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Got some nice 2yr colts for color breeding! They start at 3k go up 200, they WILL be insta freed if not bought

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12:21:17

EEW-EWW Combo mare and stallion auction ends tonight. Bidding just opened
-HEE Click-

Sky High Equine

12:20:04 Kidd

-HEE Click-
1o1 EEE SH stallion 10k obo

Cloverleaf Castle

12:06:33 KNN

New ABLB boy - Straws & LC available! -HEE Click-

12:01:20

Sales Barn, EWEs,EEEs,WC, brindle. Very flexible on pricing and open to offers. They're horses I just won't use.
-HEE Click-

12:00:55 Ivy / poison ivy

ISH*

12:00:43 Ivy / poison ivy

EEE TSH Freshie Stud for sale! -HEE Click-

Wild Wind Stables

11:57:39 Wind

All horses rated, even the colorful ones are mostly PPP or better

11:57:33 Will Buy Brindles!!

-HEE Click-
SD W Foals, EEE fillies, EWE combo Mares
1k-50k

All are of various breeds and colors will accept any offers on any just pm me!

Wild Wind Stables

11:55:21 Wind

Auction: Colorful foals -- including an EPE Brindle filly -- and some dependable show horses
-HEE Click-

11:51:22 Gothy

-HEE Click-
Got some nice 2yr colts for color breeding! They start at 3k go up 200, they WILL be insta freed if not bought

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March 25, 2019 02:45 PM

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Would love some critique on my most recent pieces.

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https://i.lensdump.com/i/WEW5xx.jpg

https://i.lensdump.com/i/WTfdVT.jpg

Also I currently have my prices set at 35k for a horse avatar, just wanted to know if you guys think thats too high.

Thanks.

Edited at March 25, 2019 03:02 PM by Zephyr Elites

March 25, 2019 02:58 PM

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Hmm I can't see anything that I personally think could be improved , very pretty art though! :)

March 26, 2019 12:43 PM

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For the first one, the horse looks like it's in blue or white light, while the background would be giving off orange/red light. The horse is also pretty light for the darkness of the background.

For the second one, I would work on adding shading to the mane and tail, because they don't look connected to the rest of the horse. I would also work on where shadows would be cast based on where the light is coming from.

March 29, 2019 04:30 PM

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I think the prices are fine. Keep practising and getting better!♡

April 5, 2019 12:51 AM

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Personally, I feel like the patterns on the first are too bright for the overall tone and lighting.The muzzle is also slightly blurred. I do love the movement of the tail on the second, very natural.

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