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Heyy guys I'm currently trying to get back into art and I'm trying to find my own style. I think I'm getting there but I'm not completely happy with my work. I can't put my finger on what it could be. The pieces below are more realistic pieces and I'm going to try working on more fantasy-like pieces to see if that helps me improve. Anyways I'm getting off track. I'm just looking for a few people to hardcore critique my art so I can try and improve to the point I'm comfortable and happy with my work :) Examples: (newest one where i've found my style ^^) |
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Hey first of all I have to say that your art is soo incredible beautiful that I hate my own artwork now. XD But you wanted some hardcore critics sooo I try my best.^^ For the first I think the shoulder is a bit too extrem on the right side, the stomach is a bit too big, the eye is a bit big and high and I think I would change the fine lines into a darker colour.^^' For the second one I would only change the fine lines into a darker colour.^^ And for the last one I think the lines at the legs and the stomach are a bit too light and the stomach is a bit too high. The backgrounds are always incredible. <3 I hope I could help you and I wasn't too harsh.^^' I really like your artwork. <3 |
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Thank you so much I really apperciate it! Not too harsh at all <3
Werty said:
Hey first of all I have to say that your art is soo incredible beautiful that I hate my own artwork now. XD But you wanted some hardcore critics sooo I try my best.^^ For the first I think the shoulder is a bit too extrem on the right side, the stomach is a bit too big, the eye is a bit big and high and I think I would change the fine lines into a darker colour.^^' For the second one I would only change the fine lines into a darker colour.^^ And for the last one I think the lines at the legs and the stomach are a bit too light and the stomach is a bit too high. The backgrounds are always incredible. <3 I hope I could help you and I wasn't too harsh.^^' I really like your artwork. <3
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