Horse Eden : Critiques?

Horse Eden Eventing Game

Horse Eden Eventing Game

Year: 193 Season: Fall

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Stables Online: 113

Dash and Duchess

12:57:38 DD | ~Squizard~

Angel, you got this! Just dont pay attention to the loss :')

Hummingbird Meadows

12:57:30 Bird

@Angels, strength or EBs? XD

12:56:30 [1k+ brindles] Angel

Someone give me thr strength to buy the sven I need xD

Rising Stars Stable

12:54:50 Willow ~ AA Breeder

I have to go, bye

I'm so glad he has settled in

Hummingbird Meadows

12:53:51 Bird

Thankfully it came out in the wash. I was worried because the blanket was white. I also wiped his paws off before he licked any.

Rising Stars Stable

12:53:01 Willow ~ AA Breeder

Bird
Awww

Hummingbird Meadows

12:52:40 Bird

@Willow, yesterday I was eating Nutella toast in my bed and he jumped up and landed on my toast. I had chocolate paw prints on my blanket. >.<

God is Mighty Stable

12:50:36 Willow ~ KNN Breeder

Bird
How is he so cute?

Hummingbird Meadows

12:50:07 Bird

@Angels, I think it looks uncomfortable. XD

12:48:38 [1k+ brindles] Angel

Bird
My dog will do that lol

Hummingbird Meadows

12:45:43 Bird

I think Finley likes being squished. He just climbed into a pillow case with a pillow in it.
-Click-

12:44:23 Ivy / poison ivy

free stable

thanks

12:44:14

so cuteee

12:41:28 Ivy / poison ivy

angel

thank you so much for telling me to invest in a mare -HEE Click-

12:38:13

he is just amazing just by the look
-HEE Click-

12:31:29 [1k+ brindles] Angel

-HEE Click-
This horse looks like it has very exaggerated light and shadow shading lol

Beyond The Horizon

12:26:52 Beyond Or Nat

There’s no reason her training should be this bad. :’(
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12:24:54 [1k+ brindles] Angel

What base coats are Ee Aa or Ee Ata?

12:12:35 Ivy / poison ivy

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Dash and Duchess

12:57:38 DD | ~Squizard~

Angel, you got this! Just dont pay attention to the loss :')

Hummingbird Meadows

12:57:30 Bird

@Angels, strength or EBs? XD

12:56:30 [1k+ brindles] Angel

Someone give me thr strength to buy the sven I need xD

Rising Stars Stable

12:54:50 Willow ~ AA Breeder

I have to go, bye

I'm so glad he has settled in

Hummingbird Meadows

12:53:51 Bird

Thankfully it came out in the wash. I was worried because the blanket was white. I also wiped his paws off before he licked any.

Rising Stars Stable

12:53:01 Willow ~ AA Breeder

Bird
Awww

Hummingbird Meadows

12:52:40 Bird

@Willow, yesterday I was eating Nutella toast in my bed and he jumped up and landed on my toast. I had chocolate paw prints on my blanket. >.<

God is Mighty Stable

12:50:36 Willow ~ KNN Breeder

Bird
How is he so cute?

Hummingbird Meadows

12:50:07 Bird

@Angels, I think it looks uncomfortable. XD

12:48:38 [1k+ brindles] Angel

Bird
My dog will do that lol

Hummingbird Meadows

12:45:43 Bird

I think Finley likes being squished. He just climbed into a pillow case with a pillow in it.
-Click-

12:44:23 Ivy / poison ivy

free stable

thanks

12:44:14

so cuteee

12:41:28 Ivy / poison ivy

angel

thank you so much for telling me to invest in a mare -HEE Click-

12:38:13

he is just amazing just by the look
-HEE Click-

12:31:29 [1k+ brindles] Angel

-HEE Click-
This horse looks like it has very exaggerated light and shadow shading lol

Beyond The Horizon

12:26:52 Beyond Or Nat

There’s no reason her training should be this bad. :’(
-HEE Click-

12:24:54 [1k+ brindles] Angel

What base coats are Ee Aa or Ee Ata?

12:12:35 Ivy / poison ivy

If you want

12:12:20 Ivy / poison ivy

PM with the requirements and stuff

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November 21, 2017 11:01 PM

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http://funkyimg.com/i/2zyRe.jpg

I want to know how to improve my art further :3 Please critique!

November 22, 2017 11:54 AM

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OMG!! Love It!

November 22, 2017 04:31 PM

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Why would you need to inprove you are SO good!!

November 22, 2017 04:36 PM

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The Wild Child said:
OMG!! Love It!

Rosiebud said:
Why would you need to inprove you are SO good!!

Thanks <3

November 22, 2017 04:36 PM

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how do you make art?

November 22, 2017 04:38 PM

Andraste Equine

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Only thing I really noticed is that the horse needs some more red/orange/yellow midtones which you can adjust in Colour Balance. Just the slightest bit makes the horse seem more like it belongs. Nice work though :)

November 22, 2017 04:53 PM

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Arven Equine said:
Only thing I really noticed is that the horse needs some more red/orange/yellow midtones which you can adjust in Colour Balance. Just the slightest bit makes the horse seem more like it belongs. Nice work though :)

I was wondering what was missing! Something seemed a little out of place but I couldn't seem to find what. Thanks :)

November 22, 2017 05:23 PM

Hollow Tree Acres

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I agree with the color balance part, but I'd also fix the mane a bit. The hair width looks a bit large to me. Other than that, looks great! :)

November 22, 2017 05:25 PM

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I am no artist but maybe make the credits stand out less. Yes, make them readable but maybe for that piece make them grey or put them in the sky. Just an opinion. :)

November 22, 2017 09:03 PM

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I feel like the tail needs to be moe flowing and spread out more. But other than that it looks great!

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