi
looks fine over here pheezy
pandemoniu_m
04:47:09 pheezy
woah im on a very old macbook and my palette is all sorts of jacked up. can someone on desktop please confirm if its like that on all computers? XD

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Art Critique December 19, 2023 02:52 AM


Golden Crest
 
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Hey everyone!

I am still learning the ropes of art and finding my style, so I would love some critique of my progress so far. Here are some pieces I have done with different themes, I would love if anyone experienced in the art field could please give me some pointers?

I really do thank you in advance and appreciate your time :)



Art Critique December 19, 2023 02:36 PM


Olive
 
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Though im not in the art field id like to say your style is unique in a way and really cute
But #1 The WIngs Need To be Blended Into The Body And The Color Match the Coat
#2 Your Eyes Need A Bit Of Work
#3 Try Blending your legs Into The Grass A Bit more or add a layer or grass ontop of it
#4 same thing
#5 I think the fawns lighting is a bit off
#6 its my favorite but try to blend the socket of the wing in a bit
Art Critique December 19, 2023 04:21 PM


KPH Equestrian
 
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I agree with Olive, but the biggest thing is shadows and reflections <3 I don't know which app you use, but I love Krita.
I've been compiling my favorite tutorials for a while now, I'll edit in a bit with em<3
Edit: Here they all are, in no particular order :3
Roanies Manip Tutorial(Love this one!)
Hope these help<3

Edited at December 19, 2023 08:33 PM by KPH Equestrian
Art Critique December 20, 2023 02:45 PM


WildWillow
 
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The first things I notice are a lack of a shadow on the ground and a lack of depth (shadow/highlight) on your horses. I definitely recommend checking out the tutorials that KPH has listed. I think learning to place a shadow on the ground as well as add shadows and highlights to your horse, mane/tail, and wings will really take your art to a next level. :) I go over this in my tutorial (KPH linked to it).

I think another thing to pay attention to is the tone of your background compared to the horse. For example, the background of your last piece is very blue/green toned while your horse has more of a yellow tone. If your program has a Color Balance tool, you can use this to adjust the tone of your horse to match the same tones as your background. This can be super helpful to get your horse to "fit" in its background.
You can also adjust the tones of the "extras" in your art (antlers, wings, animals) to fit both your horse and the background.
It's amazing what difference the little details can make!

I think you really have down the other major foundation components to art - such as horse body prep and the beginnings of grounding. For your grounding, I would go in with a softer, translucent brush to erase legs so it blends easier into your background.
I really like your manes and tails - that last piece especially has some phenomenal hair action!

If you have any questions, my mailbox is always open!

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