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Fluffy's Cosy Home
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BlueBirdFalls
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BBF Haver EWW KNN
Proven Wc producer, Always starts on the LBs! Would do really well with a decent mare!
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ShiningStar Stables
01:54:32 Chey / Star
WWW SHLB+ABLB stallion for sale. Prices negotiable
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WWW producing WWW TB Mare for offers
-HEE Click-
Silver + Tobi EWW TB mare for offers
-HEE Click-
MakeEm Fancy
01:44:15 Ally 💜
EEE+ fillies and colts
-HEE Click-
Amethyst Ranch
01:30:39 Echo <3
Taking offers on this WWW AA mare.
-HEE Click-
Insignia Elites
01:24:17 Em
EWW SH Stallion for stud! WWW producer! Best with dressage strong mares! -HEE Click-
The Lazy Ninja
01:22:35 Jessie
Wild SWE TB mare 5k will lower
-HEE Click-
Metla
01:19:32 
Horses for sale, mostly yearling geldings PPP-WEE combos

-HEE Click-
Fluffy's Cosy Home
01:14:08 Fluffy
Auction:
*World Class
*PEE combo
*Brindle
*Chimera
-HEE Click-

I have:
*WWW/WW Straws
*Studs
*Items in my store
*Decors
*Sale horses
-HEE Click-

Magic Horses
01:12:52 Magic
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WWW mare for auction

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EEE mares for sale
BlueBirdFalls
12:59:10 Blu
BBF Haver EWW KNN
Proven Wc producer, Always starts on the LBs! Would do really well with a decent mare!
up for 1k
-HEE Click-
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Broods:
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Sales:
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Sweet Valley
12:56:31 I Buy Brindles!!!!!!
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Critique And Pricing Help February 7, 2019 07:53 AM


Golden Hall Stables
 
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I would like some critique on my two most recent pieces. This includes techniques, lighting, price, etc. Anything is helpful.
I am currently asking for 40k for these, is that too much or just right?
#1
https://i.postimg.cc/NjGTX7qZ/Fire-Foot-Avatar.png
#2
https://i.postimg.cc/W3Jws5XR/Zipzuka-s-Commission.png


Edited at February 11, 2019 08:49 AM by Golden Hall Stables
Critique And Pricing Help February 7, 2019 06:17 PM

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I think you're really talented! That being said, the horses are really big compared to the backgrounds, I'm not sure if that's something you're going for. In addition, I'd work on connecting the feet to the ground. The flames on the first one's feet in particular look a bit off and aren't giving off the light I'd expect them to.
Critique And Pricing Help February 8, 2019 09:09 AM


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The horses are big in the background because they are cut into horse avatars. I didn't have them that big initially.
Critique And Pricing Help February 11, 2019 05:20 PM


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Does anyone else have any more critique?
Critique And Pricing Help February 13, 2019 05:05 AM

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(Still in love with the piece you did for me by the way!)

I noticed this while looking through your art, and the three things I'm really picking up on is the grounding, the mane and tail, and sometimes the coat

With the grounding, I just feel like the hooves always look like they're floating a bit? Like what White Crown said, they look disconnected and feel very different from the rest of the piece. Maybe try shading the hooves a bit on the front more? Or erasing parts to make it look like things are in front of the horse. Also, with the flames, maybe add a glow on the ground directly underneath the flames to make it more connected.

The mane and tail sometimes look very solid. Like the entire thing is just a block of hair and drawing, and highlighting and shading? It just seems very strange to me at times, especially in brighter lighting in some pieces. Try adding some fly-aways or trying to make larger chunks of hair fall away from the general shape. I noticed this mostly in the tails, by the way.

With the coat, it looks over-smudged sometimes. I do that when I do art, and I just do the smudging on another layer, then turn the opacity of that layer specifically down so the coat underneath shines through a bit more.

I know this was long, and I'm sorry, but I just had to (I still adore your art by the way. The way you do patterns and markings is incredible!)
Critique And Pricing Help February 13, 2019 07:54 AM


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