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Firefly Forrest
04:41:46 
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I'm excited for this girl
Firefly Forrest
04:40:23 
Oh, ok I like it
God is Mighty Stable
04:40:02 Willow ~ KNN Breeder
Firefly
Snap Dragon
Gemstone Stable
04:39:32 Snow❆Gem
@willow

Yup. And my sore throat is actually light. O.o This is all new and odd to me.
Firefly Forrest
04:38:12 
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What would be a good name for him?
Two Trees Stables
04:37:24 Willow ~ TB Breeder
Gem
*hugs, & Gives you a care package*
Gemstone Stable
04:35:25 Snow❆Gem
I am now taking Robitusson congestion luquid stuff from off the shelf and doing warm eye compressions. If it doesn't get better within 24-48 hours, I'll be going somewhwhere.
Two Trees Stables
04:34:30 Willow ~ TB Breeder
Aww, I'm sorry Gem
I've had a sore throat for a couple days now and it's driving me crazy
Gemstone Stable
04:33:20 Snow❆Gem
@bay

No, I don't have a doctor no insurance. (Still looking for a job...) I'd have to go to a 'quick care' place. *sigh*
Two Trees Stables
04:32:55 Willow ~ TB Breeder
Gem
Maybe it's time for a doctor
Angels angels
04:32:45 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Willow
Hopefully lol and the lack of sabino is always nice
Rising Stars Stable
04:32:16 Willow ~ AA Breeder
She should give you some nice WEE++ combo foals
Glacier Bay Cove
04:32:06 Arctic Katz
Did you go to the doctor, Gem
Rising Stars Stable
04:31:28 Willow ~ AA Breeder
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I hate her color, but her training should hopefully be decent
Angels angels
04:31:08 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Willow
Yeah but she could still wnd up being a good producer lol
Rising Stars Stable
04:30:23 Willow ~ AA Breeder
Angel
good luck with Bella
I'm still mad at her for that week 5
Gemstone Stable
04:29:14 Snow❆Gem
I just wanna be done with this cold already! I feel kinda worn out from not doing much, lack of sleep for almost a week, and then the cold systypoms themselves... O.o
Crestwood Eq.
04:28:44 Ivy / poison ivy
Loonnnyyyyy
God is Mighty Stable
04:28:44 Willow ~ KNN Breeder
Hey Ivy!
Angels angels
04:28:44 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Willow
Nah but I am interested to see this week 7 and week 4
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Firefly Forrest
04:41:46 
-HEE Click-
I'm excited for this girl
Firefly Forrest
04:40:23 
Oh, ok I like it
God is Mighty Stable
04:40:02 Willow ~ KNN Breeder
Firefly
Snap Dragon
Gemstone Stable
04:39:32 Snow❆Gem
@willow

Yup. And my sore throat is actually light. O.o This is all new and odd to me.
Firefly Forrest
04:38:12 
-HEE Click-
What would be a good name for him?
Two Trees Stables
04:37:24 Willow ~ TB Breeder
Gem
*hugs, & Gives you a care package*
Gemstone Stable
04:35:25 Snow❆Gem
I am now taking Robitusson congestion luquid stuff from off the shelf and doing warm eye compressions. If it doesn't get better within 24-48 hours, I'll be going somewhwhere.
Two Trees Stables
04:34:30 Willow ~ TB Breeder
Aww, I'm sorry Gem
I've had a sore throat for a couple days now and it's driving me crazy
Gemstone Stable
04:33:20 Snow❆Gem
@bay

No, I don't have a doctor no insurance. (Still looking for a job...) I'd have to go to a 'quick care' place. *sigh*
Two Trees Stables
04:32:55 Willow ~ TB Breeder
Gem
Maybe it's time for a doctor
Angels angels
04:32:45 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Willow
Hopefully lol and the lack of sabino is always nice
Rising Stars Stable
04:32:16 Willow ~ AA Breeder
She should give you some nice WEE++ combo foals
Glacier Bay Cove
04:32:06 Arctic Katz
Did you go to the doctor, Gem
Rising Stars Stable
04:31:28 Willow ~ AA Breeder
-HEE Click-
I hate her color, but her training should hopefully be decent
Angels angels
04:31:08 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Willow
Yeah but she could still wnd up being a good producer lol
Rising Stars Stable
04:30:23 Willow ~ AA Breeder
Angel
good luck with Bella
I'm still mad at her for that week 5
Gemstone Stable
04:29:14 Snow❆Gem
I just wanna be done with this cold already! I feel kinda worn out from not doing much, lack of sleep for almost a week, and then the cold systypoms themselves... O.o
Crestwood Eq.
04:28:44 Ivy / poison ivy
Loonnnyyyyy
God is Mighty Stable
04:28:44 Willow ~ KNN Breeder
Hey Ivy!
Angels angels
04:28:44 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Willow
Nah but I am interested to see this week 7 and week 4
-HEE Click-
-HEE Click-

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Art Critique December 19, 2023 02:52 AM


Golden Crest
 
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Hey everyone!

I am still learning the ropes of art and finding my style, so I would love some critique of my progress so far. Here are some pieces I have done with different themes, I would love if anyone experienced in the art field could please give me some pointers?

I really do thank you in advance and appreciate your time :)



Art Critique December 19, 2023 02:36 PM


Olive
 
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Though im not in the art field id like to say your style is unique in a way and really cute
But #1 The WIngs Need To be Blended Into The Body And The Color Match the Coat
#2 Your Eyes Need A Bit Of Work
#3 Try Blending your legs Into The Grass A Bit more or add a layer or grass ontop of it
#4 same thing
#5 I think the fawns lighting is a bit off
#6 its my favorite but try to blend the socket of the wing in a bit
Art Critique December 19, 2023 04:21 PM


KPH Equestrian
 
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I agree with Olive, but the biggest thing is shadows and reflections <3 I don't know which app you use, but I love Krita.
I've been compiling my favorite tutorials for a while now, I'll edit in a bit with em<3
Edit: Here they all are, in no particular order :3
Roanies Manip Tutorial(Love this one!)
Hope these help<3

Edited at December 19, 2023 08:33 PM by KPH Equestrian
Art Critique December 20, 2023 02:45 PM


WildWillow
 
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The first things I notice are a lack of a shadow on the ground and a lack of depth (shadow/highlight) on your horses. I definitely recommend checking out the tutorials that KPH has listed. I think learning to place a shadow on the ground as well as add shadows and highlights to your horse, mane/tail, and wings will really take your art to a next level. :) I go over this in my tutorial (KPH linked to it).

I think another thing to pay attention to is the tone of your background compared to the horse. For example, the background of your last piece is very blue/green toned while your horse has more of a yellow tone. If your program has a Color Balance tool, you can use this to adjust the tone of your horse to match the same tones as your background. This can be super helpful to get your horse to "fit" in its background.
You can also adjust the tones of the "extras" in your art (antlers, wings, animals) to fit both your horse and the background.
It's amazing what difference the little details can make!

I think you really have down the other major foundation components to art - such as horse body prep and the beginnings of grounding. For your grounding, I would go in with a softer, translucent brush to erase legs so it blends easier into your background.
I really like your manes and tails - that last piece especially has some phenomenal hair action!

If you have any questions, my mailbox is always open!

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