Horse Eden : Critique Please

10:04:02 Bird

You both bring up good points. I'm just trying to put my best foot forward.

10:02:47 Cloud

You are definitely not alone in disliking it.

Bioshock Manor

10:02:33 Storm

Honestly, be picky. Be what you want to find. Don't settle for someone just to not be alone

Kangaroo Studs

10:02:04 ZequineZ - ZZ

I’d love a sushi train date myself but everyone’s different, my boyfriend doesn’t like the idea of sushi either much as I want him to do with me and tell him he can get curry he’s just not into it lol no harm suggesting something else.

Also if this guy thinks poorly of you for supposed pickiness, thats on him not you

10:01:59 Bird

It's very popular around here. I have gotten many gasps of horror when saying I don't like it.

Bioshock Manor

10:01:46 Storm

Won't catch me on a sushi date

10:01:05 Cloud

Yes, it's not a universal favorite. Many people are opposed to it.

10:00:32 Bird

Why is it bold? Because some people don't like it?

09:59:45 Cloud

Yeah sushi is pretty bold choice for a first date lol

Narran Park

09:58:46 Sting

Nah, be honest with him.
Sushi isn't your thing. No Biggie :)

I wouldn't like to go to a Sushi place for a date either. Maybe a raincheck?

Gypsy Family Farm

09:56:54

@Bird- not if there is sushi involved! Guy? What guy? Pass the fish.

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10:10:59 Crowley

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10:09:06 Storm

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10:07:32 Crowley

Dog says bed time....

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10:07:13 Storm

Mythy

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10:06:57 Prag/Liz

Lol

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10:04:42 Crowley

Stormy with a chance of meatballs.

10:04:02 Bird

You both bring up good points. I'm just trying to put my best foot forward.

10:02:47 Cloud

You are definitely not alone in disliking it.

Bioshock Manor

10:02:33 Storm

Honestly, be picky. Be what you want to find. Don't settle for someone just to not be alone

Kangaroo Studs

10:02:04 ZequineZ - ZZ

10:01:59 Bird

It's very popular around here. I have gotten many gasps of horror when saying I don't like it.

Bioshock Manor

10:01:46 Storm

Won't catch me on a sushi date

10:01:05 Cloud

Yes, it's not a universal favorite. Many people are opposed to it.

10:00:32 Bird

Why is it bold? Because some people don't like it?

09:59:45 Cloud

Yeah sushi is pretty bold choice for a first date lol

Narran Park

09:58:46 Sting

Nah, be honest with him.
Sushi isn't your thing. No Biggie :)

I wouldn't like to go to a Sushi place for a date either. Maybe a raincheck?

Gypsy Family Farm

09:56:54

@Bird- not if there is sushi involved! Guy? What guy? Pass the fish.

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August 20, 2019 08:00 PM

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New ones

https://i.postimg.cc/HxjZHKVz/DE56-D190-08-A0-459-B-977-F-E5-D27-C1-C0-C66.jpg

https://i.postimg.cc/3R6LwBGT/231-C5429-2621-4-CED-AC53-E77-B38177-F15.jpg

Edited at August 20, 2019 08:00 PM by Raindrop Ridge

August 31, 2019 07:17 PM

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Even more new ones

https://i.postimg.cc/sxx0vNS6/5411-CEE4-683-F-417-A-9-A35-598054-E49822.jpg

https://i.postimg.cc/P5YVpZpj/726-A30-D0-E880-4-A35-B648-BE557-EB5077-C.jpg

https://i.postimg.cc/zv4p3Xqv/B1-DC0-AD1-E38-B-40-C4-BDB8-2-D4-F5-BD602-EC.jpg

August 31, 2019 07:35 PM

Aussie Wattles

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They look a lot better!

They do still look kinda like a blob on the ground though. Thing about where the lights coming from and the shape of the horse. Looking at RL photos as well as others art can help give you an idea of where shadows should be. Make sure your edges are nice and soft. The hardness and the darkness/lightness of a shadow will vary between pieces.

Overall it just takes a lot of practice.

What device do you use for your art?

September 1, 2019 02:02 AM

TheTriggeredHipster

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Hey Raindrop!

My best critique would be to work on realistic shadowing, like others have suggested. Your shadows are off to a great start! They are just too dark and too shapeless at the moment.

These DA tutorials might help!

https://www.deviantart.com/lady-entice/art/Shadow-tutorial-186362600

https://www.deviantart.com/xxsanuk/art/shadow-tutorial-for-GIMP-173291036

I would also make sure that your subject and background are well matched (size-wise). The second horse (the bay on the wood pier) stands out the most for me. He is pretty tiny, compared to the wood planks. :)

Otherwise, you do a pretty good job of finding stock with decent matching lighting/coloration to your backgrounds. Keep practicing! So many things come from just trying new things. <3 You are on your way.

September 1, 2019 10:05 AM

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Thanks Trigg and Aussie, IÂ’ll try that next time, I think itÂ’ll really help.

Aussie, I use my iPad, but sometimes my Computer.

September 1, 2019 07:06 PM