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Alpine Acres
12:13:14 Lily/Alpine
Good luck with the match!
Alpine Acres
12:13:03 Lily/Alpine
Anna, you need to enter Feds first for HEWG
Sweet Valley
12:13:01 Anna/Jewel
I knew I'd find one. I applied for a straw.
Alpine Acres
12:11:33 Lily/Alpine
Anna that seems like a good match, he's strong in Mv, Hr and Int! :)
Sweet Valley
12:04:01 Anna/Jewel
-HEE Click-

ooo love this capture. It's Pangere and Laced
Sweet Valley
12:01:15 Anna/Jewel
Yeah i guess. Hey how do I enter into the HEE World Games?
Timberland Drafts
12:01:02 Athena's SA - RIDs
All my 2yo EEEs are lvl 1
Timberland Drafts
12:00:29 Athena's SA - RIDs
Anna
That can be normal
Sweet Valley
11:59:53 Anna/Jewel
2 years old and only lvl 1 in training?
20X Ranches
11:59:14 
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This training seems off
Sweet Valley
11:57:07 Anna/Jewel
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Maybe this one? They're the same in Mv Int and Hrt. She balances him in Scp and Spd, as well as in Str. So maybe? These are studs she got EWEs with before
Timberland Drafts
11:55:38 Athena's SA - RIDs
DD
ooh fellow AA breeder. I found a match for my wild mare that I forgot existed so fingers crossed for a WWW prlprl. I'll take either filly or colt even
-HEE Click- +scp
Dash and Duchess
11:54:54 DD | ~Squizard~
Sunny, Sending all the luck for her 7 to be good! She definitely has the potential, and you've been working so hard on Spl TBs you deserve that ABLB splashy mare xD
Sweet Valley
11:53:49 Anna/Jewel
I see that now
Alpine Acres
11:53:23 Lily/Alpine
Anna, both their Mv and Int are low. So not good regarding those traits.
Sweet Valley
11:53:18 Anna/Jewel
Sorryy
Sweet Valley
11:53:10 Anna/Jewel
Oops not him :)
Sweet Valley
11:52:55 Anna/Jewel
It's a little more balanced. And she got an EWE with him
Sweet Valley
11:51:58 Anna/Jewel
-HEE Click-

So maybe this match?
Statesman
11:51:41 Sun's Spl TB's
Yeah for real; I have been trying for so long to get an ABLB splash mare; it’s my last big goal over here so fingers crossed ;’)

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Alpine Acres
12:13:14 Lily/Alpine
Good luck with the match!
Alpine Acres
12:13:03 Lily/Alpine
Anna, you need to enter Feds first for HEWG
Sweet Valley
12:13:01 Anna/Jewel
I knew I'd find one. I applied for a straw.
Alpine Acres
12:11:33 Lily/Alpine
Anna that seems like a good match, he's strong in Mv, Hr and Int! :)
Sweet Valley
12:04:01 Anna/Jewel
-HEE Click-

ooo love this capture. It's Pangere and Laced
Sweet Valley
12:01:15 Anna/Jewel
Yeah i guess. Hey how do I enter into the HEE World Games?
Timberland Drafts
12:01:02 Athena's SA - RIDs
All my 2yo EEEs are lvl 1
Timberland Drafts
12:00:29 Athena's SA - RIDs
Anna
That can be normal
Sweet Valley
11:59:53 Anna/Jewel
2 years old and only lvl 1 in training?
20X Ranches
11:59:14 
-HEE Click-

This training seems off
Sweet Valley
11:57:07 Anna/Jewel
-HEE Click-

Maybe this one? They're the same in Mv Int and Hrt. She balances him in Scp and Spd, as well as in Str. So maybe? These are studs she got EWEs with before
Timberland Drafts
11:55:38 Athena's SA - RIDs
DD
ooh fellow AA breeder. I found a match for my wild mare that I forgot existed so fingers crossed for a WWW prlprl. I'll take either filly or colt even
-HEE Click- +scp
Dash and Duchess
11:54:54 DD | ~Squizard~
Sunny, Sending all the luck for her 7 to be good! She definitely has the potential, and you've been working so hard on Spl TBs you deserve that ABLB splashy mare xD
Sweet Valley
11:53:49 Anna/Jewel
I see that now
Alpine Acres
11:53:23 Lily/Alpine
Anna, both their Mv and Int are low. So not good regarding those traits.
Sweet Valley
11:53:18 Anna/Jewel
Sorryy
Sweet Valley
11:53:10 Anna/Jewel
Oops not him :)
Sweet Valley
11:52:55 Anna/Jewel
It's a little more balanced. And she got an EWE with him
Sweet Valley
11:51:58 Anna/Jewel
-HEE Click-

So maybe this match?
Statesman
11:51:41 Sun's Spl TB's
Yeah for real; I have been trying for so long to get an ABLB splash mare; it’s my last big goal over here so fingers crossed ;’)

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Art Critique December 19, 2023 02:52 AM


Golden Crest
 
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Hey everyone!

I am still learning the ropes of art and finding my style, so I would love some critique of my progress so far. Here are some pieces I have done with different themes, I would love if anyone experienced in the art field could please give me some pointers?

I really do thank you in advance and appreciate your time :)



Art Critique December 19, 2023 02:36 PM


Olive
 
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Though im not in the art field id like to say your style is unique in a way and really cute
But #1 The WIngs Need To be Blended Into The Body And The Color Match the Coat
#2 Your Eyes Need A Bit Of Work
#3 Try Blending your legs Into The Grass A Bit more or add a layer or grass ontop of it
#4 same thing
#5 I think the fawns lighting is a bit off
#6 its my favorite but try to blend the socket of the wing in a bit
Art Critique December 19, 2023 04:21 PM


KPH Equestrian
 
Posts: 3451
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I agree with Olive, but the biggest thing is shadows and reflections <3 I don't know which app you use, but I love Krita.
I've been compiling my favorite tutorials for a while now, I'll edit in a bit with em<3
Edit: Here they all are, in no particular order :3
Roanies Manip Tutorial(Love this one!)
Hope these help<3

Edited at December 19, 2023 08:33 PM by KPH Equestrian
Art Critique December 20, 2023 02:45 PM


WildWillow
 
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The first things I notice are a lack of a shadow on the ground and a lack of depth (shadow/highlight) on your horses. I definitely recommend checking out the tutorials that KPH has listed. I think learning to place a shadow on the ground as well as add shadows and highlights to your horse, mane/tail, and wings will really take your art to a next level. :) I go over this in my tutorial (KPH linked to it).

I think another thing to pay attention to is the tone of your background compared to the horse. For example, the background of your last piece is very blue/green toned while your horse has more of a yellow tone. If your program has a Color Balance tool, you can use this to adjust the tone of your horse to match the same tones as your background. This can be super helpful to get your horse to "fit" in its background.
You can also adjust the tones of the "extras" in your art (antlers, wings, animals) to fit both your horse and the background.
It's amazing what difference the little details can make!

I think you really have down the other major foundation components to art - such as horse body prep and the beginnings of grounding. For your grounding, I would go in with a softer, translucent brush to erase legs so it blends easier into your background.
I really like your manes and tails - that last piece especially has some phenomenal hair action!

If you have any questions, my mailbox is always open!

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