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Connally Stud
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Circle Star RIDs
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God is Mighty Stable
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Magic Horses
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Platinum Plaits
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Barn sale! All rated EEW-EWW, many have rare colours including a 1/1!
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Barn sale! All rated EEW-EWW, many have rare colours including a 1/1!
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Bermuda Triangle
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WWW Mare for sale

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Port Royal Equines
06:28:28 ISH Bravery 4 Sale!
-HEE Click-
Disney Acres
06:20:00 
WEE TB filly blood bay 65k
-HEE Click-
The Lazy Ninja
06:16:52 Jessie
EEE 3k or send an offer
-HEE Click-
Connally Stud
05:48:42 Senda
sale LB frshy knns and more!
-HEE Click-
Horse Haven Stables
05:25:58 HHS⎹ Lyla
-HEE Click-
EEE-WWW Mares auction! Includes:
-Wild PEE-E SH Mare
-EEW/EWE/WEE SH and ISH Mares
-EWW SH Mare
-WWW ISH Mare
Come check 'em out! Need them gone :)
Circle Star RIDs
05:02:30 Granny C
Selling - RIDs
Includes apricot and frame.
-HEE Click-
God is Mighty Stable
05:01:47 Willow ~ KNN Breeder
-HEE Click-
Item shop updated
Magic Horses
05:00:38 Magic
-HEE Click-
WWW mare up for auction!
Platinum Plaits
04:54:23 Payton
Barn sale! All rated EEW-EWW, many have rare colours including a 1/1!
-HEE Click-
Barn sale! All rated EEW-EWW, many have rare colours including a 1/1!
-HEE Click-
Bermuda Triangle
04:54:14 Lost
WWW Mare for sale

-HEE Click-

Offer. Might also part with other world class mares in my www tab, wanting to start over.

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Critiques/Tips March 11, 2018 09:35 PM


~Savy~
 
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#136184
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https://image.ibb.co/ejyrTS/Untitled.png
So this is my most recent image. I played with it for an hour or two, and besides the eyes, I am rather happy with it.
However, this is only my 5th or 6th piece, so I know there must be room for improvement. I am looking for suggestions to improve my style of art, as well as comments on the piece as a whole.
Please, constructive, reasonable suggestions only. I am still very new to the art world :P
Critiques/Tips March 11, 2018 10:57 PM


Hallucination Manor
 
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I would make the feet look more grounded in the grass if you want examples of what I mean you can PM me :D
Critiques/Tips March 11, 2018 11:10 PM


~Savy~
 
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I can see what you mean there. Adding some grass to the hooves would've helped.
Critiques/Tips March 11, 2018 11:14 PM

Former Stable
 
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Looove it. :D My advice would be using the eraser tool to clean up the lines on the legs! Also smudging the tail in the direction the hair would be going or creating individual strands (tedious though)
It looks amazing, what a great start. <3
Critiques/Tips March 11, 2018 11:36 PM


~Savy~
 
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I agree, the legs were looking a bit messy the more I looked at it. I attempted to draw individual strands, I just think the smudging went weird. Maybe I should go on more than one layer? I just find then it's tedious to smudge :P

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