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Insignia Elites
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Cherry Creek Ranch
09:45:40 CCR
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EWW RID, will accept offers
no water
09:42:46 
looking to buy a one month upgrade, pm me!!
Campbell Equestrian
09:29:46 Hails
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Top LB KNN stallion for sale! I have too many so send me an offer
Ashcroft Park Stud
09:09:28 Ash
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Pretty WWW for just 100k
Port Royal Equines
08:51:53 ISO Brave EWW ISH
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EEE+broods for 1k. Check my barns for more!

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ISH sires. ABLB, LB, Undebuted.
Haunui Lakes
08:14:37 Carmack ^.^
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All must go! Inc WWWs very cheap SB
Blossom Eventing
07:53:38 #blossomsuccess
This Auction is Hot and ends in 4hrs>
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>Brindle EEE RID Mare
>EWW RID Stallion
>Mares EEW combos AA, RID, and WB

Don't miss out on a chance for some super pretty horses.
MakeEm Fancy
07:40:12 Ally 💜
EWW filly 80k
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Spunky Sport Horses
07:37:28 Poof
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WEE/EWE
Cheap got wrong breed lol

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Insignia Elites
09:48:38 Em
Would love some help with my matches! Looking for suggestions on items and critiques! -HEE Click-
Cherry Creek Ranch
09:45:40 CCR
-HEE Click-
EWW RID, will accept offers
no water
09:42:46 
looking to buy a one month upgrade, pm me!!
Campbell Equestrian
09:29:46 Hails
-HEE Click-

Top LB KNN stallion for sale! I have too many so send me an offer
Ashcroft Park Stud
09:09:28 Ash
-HEE Click-

Pretty WWW for just 100k
Port Royal Equines
08:51:53 ISO Brave EWW ISH
-HEE Click-
-HEE Click-
-HEE Click-
EEE+broods for 1k. Check my barns for more!

-HEE Click-

-HEE Click-
ISH sires. ABLB, LB, Undebuted.
Haunui Lakes
08:14:37 Carmack ^.^
-HEE Click-

All must go! Inc WWWs very cheap SB
Blossom Eventing
07:53:38 #blossomsuccess
This Auction is Hot and ends in 4hrs>
> -HEE Click-
>Brindle EEE RID Mare
>EWW RID Stallion
>Mares EEW combos AA, RID, and WB

Don't miss out on a chance for some super pretty horses.
MakeEm Fancy
07:40:12 Ally 💜
EWW filly 80k
-HEE Click-
Spunky Sport Horses
07:37:28 Poof
-HEE Click-

WEE/EWE
Cheap got wrong breed lol

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Critique And Pricing Help February 7, 2019 07:53 AM


Golden Hall Stables
 
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I would like some critique on my two most recent pieces. This includes techniques, lighting, price, etc. Anything is helpful.
I am currently asking for 40k for these, is that too much or just right?
#1
https://i.postimg.cc/NjGTX7qZ/Fire-Foot-Avatar.png
#2
https://i.postimg.cc/W3Jws5XR/Zipzuka-s-Commission.png


Edited at February 11, 2019 08:49 AM by Golden Hall Stables
Critique And Pricing Help February 7, 2019 06:17 PM

Former Stable
 
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I think you're really talented! That being said, the horses are really big compared to the backgrounds, I'm not sure if that's something you're going for. In addition, I'd work on connecting the feet to the ground. The flames on the first one's feet in particular look a bit off and aren't giving off the light I'd expect them to.
Critique And Pricing Help February 8, 2019 09:09 AM


Golden Hall Stables
 
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The horses are big in the background because they are cut into horse avatars. I didn't have them that big initially.
Critique And Pricing Help February 11, 2019 05:20 PM


Golden Hall Stables
 
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Does anyone else have any more critique?
Critique And Pricing Help February 13, 2019 05:05 AM

Former Stable
 
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(Still in love with the piece you did for me by the way!)

I noticed this while looking through your art, and the three things I'm really picking up on is the grounding, the mane and tail, and sometimes the coat

With the grounding, I just feel like the hooves always look like they're floating a bit? Like what White Crown said, they look disconnected and feel very different from the rest of the piece. Maybe try shading the hooves a bit on the front more? Or erasing parts to make it look like things are in front of the horse. Also, with the flames, maybe add a glow on the ground directly underneath the flames to make it more connected.

The mane and tail sometimes look very solid. Like the entire thing is just a block of hair and drawing, and highlighting and shading? It just seems very strange to me at times, especially in brighter lighting in some pieces. Try adding some fly-aways or trying to make larger chunks of hair fall away from the general shape. I noticed this mostly in the tails, by the way.

With the coat, it looks over-smudged sometimes. I do that when I do art, and I just do the smudging on another layer, then turn the opacity of that layer specifically down so the coat underneath shines through a bit more.

I know this was long, and I'm sorry, but I just had to (I still adore your art by the way. The way you do patterns and markings is incredible!)
Critique And Pricing Help February 13, 2019 07:54 AM


Golden Hall Stables
 
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