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Indiana Peaches
08:00:44 Indi
ugh. moving to fast. is there a mod around to delete?
Indiana Peaches
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Splash, Dun , Red, Tobi TB mares for next month
Eaglecrest Orchard
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bred him 3 days ago -HEE Click-
The Fallen Rulers
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Hi all
The Old Gods
07:55:43 Void Malign
honestly, some of it is how hot its been, in which case, I can't blame her
Bioshock Manor
07:44:55 Storm
Moody mares
The Old Gods
07:44:04 Void Malign
She was being a bit moody because I'm having to hold her foot so I can clean out the little areas along the sole and the hoof wall
Bioshock Manor
07:41:34 Storm
Hah. Horses are so smart sometimes
Crestwood Eq.
07:38:27 Ivy / poison ivy
yall. my boy is cooked.
The Old Gods
07:32:36 Void Malign
One horse gets thrush spray and the other gets iodine.. Oklahoma was naughty and got tapped on the chest with a crop. She bonked her head on the feeder lmfao. Started listening after that
Bioshock Manor
07:30:37 Storm
I sprayed the silver meds on my arm today. It's still there.
ghost light stables
07:30:19 moldy bread / ghost
Do we have any horsemanship/horse training people online I need any advice I can get
Glacier Bay Cove
07:30:16 Arctic Katz
Oh
Bioshock Manor
07:30:07 Storm
Ah yes. That does it
The Old Gods
07:29:53 Void Malign
iodine and thrush spray
Bioshock Manor
07:29:28 Storm
Lol why?
Glacier Bay Cove
07:29:28 Arctic Katz
Why, Void
The Old Gods
07:23:39 Void Malign
my hands are now stained blue and a vaguely bruised color lol
Bioshock Manor
07:09:24 Storm
Sunny may want to block out the tag and address on your pictures.
Black Meadow Estate
07:08:28 Meadow
anna not really 80K is nothing now days on HEE i use to do upgrades for 150K and that dosent last anymore so no 90K is fair game if your paying real money on hee

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Indiana Peaches
08:00:44 Indi
ugh. moving to fast. is there a mod around to delete?
Indiana Peaches
08:00:08 Indi
-HEE Click-

Splash, Dun , Red, Tobi TB mares for next month
Eaglecrest Orchard
07:57:08 johnni
bred him 3 days ago -HEE Click-
The Fallen Rulers
07:55:56 Storm|RID/SD Lord
Hi all
The Old Gods
07:55:43 Void Malign
honestly, some of it is how hot its been, in which case, I can't blame her
Bioshock Manor
07:44:55 Storm
Moody mares
The Old Gods
07:44:04 Void Malign
She was being a bit moody because I'm having to hold her foot so I can clean out the little areas along the sole and the hoof wall
Bioshock Manor
07:41:34 Storm
Hah. Horses are so smart sometimes
Crestwood Eq.
07:38:27 Ivy / poison ivy
yall. my boy is cooked.
The Old Gods
07:32:36 Void Malign
One horse gets thrush spray and the other gets iodine.. Oklahoma was naughty and got tapped on the chest with a crop. She bonked her head on the feeder lmfao. Started listening after that
Bioshock Manor
07:30:37 Storm
I sprayed the silver meds on my arm today. It's still there.
ghost light stables
07:30:19 moldy bread / ghost
Do we have any horsemanship/horse training people online I need any advice I can get
Glacier Bay Cove
07:30:16 Arctic Katz
Oh
Bioshock Manor
07:30:07 Storm
Ah yes. That does it
The Old Gods
07:29:53 Void Malign
iodine and thrush spray
Bioshock Manor
07:29:28 Storm
Lol why?
Glacier Bay Cove
07:29:28 Arctic Katz
Why, Void
The Old Gods
07:23:39 Void Malign
my hands are now stained blue and a vaguely bruised color lol
Bioshock Manor
07:09:24 Storm
Sunny may want to block out the tag and address on your pictures.
Black Meadow Estate
07:08:28 Meadow
anna not really 80K is nothing now days on HEE i use to do upgrades for 150K and that dosent last anymore so no 90K is fair game if your paying real money on hee

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Critique? August 8, 2017 04:08 PM


Casanova
 
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Looking for critique on this art piece:
https://s2.postimg.org/4tsarxbjt/IMG_6779.jpg
** I know the front legs look crossed! If the hooves were showing I don't think it would be that way! **

Also looking for advice on tips and tricks!
Critique? August 8, 2017 04:22 PM


Pyramid Equestrian
 
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I'm no art expert but, the tail looks flat, there is no difference in color it is all the same color. Personally I would also like it longer. I would put a reflection in the water too, I know there are Lilly pads but there are still some areas where a reflection is needed. Lastly, the horse should also be a little smaller because the nose shouldn't be almost chopped off. Hope this helps :)
Critique? August 8, 2017 04:23 PM


Casanova
 
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Pyramid Equestrian said:
I'm no art expert but, the tail looks flat, there is no difference in color it is all the same color. Personally I would also like it longer. I would put a reflection in the water too, I know there are Lilly pads but there are still some areas where a reflection is needed. Lastly, the horse should also be a little smaller because the nose shouldn't be almost chopped off. Hope this helps :)


Thank you for the critique! I will go see what I can do to fix some of this :)
Critique? August 8, 2017 04:25 PM


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Im like the queen of critiques today hehe

Background
- I would select most of the background (from around the end of the horses tail and up) and blur it out a bit. It will draw more focus to the horse.
- It seems as though you just took the bg without editing it at all, which is fine, but I personally would have tainted it more of a blue-hue or something of the sorts. Remeber to experiment instead of just going right to the original BG!
- I would add a darkened, precise reflection to the water here. Duplicate the horse layer, position it behind the horse, and laying on the water, and then darken it, and lower the opacity. Then, erase all of the spots where the lilly pads are, and replace that with a very light shadow, so that there is a reflection on the visible water, and a light shadow on the lilly pads. :)

Horse
Lighting
The lighting in this photo is quite nice. Its not a super difficult bg to work with, and you definatley chose a great stock image to pair it with. Well done!

Horse Body
- Great job with the majority of the body, I really like the way you prepped its coat! Just right on smudging and such.
- As for where his legs meet the water, I would reccomend a clean cut instead of a fade into the water. in real life, thats how it would really work. I would also add ripples in the water where the legs meet (you can find ones that are ready to go on DA) to add some detail.
- The eye needs some work. The horse in question has a small eye in this photo, so you need to be very precise. You definatley have the right idea here, but remember, practice makes perfect!

Mane and Tail
- Mane looks fine to me, it seems that in this image the mane was roached (shaved) so you didnt have to worry about that.
- Tail needs a bit more expression. Grab a 1px brush in 100% smudge mode and fan it out a bit. remember to use curved lines with movement!

Accessory
- I like your idea here, but the flower needs to be smaller. I would also put some shadows around it to make it fit in the image better.


I hope this helps!
Critique? August 8, 2017 04:41 PM


Casanova
 
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Thank you! I'll experiment with reflections (Not very experienced with shadows and reflections) and I'll edit the tail a bit more. I'll go see what I can do with the background and I'll see what I can do with the flower.

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