Horse Eden Eventing Game
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Angels angels
07:56:43 [1k+ brindles] Angel
I was doing quest breeding lol
Lilac Fields
07:54:19 Lillie
cool angel
Angels angels
07:51:56 [1k+ brindles] Angel
-HEE Click-
Oh wow *.*
Vancouver
07:27:05 Ana / Van
Woops, turned*
Vancouver
07:26:26 Ana / Van
-HEE Click-
This one :P
Vancouver
07:25:43 Ana / Van
Min
I had a girl like that, she turnen out Average xD
DearBorn Ranch
07:12:13 Louise
that is always so sad lol
ArcticLights
07:12:03 Ceci / (Call me) AL
Or she will go all the way and be a sub
Minerva
07:10:59 Min
-HEE Click-

This pony has done 50 moves without spooking at least 3 times- watch her finally spook tomorrow and turn out Superb 🤣🤣
Hy Brasil
07:06:12 Croft
reroll on an all white sabino I like the frost in mane and tail! -HEE Click-
Embervale Acres
07:03:56 Solar Phoenix
Very nice!
Hy Brasil
06:58:05 Croft
his little brother coming up next month. They sure have badger face dialed in lol -HEE Click-
Angels angels
06:56:34 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Ohhh I love him *-*
Hy Brasil
06:55:57 Croft
this is her dad -HEE Click-
Hy Brasil
06:55:29 Croft
guess my freshman did not do too bad :)
Red Horizon Ranch
06:52:11 Red
Ohh yeah she’s gorgeous Rivercreek
Hy Brasil
06:50:56 Croft
nice color -HEE Click-
Rivercreek Ranch
06:45:11 
-HEE Click-
She's so pretty but her rating has me devestated :((
Tamarack Mountain
06:17:25 Opal
get good show geldings, breed very little only your best quality pairings
South Rock Valley
05:30:59 
hi! I'm a returning player with no memory if this game... if you have any tips for starting out or breeding my mail is open!!

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Angels angels
07:56:43 [1k+ brindles] Angel
I was doing quest breeding lol
Lilac Fields
07:54:19 Lillie
cool angel
Angels angels
07:51:56 [1k+ brindles] Angel
-HEE Click-
Oh wow *.*
Vancouver
07:27:05 Ana / Van
Woops, turned*
Vancouver
07:26:26 Ana / Van
-HEE Click-
This one :P
Vancouver
07:25:43 Ana / Van
Min
I had a girl like that, she turnen out Average xD
DearBorn Ranch
07:12:13 Louise
that is always so sad lol
ArcticLights
07:12:03 Ceci / (Call me) AL
Or she will go all the way and be a sub
Minerva
07:10:59 Min
-HEE Click-

This pony has done 50 moves without spooking at least 3 times- watch her finally spook tomorrow and turn out Superb 🤣🤣
Hy Brasil
07:06:12 Croft
reroll on an all white sabino I like the frost in mane and tail! -HEE Click-
Embervale Acres
07:03:56 Solar Phoenix
Very nice!
Hy Brasil
06:58:05 Croft
his little brother coming up next month. They sure have badger face dialed in lol -HEE Click-
Angels angels
06:56:34 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Ohhh I love him *-*
Hy Brasil
06:55:57 Croft
this is her dad -HEE Click-
Hy Brasil
06:55:29 Croft
guess my freshman did not do too bad :)
Red Horizon Ranch
06:52:11 Red
Ohh yeah she’s gorgeous Rivercreek
Hy Brasil
06:50:56 Croft
nice color -HEE Click-
Rivercreek Ranch
06:45:11 
-HEE Click-
She's so pretty but her rating has me devestated :((
Tamarack Mountain
06:17:25 Opal
get good show geldings, breed very little only your best quality pairings
South Rock Valley
05:30:59 
hi! I'm a returning player with no memory if this game... if you have any tips for starting out or breeding my mail is open!!

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than 1 day before you can use our chatbox.






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Critique And Pricing Help February 7, 2019 07:53 AM


Golden Hall Stables
 
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I would like some critique on my two most recent pieces. This includes techniques, lighting, price, etc. Anything is helpful.
I am currently asking for 40k for these, is that too much or just right?
#1
https://i.postimg.cc/NjGTX7qZ/Fire-Foot-Avatar.png
#2
https://i.postimg.cc/W3Jws5XR/Zipzuka-s-Commission.png


Edited at February 11, 2019 08:49 AM by Golden Hall Stables
Critique And Pricing Help February 7, 2019 06:17 PM

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I think you're really talented! That being said, the horses are really big compared to the backgrounds, I'm not sure if that's something you're going for. In addition, I'd work on connecting the feet to the ground. The flames on the first one's feet in particular look a bit off and aren't giving off the light I'd expect them to.
Critique And Pricing Help February 8, 2019 09:09 AM


Golden Hall Stables
 
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The horses are big in the background because they are cut into horse avatars. I didn't have them that big initially.
Critique And Pricing Help February 11, 2019 05:20 PM


Golden Hall Stables
 
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Does anyone else have any more critique?
Critique And Pricing Help February 13, 2019 05:05 AM

Former Stable
 
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(Still in love with the piece you did for me by the way!)

I noticed this while looking through your art, and the three things I'm really picking up on is the grounding, the mane and tail, and sometimes the coat

With the grounding, I just feel like the hooves always look like they're floating a bit? Like what White Crown said, they look disconnected and feel very different from the rest of the piece. Maybe try shading the hooves a bit on the front more? Or erasing parts to make it look like things are in front of the horse. Also, with the flames, maybe add a glow on the ground directly underneath the flames to make it more connected.

The mane and tail sometimes look very solid. Like the entire thing is just a block of hair and drawing, and highlighting and shading? It just seems very strange to me at times, especially in brighter lighting in some pieces. Try adding some fly-aways or trying to make larger chunks of hair fall away from the general shape. I noticed this mostly in the tails, by the way.

With the coat, it looks over-smudged sometimes. I do that when I do art, and I just do the smudging on another layer, then turn the opacity of that layer specifically down so the coat underneath shines through a bit more.

I know this was long, and I'm sorry, but I just had to (I still adore your art by the way. The way you do patterns and markings is incredible!)
Critique And Pricing Help February 13, 2019 07:54 AM


Golden Hall Stables
 
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