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Abalone Stables
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Connally Stud
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Whispering Wood Barn
11:50:07 ~Whispy~
Needing Rerolls
Peacock Estate
11:11:35 Lily
-HEE Click-
2 hours left and still 3 peacocks without bids!
Invertia
11:08:14 Tia
-HEE Click-

Whole bunch of horses for sale, super cheap :D

(Also looking to purchase an upgrade of sorts)
Abalone Stables
11:00:38 Elite in all Breeds
Looking for a upgrade
Connally Stud
10:58:07 Senda
Sale tons of color!Most 1K
-HEE Click-
Eagles Peak
10:54:39 
Win Free SHLB Stud Straws: -HEE Click-
Cozmic Elite
10:40:19 Z
-HEE Click-
Selling stained glass horses
Speed
Intelligence
Movement
Fantasy Horses
10:09:30 Bravery + AD ISH
EEE ISH mare capture, only 6k OBO!
-HEE Click-
-
More horses for sale in my incoming barn, EEE and bravery. Highest price 1.8k!
-HEE Click-
-
Come check out my store! Coffee, seed, and more! Cheapest on the market!
-HEE Click-
pandemoniu_m
09:49:02 pheezy
-HEE Click-
Port Royal Equines
09:38:42 ISH Bravery 4 Sale!
-HEE Click-
Brindle

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Anyone want these girls?

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Critique and Worth December 4, 2017 07:03 PM


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https://orig00.deviantart.net/787e/f/2017/338/4/1/horse_in_water__by_midholly-dbvryz7.png
I recently did this piece and was needing some critique. As you can see manes are my struggle :) And also how much would be a good start price and all bid if I were to auction it?
Critique and Worth December 4, 2017 08:23 PM

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I think the mane is the best part, the body is too smoothed out to the point has no definition. The background is also too blurred in my opinion. I would suggest that if you're going to auction it that it be the size of an avatar, not rectangular like it is :)
Critique and Worth December 4, 2017 08:26 PM

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Perhaps more dodging/burning on the horse to give it shadows and highlights. The hair looks awesome. Also maybe the effect of water splashing in the stream as a trot would create quite a disruption on the surface. Maybe a reflection? Those can be a pain to do though
Critique and Worth December 4, 2017 10:53 PM


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Okay thank you for these tips of course size will be ajusted if I auction it and will definitely not blur the backroad so much next time and less smudging on the body as well 😀 I think I might give it a bit of a reflection as I felt like it needed something more in the water as well
Critique and Worth December 4, 2017 11:08 PM

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Also,too many sharp corners on the limbs.
I would try practicing cutting with a size 4 eraser.

Maybe add a super distorted reflection,and please,put the back right hoof on?

Edited at December 4, 2017 11:09 PM by Darkin

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