Horse Eden Eventing Game
Horse Eden Eventing Game


Year: 192   Season: Fall   
$: 0
Forecast: Breezy and Pleasant
Forecast:
Tue 12:57pm  
Stables Online:  108 
Chatbox
Ivory Coast
12:50:10 
I love this buckskin -HEE Click-
Angels angels
12:48:02 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Yes
It is so much easier to find horses because I forget their names lol
Cadence Farms
12:47:32 evebot
I love the card view. I like seeing everybody's horses when I go to their stable.
Chromatic
12:47:29 Chrome/Prism/Rainy
Angel
Same, it's so nice to see all my pretties in one view
Angels angels
12:46:51 [1k+ brindles] Angel
The card view is one of my favorite additions in a while lol
Chromatic
12:44:15 Chrome/Prism/Rainy
The artwork on this game is top tier in general in my opinion <3
Angels angels
12:39:18 [1k+ brindles] Angel
What if we have tack ideas but don't want to draw it on the horse lol
Cadence Farms
12:37:51 evebot
Glad you guys like it! Our Artist did great!
Crestwood Eq.
12:37:31 Ivy / poison ivy
I must go now! Ta Ta
Snitches' Stitches
12:35:33 Snitch
New favorite background just dropped omg. My childhood dream right there
Crestwood Eq.
12:33:39 Ivy / poison ivy
Ohhhhhh
Sunfeather
12:33:29 SF
It is super pretty, the art team is so talented lol
Bug in a Rug
12:32:42 Bug | Flea | KPH
on the news page lol
-HEE Click-
Crestwood Eq.
12:32:25 Ivy / poison ivy
Bug

??
Bug in a Rug
12:31:54 Bug | Flea | KPH
omfg the new background is stunning😍
Crestwood Eq.
12:31:28 Ivy / poison ivy
I'll take advice too lol
Bug in a Rug
12:30:47 Bug | Flea | KPH
prism
yes! It's actually pretty similar to AD, except with half the stats lol
I'm PM you<3
Angels angels
12:30:42 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Chrome
Sure pm me with any questions you have!
Chromatic
12:30:08 Chrome/Prism/Rainy
Is anyone willing to advise me on SD training/matching? I've searched the forums and I can't find any guides :(
Nightingales Ridge
12:29:11 Issy
🤤😍 yay

You must be a registered member for more
than 1 day before you can use our chatbox.



Rules   Hide
You are in: Main Chat
View Sales Chat
Quests
Horse Eden Eventing Game
Chatbox
Ivory Coast
12:50:10 
I love this buckskin -HEE Click-
Angels angels
12:48:02 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Yes
It is so much easier to find horses because I forget their names lol
Cadence Farms
12:47:32 evebot
I love the card view. I like seeing everybody's horses when I go to their stable.
Chromatic
12:47:29 Chrome/Prism/Rainy
Angel
Same, it's so nice to see all my pretties in one view
Angels angels
12:46:51 [1k+ brindles] Angel
The card view is one of my favorite additions in a while lol
Chromatic
12:44:15 Chrome/Prism/Rainy
The artwork on this game is top tier in general in my opinion <3
Angels angels
12:39:18 [1k+ brindles] Angel
What if we have tack ideas but don't want to draw it on the horse lol
Cadence Farms
12:37:51 evebot
Glad you guys like it! Our Artist did great!
Crestwood Eq.
12:37:31 Ivy / poison ivy
I must go now! Ta Ta
Snitches' Stitches
12:35:33 Snitch
New favorite background just dropped omg. My childhood dream right there
Crestwood Eq.
12:33:39 Ivy / poison ivy
Ohhhhhh
Sunfeather
12:33:29 SF
It is super pretty, the art team is so talented lol
Bug in a Rug
12:32:42 Bug | Flea | KPH
on the news page lol
-HEE Click-
Crestwood Eq.
12:32:25 Ivy / poison ivy
Bug

??
Bug in a Rug
12:31:54 Bug | Flea | KPH
omfg the new background is stunning😍
Crestwood Eq.
12:31:28 Ivy / poison ivy
I'll take advice too lol
Bug in a Rug
12:30:47 Bug | Flea | KPH
prism
yes! It's actually pretty similar to AD, except with half the stats lol
I'm PM you<3
Angels angels
12:30:42 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Chrome
Sure pm me with any questions you have!
Chromatic
12:30:08 Chrome/Prism/Rainy
Is anyone willing to advise me on SD training/matching? I've searched the forums and I can't find any guides :(
Nightingales Ridge
12:29:11 Issy
🤤😍 yay

You must be a registered member for more
than 1 day before you can use our chatbox.






Refresh


Forums

→ Horse Eden is a fun game! Sign Up Now!

My Subscriptions
My Bookmarks
My Topics
Latest Topics
Following

Forums > Art Shops > Art Help
   1 

Critique on Latest Piece December 30, 2018 07:27 PM


Keeper of the Lost
 
Posts: 1749
#288631
Give Award
https://i.ibb.co/vLtNgVT/Roan-on-cliff.jpg

Just made this and looking for opinions on strong points & weak points. Maybe some suggestions on how to make a more realistic look?
Perhaps a price?

Quality is so bad now that I look at it.. Sorry about it looking blurry. Didn't look like that in PS.

Edited at December 30, 2018 07:28 PM by Keeper of the Lost
Critique on Latest Piece December 31, 2018 10:39 AM

Former Stable
 
Posts: 0
#288940
Give Award
The biggest weakness I can see is the lack of shadows. Regardless of how cloudy a day is, there's going to be a bit of shadow under the horse. He also ought to have a bit of shade on his hooves and legs where they're going into the grass. From here, his hair looks nice, but the lack of shadows makes it so he doesn't really fit into the background. I would also recommend playing with the colors a bit to match him into the background better.
Critique on Latest Piece January 1, 2019 12:45 AM


Keeper of the Lost
 
Posts: 1749
#289429
Give Award
Very helpful, thank you. :)

This is my newest piece, where I used advice from people.
https://i.ibb.co/Y225XTV/Purple-Sky.jpg
Critique on Latest Piece January 1, 2019 01:04 PM

Former Stable
 
Posts: 0
#289877
Give Award
This looks great! Here are a few of my critiques :)

- Pay attention to the lighting in the BG and on the horse. Right now the lighting does not match which is throwing the whole piece off. Since the lighting doesn't match, the shadow is very out of place. If you flipped the horse, made the shadow softer, moved it more under the horse and then lower the opacity on it, it would look much better and everything would fit in just a bit more ;)

- Don't be afraid to play around with Colour Balance. The BG has some intense purples and pinks but the horse is lacking that especially in the shadows of the horse (not the shadow on the ground) and in the markings.

- I'm not sure if you found the BG like this or not, but that left corner has a little too much contrast compared to the rest of the image. If you added that on a different layer, try lowering the opacity or choosing a different layer setting.

- Your mane and tail repainting looks great! However I would try adding more fly aways to give it a more natural, softer look.

Overall, great job! ;D

Edited at January 1, 2019 01:04 PM by Trinity Equine
Critique on Latest Piece January 1, 2019 01:31 PM


Tranquility
 
Posts: 4529
#289899
Give Award


Trinity Equine said:
This looks great! Here are a few of my critiques :)

- Pay attention to the lighting in the BG and on the horse. Right now the lighting does not match which is throwing the whole piece off. Since the lighting doesn't match, the shadow is very out of place. If you flipped the horse, made the shadow softer, moved it more under the horse and then lower the opacity on it, it would look much better and everything would fit in just a bit more ;)

- Don't be afraid to play around with Colour Balance. The BG has some intense purples and pinks but the horse is lacking that especially in the shadows of the horse (not the shadow on the ground) and in the markings.

- I'm not sure if you found the BG like this or not, but that left corner has a little too much contrast compared to the rest of the image. If you added that on a different layer, try lowering the opacity or choosing a different layer setting.

- Your mane and tail repainting looks great! However I would try adding more fly aways to give it a more natural, softer look.

Overall, great job! ;D


^^

I also think you hooves could use a little more grounding work. (if you know what I mean)
Critique on Latest Piece January 1, 2019 03:51 PM


Keeper of the Lost
 
Posts: 1749
#289982
Give Award
https://i.ibb.co/CH94GKx/Purple-Sky-edit-FINAL.jpg

I like this.. Thanks for the tips!

Forums > Art Shops > Art Help
   1 

Refresh