Horse Eden Eventing Game
Horse Eden Eventing Game


Year: 193   Season: Fall   
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Sunni
12:09:56 Sunni bunny
Star I think it's worth the gamble
ShiningStar Stables
12:08:49 Chey / Star
Do I risk throwing my maiden to a freshie?
-HEE Click-
Sunni
12:07:06 Sunni bunny
Geek if it helps you cope, losing someone is all ways painful.
It takes time to heal, and drawing is a good coping mechanism.
Am sorry for your loss, but I all ways tell myself.
It was an honor to know them, and be their friend.
Transformers Acres
12:04:58 Geek, Eek
I'm drawing my recently deceased puppy. I'm not fine
Sunni
12:04:46 Sunni bunny
Cove the sleep is coming for you, haha
Glacier Bay Cove
12:04:24 Arctic Katz
Oops I meant Geek
Glacier Bay Cove
12:04:12 Arctic Katz
Send me a PM. I am falling asleep, Gerk
Sunni
12:03:18 Sunni bunny
She loved cuddling in my arm, but my hand is numb.
Glacier Bay Cove
12:03:18 Arctic Katz
I feel for you, Geek. What did your puppy look like
Sunni
12:02:54 Sunni bunny
Help I am trapped by a cat.
Moonrose Magic
12:00:43 🎀 Diva
I like the sort of melted caramel brindle look
Moonrose Magic
11:59:28 🎀 Diva
Brindle can't be bred for, breeding 2 brindle together gives like 0.01% more probability or so, otherwise its absolute luck
Dreamcatcher Farms
11:57:56 
Chat my fake nails arent coming off help
Checkers Catch
11:55:37 
Wish*
Checkers Catch
11:55:31 
Wisj
CherryBlossom Escape
11:52:38 Ghost
Does anyone have tips for breeding a brindle or do I just have to close my eyes an wish for the best?
Transformers Acres
11:50:58 Geek, Eek
I'm drawing my recently deceased puppy. I'm not fine
Galloping_Gems
11:26:45 Gemstone
-HEE Click-
Orange looks so good on my favorite catch ever
RFS Thoroughbreds
11:24:19 Fern/fref/ferf/nerf
oop cutesy I totally didn't forget About you at all :') -HEE Click-
Galloping_Gems
11:23:57 Gemstone
-HEE Click-
So nervous for wk 4

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Sunni
12:09:56 Sunni bunny
Star I think it's worth the gamble
ShiningStar Stables
12:08:49 Chey / Star
Do I risk throwing my maiden to a freshie?
-HEE Click-
Sunni
12:07:06 Sunni bunny
Geek if it helps you cope, losing someone is all ways painful.
It takes time to heal, and drawing is a good coping mechanism.
Am sorry for your loss, but I all ways tell myself.
It was an honor to know them, and be their friend.
Transformers Acres
12:04:58 Geek, Eek
I'm drawing my recently deceased puppy. I'm not fine
Sunni
12:04:46 Sunni bunny
Cove the sleep is coming for you, haha
Glacier Bay Cove
12:04:24 Arctic Katz
Oops I meant Geek
Glacier Bay Cove
12:04:12 Arctic Katz
Send me a PM. I am falling asleep, Gerk
Sunni
12:03:18 Sunni bunny
She loved cuddling in my arm, but my hand is numb.
Glacier Bay Cove
12:03:18 Arctic Katz
I feel for you, Geek. What did your puppy look like
Sunni
12:02:54 Sunni bunny
Help I am trapped by a cat.
Moonrose Magic
12:00:43 🎀 Diva
I like the sort of melted caramel brindle look
Moonrose Magic
11:59:28 🎀 Diva
Brindle can't be bred for, breeding 2 brindle together gives like 0.01% more probability or so, otherwise its absolute luck
Dreamcatcher Farms
11:57:56 
Chat my fake nails arent coming off help
Checkers Catch
11:55:37 
Wish*
Checkers Catch
11:55:31 
Wisj
CherryBlossom Escape
11:52:38 Ghost
Does anyone have tips for breeding a brindle or do I just have to close my eyes an wish for the best?
Transformers Acres
11:50:58 Geek, Eek
I'm drawing my recently deceased puppy. I'm not fine
Galloping_Gems
11:26:45 Gemstone
-HEE Click-
Orange looks so good on my favorite catch ever
RFS Thoroughbreds
11:24:19 Fern/fref/ferf/nerf
oop cutesy I totally didn't forget About you at all :') -HEE Click-
Galloping_Gems
11:23:57 Gemstone
-HEE Click-
So nervous for wk 4

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Art Critique December 19, 2023 02:52 AM


Golden Crest
 
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Hey everyone!

I am still learning the ropes of art and finding my style, so I would love some critique of my progress so far. Here are some pieces I have done with different themes, I would love if anyone experienced in the art field could please give me some pointers?

I really do thank you in advance and appreciate your time :)



Art Critique December 19, 2023 02:36 PM


Olive
 
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Though im not in the art field id like to say your style is unique in a way and really cute
But #1 The WIngs Need To be Blended Into The Body And The Color Match the Coat
#2 Your Eyes Need A Bit Of Work
#3 Try Blending your legs Into The Grass A Bit more or add a layer or grass ontop of it
#4 same thing
#5 I think the fawns lighting is a bit off
#6 its my favorite but try to blend the socket of the wing in a bit
Art Critique December 19, 2023 04:21 PM


KPH Equestrian
 
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I agree with Olive, but the biggest thing is shadows and reflections <3 I don't know which app you use, but I love Krita.
I've been compiling my favorite tutorials for a while now, I'll edit in a bit with em<3
Edit: Here they all are, in no particular order :3
Roanies Manip Tutorial(Love this one!)
Hope these help<3

Edited at December 19, 2023 08:33 PM by KPH Equestrian
Art Critique December 20, 2023 02:45 PM


WildWillow
 
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The first things I notice are a lack of a shadow on the ground and a lack of depth (shadow/highlight) on your horses. I definitely recommend checking out the tutorials that KPH has listed. I think learning to place a shadow on the ground as well as add shadows and highlights to your horse, mane/tail, and wings will really take your art to a next level. :) I go over this in my tutorial (KPH linked to it).

I think another thing to pay attention to is the tone of your background compared to the horse. For example, the background of your last piece is very blue/green toned while your horse has more of a yellow tone. If your program has a Color Balance tool, you can use this to adjust the tone of your horse to match the same tones as your background. This can be super helpful to get your horse to "fit" in its background.
You can also adjust the tones of the "extras" in your art (antlers, wings, animals) to fit both your horse and the background.
It's amazing what difference the little details can make!

I think you really have down the other major foundation components to art - such as horse body prep and the beginnings of grounding. For your grounding, I would go in with a softer, translucent brush to erase legs so it blends easier into your background.
I really like your manes and tails - that last piece especially has some phenomenal hair action!

If you have any questions, my mailbox is always open!

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