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EEW 1/2 filly Golden bay with splash frame frost appy 35k will lower
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EWW’s 30k each.

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EEE+ Wild AA Mares
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WEE 10k start
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The Lazy Ninja
03:22:33 Jessie
EEW 1/2 filly Golden bay with splash frame frost appy 35k will lower
-HEE Click-
Maleficents
03:21:27 Dona
EWW’s 30k each.

And some others , come take a look and see if you like something you see
-HEE Click-
Rising Stars Stable
03:17:20 Willow ~ AA Breeder
-HEE Click-
EEE+ Wild AA Mares
Red Roan & Champagne
Cozmic Elite
03:07:11 Z
YHH Auction
-HEE Click-
Ends Augest 20th
God is Mighty Stable
02:57:35 Willow ~ KNN Breeder
-HEE Click-
WEE 10k start
Port Royal Equines
02:42:53 Lvl 6+ Gelds 4 Sale
-HEE Click-
-HEE Click-
-HEE Click-
Anyone want these geldings?
Palais de Lys
02:39:30 
-HEE Click-
5 WWW-E rid straws available.
Blueberry Ledge
02:35:46 
-HEE Click-

Would anyone want to trade for some WEE+ combo PON mares?
Sunni
02:35:16 Sunni bunny
-HEE Click-
WWW SH colt for sale,
Dreamcatcher
02:27:10 
Foals for sale

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Critique for a Newbie! December 8, 2021 02:14 PM


Freesia Hill Estate
 
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So I've just started doing manips and by no means anywhere near perfect, but I thought I'd ask about my first completed piece. It's also a realllly big piece, so I'm already having trouble resizing it without losing most of the quality lol
Here it is:
https://postimg.cc/bZ9t7dLx
Critique for a Newbie! December 8, 2021 02:17 PM

The Golden Horse
 
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It's looks good! however i would proably thicken up the tail where it joins to the body. other than that it looks pretty good! I would ask somewhere between 15-50k for it
Critique for a Newbie! December 8, 2021 02:29 PM


Thistleberry Farm
 
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this is really well done for somebody new to art!
i have been doing manips on here for a while, so here is some advice <3
i feel like the horse is FAR too contrasted to the background, lower that contrast and up the brightness just a bit.
also if you understand how lighting works and if you are able to do that, it would be really nice to see a litthe bit of a lighter part around the horses back, because you can see in the background the sun shines through.
also it could be really nice to see some ripples in the reflection, you can do this by grabbing the smudge tool and setting it to high, and do some straight, curves or squiggly lines across the reflection to make it seem more realistic.
if you do all that, id say its probably worth 20-45k!
super well done, great job!
Critique for a Newbie! December 8, 2021 02:36 PM


Freesia Hill Estate
 
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Thank you so much guys!
Critique for a Newbie! December 8, 2021 02:42 PM


Over the Garden Wall
 
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The horse feels really flat/2D and I think adding a little rim lighting or some very soft highlights could really make a difference.
I'm borrowing CC Knabs' piece from the Official Critique thread for an example:
Critique for a Newbie! December 9, 2021 07:32 PM


Wolf Dancer
 
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Great job, Starting Bid should be around 10-15k and AB 30k-40k

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