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Please offer me advice! Working on ibis paint with an iPad and stylus Recents from new to older: |
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Still looking for advice + pricing suggestions. Thank you :) |
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Edited at January 16, 2024 03:30 PM by Enoki Valley
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I'd definitely say you could be in low tier 1 :) The hair in piece 1 and 3 is amazing <3 |
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The only thing I notice that stands out to me is that your shadow placement is off. In the first piece the shadow should be more behind/to the right of the horse instead of straight on to the viewer because the light source is to the left of the horse. In your second piece (the lavender one) the shadow should be underneath the horse as I don't see a clear light source in the background. If you'd like I can draw a quick thing on the first one to show you how I find out where to place my shadows. Definitely agree with T1. It looks like you repaint your horses entirely for prep instead of smudging, so I'd start at 150k for a horse avatar and go from there. |
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I would personally pay 80-120k for your art if you can keep the quality of the first 3 examples. Also try adding more detail by defining muscles with light/dark lines. Hope this helps, love your work! |
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The Unknown said:
The only thing I notice that stands out to me is that your shadow placement is off. In the first piece the shadow should be more behind/to the right of the horse instead of straight on to the viewer because the light source is to the left of the horse. In your second piece (the lavender one) the shadow should be underneath the horse as I don't see a clear light source in the background. If you'd like I can draw a quick thing on the first one to show you how I find out where to place my shadows. Definitely agree with T1. It looks like you repaint your horses entirely for prep instead of smudging, so I'd start at 150k for a horse avatar and go from there.
I repaint the whole horse depending if I like the face or not lol.
I would love shadow advice - I can never place them right I think I just don't understand light xD |
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Sweetwater Creek said:
I would personally pay 80-120k for your art if you can keep the quality of the first 3 examples. Also try adding more detail by defining muscles with light/dark lines. Hope this helps, love your work!
Awesome thanks a million! I really neglect the bodies of my horses which is totally my bad |
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I personally would say high T2. I love the feel of them! But as stated above, the shadowing feels off for me. I like the lighting on the horse, some soft shadows would define them even more (if you haven't already). Along side the lack of definition in the body with muscles etc etc. but that's easily fixable with a chalk pen + a soft light layer (one for light another for shadows). I think if you could work on those two (happy to help where I can) you definitely would be T1 without a doubt :) |
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Really interested for critique and thought on this:  Based on this forum I tried to focus on muscling through the body. I hope I've improved a bit. |
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