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Hi all I am trying my hand at some art work and would love some feedback. This is the image I have been working on.
minnesotamom83.deviantart.com/art/River-Horse-with-refelction-740433025
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https://minnesotamom83.deviantart.com/art/Horsereadfortitle-740430034?ga_submit_new
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Think I have a working link now. Sorry about the last one. |
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Wow, this really is gorgeous! |
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Need help for image hosting so that I can hopefully share down the line. I was using photo bucket but it is now a pay service. Currently have items on deviant art but the images don't show on posts.
http://minnesotamom83.deviantart.com/art/River-Horse-with-refelction-740433025 |
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It looks amazing! However the horse could be sharpened a little. It doesn't seem like the central focus when you first look at it. |
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The smudging could be smoother and there could be more highlighting around the face... and the background could be blurred slightly to help "pop" the horse to the center of attention.
Also, the reflection doesn't really look like it would line up correctly in the back legs area.
But the main thing I'd work on is smoothing out the smudging and cleaning up the tail a bit.
All in all, this is a great start though! |
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Sunny
