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Alpine Acres
09:20:50 Lily
hey Angels!
Angel's Delight
09:20:15 
heyy chat!
Sleepwalker Centre
09:19:42 Walker
My car is just a wee sedan btw your bed is not staying up there
Sleepwalker Centre
09:19:18 Walker
I didn't scare you out of your bed???
Angels angels
09:18:06 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Lol you guys are terrible at this XD
I agree. I will stay
Insignia Elites
09:16:23 Em
Leaving bed just leads to disappointment xD
Minerva
09:15:00 Min
Nah bed's more comfy Angel xD
Sleepwalker Centre
09:14:56 Walker
picks up your bed and puts it on top of my car and drives away
Angels angels
09:11:50 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Someone convince me tl get out of bed
Snitches' Stitches
08:36:39 Snitch
Very cute thicc!
Thicc Acres
08:26:41 
& you're cute -HEE Click-
Thicc Acres
08:25:23 
Oh hey -HEE Click-
Insignia Elites
08:20:40 Em
I also need to learn more about the genetics
Insignia Elites
08:20:25 Em
Wow that's gorgeous! I need more colour in my barns xD
Kepler Wings
08:19:44 Dae
Em -HEE Click- he has silver and DD
Insignia Elites
08:15:00 Em
What does a silver double dun look like O.o
Snitches' Stitches
08:00:24 Snitch
Meanwhile I'm slowly trying to build an army of ZZ horses lol
Calela Eventing
05:20:25 Cali
Ru
Im still hunting a double dun never mind a silver double dun
Good luck!
Sagruesal
05:14:20 Ru
I'm still somewhat hunting a silver double dun, it exists but isn't easy to get.
Sagruesal
05:11:31 Ru
double duns are the best haha

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Alpine Acres
09:20:50 Lily
hey Angels!
Angel's Delight
09:20:15 
heyy chat!
Sleepwalker Centre
09:19:42 Walker
My car is just a wee sedan btw your bed is not staying up there
Sleepwalker Centre
09:19:18 Walker
I didn't scare you out of your bed???
Angels angels
09:18:06 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Lol you guys are terrible at this XD
I agree. I will stay
Insignia Elites
09:16:23 Em
Leaving bed just leads to disappointment xD
Minerva
09:15:00 Min
Nah bed's more comfy Angel xD
Sleepwalker Centre
09:14:56 Walker
picks up your bed and puts it on top of my car and drives away
Angels angels
09:11:50 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Someone convince me tl get out of bed
Snitches' Stitches
08:36:39 Snitch
Very cute thicc!
Thicc Acres
08:26:41 
& you're cute -HEE Click-
Thicc Acres
08:25:23 
Oh hey -HEE Click-
Insignia Elites
08:20:40 Em
I also need to learn more about the genetics
Insignia Elites
08:20:25 Em
Wow that's gorgeous! I need more colour in my barns xD
Kepler Wings
08:19:44 Dae
Em -HEE Click- he has silver and DD
Insignia Elites
08:15:00 Em
What does a silver double dun look like O.o
Snitches' Stitches
08:00:24 Snitch
Meanwhile I'm slowly trying to build an army of ZZ horses lol
Calela Eventing
05:20:25 Cali
Ru
Im still hunting a double dun never mind a silver double dun
Good luck!
Sagruesal
05:14:20 Ru
I'm still somewhat hunting a silver double dun, it exists but isn't easy to get.
Sagruesal
05:11:31 Ru
double duns are the best haha

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Looking For Critiques/Tips October 6, 2017 08:28 AM

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hey ~ i'm somewhat new to making photomanip..s i tried to do it before and it was horrible so i went to watch tutorials and all that stuff..
and it improved but i still feel like it isn't perfect

so, what are your opinions ?

https://horseeden.com/horse.php?id=14374273

https://horseeden.com/horse.php?id=14374410
Looking For Critiques/Tips October 8, 2017 04:32 PM

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They both look pretty good but the thing that stood out to me most was the font you used. Using pre-installed fonts is a pretty common mistake with newer artists and unfortunately it can detract from the actual art. I find that these basic fonts are either generic or silly. The font you have used in these 2 pieces falls into the second category. I would suggest downloading at least 3-5 more unique or professional-looking fonts and vary which fonts you use for which pieces based on the mood of the art piece. This will really make the art you are making pop so much better :)
You can PM me at my main 85532 if you have any questions or anything :)
Looking For Critiques/Tips October 9, 2017 06:22 AM

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Oh I never thought about that ! Thanks !
Looking For Critiques/Tips October 21, 2017 11:02 PM


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The pieces are very good, but on the second one I would lower to opacity of the white lines that are on the horse.

Edited at October 21, 2017 11:02 PM by Freedom Ranch

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