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05:00:22 Centura

angel
thanks, is there a easy way to get onto it?

Angel Warmblood Stud

05:00:03 Angel

Freshman is possible centura

04:53:29 Centura

-HEE Click-
is there any leaderboard this guy could make it onto?

04:41:21 | Eve

ohh a wild bay -HEE Click-

Guard Horseman Gang

04:36:09 Chaos, GHG

You can still see the color underneath though

Guard Horseman Gang

04:35:44 Chaos, GHG

I did the lens of time and the adult image for him was surprising to me
-HEE Click-

Red Willow Stables

04:32:43

aww i love his amber eyes

04:30:48 DL

-HEE Click-
That sooty *-*

04:16:36 RIP-Tim:2016-26

04:15:33 Centura

-HEE Click-
still getting over the shock of breeding her

Looking Glass Stable

04:09:06 Glass

Why thank you! It was made by the very talented Jello for my featured horse. I dont know if I'll ever change it lol

04:07:17 DL

Glass
Yes, she would be perfect *-*
Also, your stable set is just amazing :>

Looking Glass Stable

04:06:28 Glass

Thanks DL! I'm such a sucker for her color lol. Throw in a Pearl, and she'd be perfect to me ♡

04:05:03 DL

Glass
Ohh, shes pretty <3

Looking Glass Stable

04:04:34 Glass

-HEE Click-
Oh, I almost missed the green eyes on this one! Nice ♡

Angel Warmblood Stud

03:51:06 Angel

Indeed, i love it XD

Looking Glass Stable

03:49:54 Glass

Cute foal, Angel. That version of homozygous dun can be so pretty to see ♡

~Emerald Acres Stud~

01:58:04 |Swifty|

Boulder-
Now that's something I haven't heard about for a long time.

Angel Warmblood Stud

01:55:17 Angel

-HEE Click-
Ohh gorgeous baby boy XD

01:40:57

I have no idea why - but I just watched someone go over every episode of Horse Land.

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05:00:22 Centura

angel
thanks, is there a easy way to get onto it?

Angel Warmblood Stud

05:00:03 Angel

Freshman is possible centura

04:53:29 Centura

-HEE Click-
is there any leaderboard this guy could make it onto?

04:41:21 | Eve

ohh a wild bay -HEE Click-

Guard Horseman Gang

04:36:09 Chaos, GHG

You can still see the color underneath though

Guard Horseman Gang

04:35:44 Chaos, GHG

I did the lens of time and the adult image for him was surprising to me
-HEE Click-

Red Willow Stables

04:32:43

aww i love his amber eyes

04:30:48 DL

-HEE Click-
That sooty *-*

04:16:36 RIP-Tim:2016-26

04:15:33 Centura

-HEE Click-
still getting over the shock of breeding her

Looking Glass Stable

04:09:06 Glass

Why thank you! It was made by the very talented Jello for my featured horse. I dont know if I'll ever change it lol

04:07:17 DL

Glass
Yes, she would be perfect *-*
Also, your stable set is just amazing :>

Looking Glass Stable

04:06:28 Glass

Thanks DL! I'm such a sucker for her color lol. Throw in a Pearl, and she'd be perfect to me ♡

04:05:03 DL

Glass
Ohh, shes pretty <3

Looking Glass Stable

04:04:34 Glass

-HEE Click-
Oh, I almost missed the green eyes on this one! Nice ♡

Angel Warmblood Stud

03:51:06 Angel

Indeed, i love it XD

Looking Glass Stable

03:49:54 Glass

Cute foal, Angel. That version of homozygous dun can be so pretty to see ♡

~Emerald Acres Stud~

01:58:04 |Swifty|

Boulder-
Now that's something I haven't heard about for a long time.

Angel Warmblood Stud

01:55:17 Angel

-HEE Click-
Ohh gorgeous baby boy XD

01:40:57

I have no idea why - but I just watched someone go over every episode of Horse Land.

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October 16, 2019 08:45 PM

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I'm not done yet, but any thoughts, advice, critiques, whatever on this?

https://i.postimg.cc/xjFcGg7c/sketch1571276177472.png

Edited at October 16, 2019 08:46 PM by Ankou

October 16, 2019 08:50 PM

Jellos Warmbloods

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It looks really nice so far!

I love your muscle structuring in the shoulder.

My only critiques would be the neck ties in very high it should ideally connect right above the middle line in the breast area. And the head and neck look significantly too small for the rest of the body.

But accurate proportions will come with practice. :)

October 16, 2019 09:01 PM

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Thanks so much for your help! I seriously think I have a HUGE problem with the head and neck compared to the body. At least now I have a new area to focus on next time I draw. :)

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